Please tell me what you think, this is my first fic.
Notes:
Shiho is the Goddess of Judgment, and the Guardian of Wind. (Shiho of Wind and Judgment.)
Cagalli is the Goddess of Victory, and the Guardian of Fire.(Cagalli of Fire and Victory)
Miriallia is the Goddess of Order, and the Guardian of Earth.(Miriallia of Earth and Order)
Lacus is the Goddess of Peace, and the Guardian of Water.(Lacus of Water and Peace)
An angel was flying though the clouds, clutching a lilac staff about a meter long, it was beautiful in the sun, reflecting light off the golden metal butterflies and flower petals on top, blowing wildly, surrounded by wings of its own, outside the wavy circle, they were not metal, they were truly alive, representing the magic that was in use. However, the staff was only the start of the beauty; it represented the Guardian of Wind, the Goddess of Judgment, who was, breathtaking herself. Her soft lilac eyes the color of her staff, brown hair, shining bright in the sun, as she flew though the heavens. Her destination? The Portal of Agra; it was forbidden for a goddess guardian like her to enter the mortal realms, even though they would retain their status and power, they still took a physical form, there for, it led to confusion and chaos. As she alighted on the cloud of the portal she heard a call.
"SHIHO! DON'T!" It was she fellow guardians, Lacus of Water and Peace, Cagalli of Fire and Victory, and Miriallia of Earth and Order.
"Bye," was the soft whisper as she stepped into the portal…
As I said this is my first fic, please don't flame/bash me, I would appreciate criticism for things I did wrong, or could do better, thank you.