Yeah I know it's not very long and probably very cruddy (MY WORD!) But I had to put it out there.
Also the second 'poem' on here is not finished so if anyone thought it to be revived send me an email and you can use it however you see fit.
I slit my wrist and scream inside,
And I hope to god I die this time,
The pain I feel is so damn real,
It makes me want to fall and kneel,
Yet standing I stay
For only for a day
To watch those who remain,
Be slaughtered and slain.
From this rope that hangs me high,
I feel myself start to die
And as I start to reminisce,
I cry for what I know I'll miss
Well, all done! Yes they are very emo and I don't care I was upset at the time so *sticks tongue out*
Anyway if you're in the mood and have enough time then please review but no flames because then I'll be forced to make fun of you.