Chapter-1 A Beginning's Cold End
Hey i'm a new writer and this is my first ever content so all criticism is welcome. Gotta improve somehow. Anywho, Zootopia and its characters belong to disney for some odd legal reasons. Pfft, not like their gonna read this.
All he saw was darkness. No light. No sound . Just darkness. Even with his night-vision and excellent hearing, he couldn't make out a thing. He knew he wasn't blind for he could see himself clearly. He knew he wasn't deaf for he could hear his shuddering breaths. Mental note, nothingness is pretty cold. He wasn't insane for he felt himself floating...wait. That shouldn't be happening. Maybe he was going insane. No, he knew he couldn't be. After what felt like half an eternity he found himself able to walk, though no ground was near his feet. He began walking, hoping to at least find something if not someone. The entire time he walked he felt, uneasy as if something was walked on and on. He reached for his phone but it wasn't there. In fact he wasn't wearing anything though it felt like he was fully clothed.
He looked all around but nothing was in sight. Until he saw it. It was the one thing every mammal feared. The one thing you never know what it is until you see it. The one thing he thought he would never see...DEATH. Until he saw it he couldn't believe himself. The one thing that made it crystal clear was the faint glow of bright white behind him. He couldn'd hide the truth from himself any longer… Nicholas Wilde was dead.
The figure approached him but stopped halfway. It must've been five feet away. All it did was extend a single hand. Nick was confused, it took him a while but once he pieced it together he came to the conclusion that he needed to give permission for his soul to be reaped. He was for some reason, not fearful of the encounter in fact, he felt like he should welcome the gesture, accept it. He wanted to let go. He slowly walked closer to the figure he can only assume is death and extended his left paw. Before it touched the cold hands of the creature his paw shot back hesitantly, but slowly extended out and took the hand of death.
The creature guided him towards the light. The tunnel seemed to get larger until he was close enough to see gold trimmed gates too big even for an elephant. Way to make a grand entrance i suppose. As he neared the almost blinding white light, he heard something, crying. He stopped. He knew those cries. They were more or less wails of agony. They were desperate, broken, and most of all, familiar. The only audible words from the cries were his name and "please come back". Worst of all, he knew who was making those heart wrenching sounds. His best friend, his partner, his mate. Judy Hopps.
Her cries were coming from darkness, the only thing behind Nick. He let his paw slip from the grasps of death. He started back to where he bagan. All he saw when he looked back was death staring him down with an extended hand and an expressionless posture. His name drew him away from the somehow comforting image and reminded him to go back, to find her, to stop her retreated back into nothingness and searched for the bunny he loved. No matter what was next. He could tell it was just beginning.
There you go. My first chapter. I fully intend to make the chapters longer and give more detail. Until then give me feedback and let me know what you think.