In The Beginning
This is a story of unknown possibilities. This story dates back to the beginning of time. It all started on the plant called zelbeyo. There a race of people called the zellers. They where a loving race of people that care for each other. Through their love they gain power to fly and move object or teleport and others have the ability to control the elements.
Every five billion years there are two young twins born, these twins have the power to control light and dark. Together they control the balance of the universe. It came on the day the wife of raven had give birth when she gave birth to the first child their was a light brighter than anything it was so much light that the whole world had become the brightest plant in the world. Once the child was fully out then came another one but once he came out the plant turn back to normal. The mother was so tired that she couldn't stand up or move for five weeks.
The father gave his children there names the girl name was Aurora she had eyes has beautiful as the ocean they both had black hair she was the oldest one. Her brother name was Kevin who eyes where dark and cold seem like he was lonely. As the twin grew up the girl had many friends. Kevin was lonely and got in to many fights with people that thought he was weak and though that he should have never been born. One day Kevin sister Aurora had called him to come over. There she said that I would like you to meet my six best friends. Her first best friend name was Isabella she was smart and had brown eyes she was in a red shirt with blue pants.
The second one name was Emily she was happy all the time she had a sister name Victoria who was also Aurora best friend they where both wearing dress one was blue the other baby blue. The fourth best friends name Rebecca she had said hi but when she said it Kevin look at her she felt something weird that she never felt before Kevin walks up to her and said hi. When she look in his eye it was not cold it was warm homey like. The rest of them were afraid to walk up to him. Then came the day the world turn black everyone ran to the house of balance. There stood Aurora she said where is my brother know one knew she started to turn into a phoenix she was so bright that the world transform into a garden everyone went outside but then form another phoenix it was dark the white Phoenix touch the black one a voice appear.
It said I'm sorry sis my power increase I tried to hold it in but it was too strong I was trying to protect Rebecca from a dragon it was white and it shot out ice I form a shield it was strong but then she distracted me I felt her hand holding on me my power became strong It felt like I wasn't alone my power change form being alone to protecting the one person who I felt like I belong with. The dragon ran but I seen some one on it I can't tell who it was but the person had a cloak on it was red with a Symbol it was a line that was made in a broken form. Sis tells her family that she is inside of a shield sis I have to go she is calling me. The phoenix disappear the garden disappear they ask Aurora If she knew anything from the Phoenix she said that it was my brother he was protecting one of my friends from a dragon. Everyone look and their face look scared like a person was about to attack them.
"She asks what is it? "They said it is white fang a dragon of war see dragon are the protector they guided the yin and yang and we have to protect you two. Its an evil dragon that destroy its own brother and sister that why twin are born every five billion years. How did your brother defend against it?" She said "he use a shield. "They said the dragon must not be at its full power because it should have been able to break through it. They said was anyone with him? "I said yes my friend Rebecca she was being attack and he seen her he ran to her and broke out with a shield she was holding on to him and the shield began to gain power it change into strong shield when the earth went black that was my brother trying to protect Rebecca he had to make a shield an other one because the power after the dragon attack started to surge out of him." Then Kevin came in holding Rebecca hand she was leaning on his shoulder. Rebecca said "that she seen it and a person wearing black hair and a cloak spilt into two with the dragon one attack me the other ran away I was luck Kevin came and he protected me."
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