(AN: Hey guys! This is my first Naruto fic, so please be nice and be sure to tell me what you think when you're done. I admit it does start out a bit crappy, but I have a couple of ideas, and they are pretty cool. So I decided to share my ideas with the world, and… here we are. To tell you the truth I actually posted this a couple of days ago but I found a couple of problems in it, so I scrapped it and started again. In other words… this chappy was re-written.
By the way, if you want to submit you OC into my story then just put them into your review using the guide at the bottom. I intend to use only about 6 but don't worry; I may use the remainder of them as side characters or something. Anyway, I'm rambling now so I'll let you get on with the first chapter, just try to enjoy yourselves, okay?)
Warning: May contain foul language (Hidan), bloody themes (Hidan) and jutsu of mass dysfunction. Lol.
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone from the main cast of Naruto characters. I own the story and my OC's; Vaskar, Genos and Shane. That's it! Other OC's belong to their respective owners.
"So now you have to go and be lookout for the Hokage?" My spiky blonde haired team mate, Genos, asked me as we walked to Konoha's main gates.
"Yeah, that's what I was told." I replied calmly with a smile on my face, trying to cover up my disappointment. I was really hoping to do a mission with my two team mates today, but Lady Tsunade forced me into this.
"Why you?" This question was asked by the cyan haired boy on the other side of me. Shane's his name. And as usual, he doesn't say much.
"I don't remember" I shrugged. We drifted off into a comfortable silence which lasted about ten seconds until we came across the edge of the village, the gates. I turned to face my two friends for a few seconds before waving a "bye" to them both.
"See you guys later. If I'm not back in the afternoon then I'll be back tomorrow." They both nodded to me, with Genos waving back then they both turned around and walked back the way we came.
I turned myself around then walked along the dirt path for a bit. I took a sharp turn into the forest, and stared at my surroundings with mild interest. The clouds lazily drifted across the clear blue sky as the sun released a warm glow onto the world below. A slight breeze billowed through the forest green, picking up a variety of flower petals and taking them up to the branches of trees as if to give the illusion of the autumn season.
I like the wind.
The wind is so carefree, relaxing and calm; I wish I was like that. Just thinking about the wind and being able to feel it all around me just makes me feel happy. Why is the element of wind my favorite? Well, I guess it does have something to do with the fact that we need to breathe it in to survive, but I really like the feel of it flowing through my hair…
Oops, I haven't introduced myself yet, have I? Sorry.
My name is Vaskar and I'm a 10 year old Genin. I have spiky, white hair and strange black eyes with barely noticeable bags under them. I like to wear my favorite white coat which has a large collar, grey trousers and grey shoes. I usually wear my Konoha headband around my upper left arm. Other than those details, there isn't anything interesting about me… well, the permanent bags under my eyes are but that's besides the point.
The point is that I was forced to do a completely boring job and I had no say. It's not fair!
A Genin stood in the Hokage office, listening and occasionally nodding his head as Lady Tsunade gave him instructions for the day.
"-to let me know if there is anyone that looks suspicious. Do you understand, Vaskar?" Tsunade asked, pressing her fingertips together.
Vaskar nodded his head with an 'Uh huh' before asking, "Why do I have to do this?"
'Because no one else will.' The blond haired woman smiled softly as she instantly thought of a believable reason to get him to do this for her, "Because Vaskar, no one else could possibly handle this job better than you could."
When the boy heard that excuse, a huge grin threatened to throw his head off balance as he gave her a look that crossed between both being happy and being determined. "I won't let you down!" He quickly turned around and dashed out the door.
Okay, maybe I wasn't forced into it… but that's beside the point! I'm a Genin; I should be with my team mates doing crappy D-rank missions. Not here being lookout for a ninja that probably won't even appear. But why me though? And why couldn't one of the other more famous Genin groups do it?
See, the Hokage got told by a Chunin that an unknown shinobi was seen lurking around just outside of Konoha. So naturally, the Hokage sent a couple of us ninja to be lookout just in case, me included. But I really don't see the point of this. That Chunin must be a liar or must be looking for attention 'cause I haven't found any signs of rogue ninja activity, and I've been looking for awhile now. Whatever, I can probably get some training done.
I carried on walking, passing various trees before coming to a small clearing in the forest. Huh… How far away from Konoha am I? And when am I allowed to stop being a lookout, anyway?
"Wind style: Air bullet!" I exclaimed as I formed 5 simple hand signs and forcefully blew out a bubble of compressed air at a tree. The bubble completely missed and hit a bird on a tree branch, instantly knocking it through another tree branch, killing it. Oops. That wasn't meant to happen.
I laughed nervously as I formed 8 hand signs this time. "Wind style: Devastation!" I shouted, a huge arrow-headed gust of wind came directly from me and knocked a couple of trees over with the sheer force alone. Why is my stronger jutsu easier to control than my weaker one?
"Argh, damn it!" An unfamiliar voice shrieked. What the heck? Is someone else out here with me?
I ran in the direction of the noise and came across a person sprawled on the ground, rubbing their head. The person stood up with their back facing me.
"Who are you?" I asked, unconsciously clenching my fists. This person looked fairly strong, so if a fight was gonna happen between us, I needed to be ready for whatever.
The person turned around…
It gets better, don't worry. I have to start somewhere… Anyway, if you have any comments on how I can improve or any mistakes I've made, please let me know. If you wanna submit an OC use the guide below, and answer as thoroughly as possible. And remember, I'm only using 6 main OC's; others will probably be side characters. Later.
P.S. I may change minor details on you characters to suit the storyline… Yes, there's a plot, sheesh! Oh, and if you wanna create your own jutsu, that's fine with me. *Sigh's* I'm finally done.
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