Yeah, I was bored out of my mind during study hall... I wanted to write a raikim story, but I didn't really want to write a whole oneshot cuz I was being lazy. So I thought, why not a poem? I've never been a big fan of poetry, but I decided to give it a shot. So I wrote this up, and here it is. Please read and review!
(And just so you know ahead of time, the poem's in Kimiko's POV)
FOR: rolliepollie44 and janey1097 - you guys are the BEST evah! I could go on and on about how awesome you two are but that'd take way too long so I'll keep it simple and just say thanks for being such great friends and reviewers! Hope you'll like this.
I Am In Love With Thee
His sparkling emerald eyes,
And his cocky, arrogant grin,
His dark, handsome figure,
And his lovely sun-kissed skin.
His always windswept hair,
Is a dazzling chocolate brown,
His face a goofy smirk,
Never once a frown.
I stand and watch him train,
Leaping through the course,
His moves are light and supple,
The wind his helpful force.
I cannot help but smile,
Gazing as he soars,
On the wings of air,
As often seen before.
And then he catches my eye,
And slowly walks over to me.
My heart flutters strangely,
As he smiles ever so gaily.
My breath is suddenly gone,
My body suddenly shaking.
My heart is suddenly leaping,
My heart he is taking.
He then sweeps his gaze,
Across my delicate shape,
And gives the slightest smirk,
That causes me to gape.
A blush travels up my face,
When he is ever so near,
A gasp escapes my lips,
And all is suddenly clear.
His fingers rake through my hair,
And I let out a happy smile.
His hands are cupping my face,
For the longest, sweetest, while.
His lips are soon on mine,
The feeling perfect and right,
His arms wrapped around me,
While the sky turned bright.
And then he pulls away,
Smiling gently down.
My heart is pounding wildly,
As he turns around.
Then he is gone.
And I can finally see.
I truthfully, ardently,
Am in love with thee.
So what do you think? Good, bad? Boring, what? My first attempt at a poem, so feedback is greatly appreciated! Thanks to all who review in advance!
xxFireWarriorxx