confusion
my first story hope u like it(:
Carefully i slip out of my shoes. derrick stands at my bed smiling at me. ugh i love him, i think.
hey massie, he said and then smiles like the sun.
i approach and he brings his lips to mine. we french kiss for a logn time and then he asks "can i try somethin?"
what?" i ask as he bites my lip.
oh god: he takes of my shirt and suddenly i have no shirt on. how?
"NO DERRICK I WANT TO STAY A VIRGIN!" he looks stunned and then walks away.
"leesh u there?" i type.
NO. she replies. HAHAHA.(:
"i have a problem"
WHAT?
"derrick is mad cuz i wont have sex with him"
alicia dooesnt respodn but then finally says HAVE SEX, THEN.
"no i won't i wanna stay pure"
DUDE IT DOESN'T HURT IT'S LIKE HUGGING BUT WET (haha glee reference).
massie stops im-ing alicia. no one understands.
"derrick i have to break up wit you."
"huh why?"
"obviously you don't care for me you only care about my body and sex well then go fuck someone else like claire lyons okay?"
i try not to cry but tears leave my eyes.
"good bye derrick."
"WAIT!" then derrick raelized he would do anything to get her back.
author note: hahaha cliffffy(: this is my first fanfiction story so PUH-LEASE review PLEASE and tell me what to fix and pleae tell me you liked it? i wanna be an author when i grow up hahaha.(: oh and check out a story by my friend valerie i dunno her pen name but she's REALLY GOOD.
k, love ya. ill update soon, promise!