Hello Guys.
Here is my new story, i havent posted much yet as i wanted you all to get a feel for it.
Please let me know what you think. It would be greatly appreciated.
"Alice! Seriously?" I groan walking out of my bathroom in the barely there dress that my friend Alice forced me into. Turning towards my full length mirror I give the simple little black dress, little being a generous word, another once over, I sigh and try and tug it over my knee…a long shot as it stopped just under my bottom.
"What you look gorgeous, and would I as your best friend lie to you?" Alice in all her pixie glory jumps off my bed without even rumpling her own little blue dress. Impressive.
"Here" She grins handing me a pair of my red stripper platforms "it still amazes me how you can trip over nothing in flats, put on those eight inch heels you walk with the grace of a swan"
I laugh at her while putting the shoes on. She had a point, I was clumsy as hell but in heels I could run a marathon and be fine. Alice stands by my bedroom door rummaging in her bag before pulling something out and handing me a card.
"Belinda Potter?" I stare down at my fake id which says I'm 22. Alice's idea was everyone uses 21 for fake id's so 22 wont look as suspicious.
"Yeah, that way if in get to drunk and call you Bella, it won't matter" Alice shrugs grabbing our coats and pushing me out the door.
Scanning the crowed by the bar, I spot Jasper and give Alice a nudge. The pair had been dating for a few months although jasper was 3 years older then her, her Id came in handy. Good to know it worked. I couldn't believe how well they worked on the bouncers. Jasper broke away from the crowd he was with and embraced Alice like he hadn't seen her in forever before flashing me a grin and telling me to drink up.
Some time later, I started cutting through the dance floor in search of the ladies room. Man there was so man people here who didn't seem to get that I needed to .pee and should move. Suddenly I felt a pair of arms wrap around my waist then my back collide against someone's chest.
"Dance with me and save me from the creepy cougar to my left" Hello someone smells good. I took a glace to my left and saw some woman I guess was in her mid 40's dressed in some tight outfit looking really put out. I giggled and turned around to face the person holding me captive. Well hello gorgeous.
"Hi. I'm Edward" Said the guy with what can only be describe as sex hair. I got momentarily lost in his green eyes before I realized he just spoke to me.
"Oh I'm Bell…Belinda"