Death meets a shinobi

by ClapPer

I'm here with my very first poem in English! It's not my native language so I probably made some mistakes in grammar or lexical stuff but I want to share my poem with you. I'd like to know your opinion and see where I did my mistakes if you guys do not mind help me out. I hope this is not gonna be my last try to write some fiction stuff in English.

Death meets a shinobi, smiling,

"And what everything was for?"

He shrugs: her words made him grin,

"If there were anyone knowing that, darling..."

"You would not stop your war,"

She says and her scythe starts to spin.