My first fanfic.. please be nice!

First- new English fanfic

Warning : bad grammar , rate-m.. but this is just in case

Disclaimer:

Me :it's mine!

Conan : no! she didn't own us!

Kaito : no! co-chan's mine!

Me: he's no yours either! He's mine! *hugging conan tightly*

Kaito: aruma-chan! Let him go!

Me: conan is mine! Step back you stupid-pervert-magician!

Conan: stop hugging me! *pointing the watch to me**headshot!*

Me: I did own conan..*fainted*

Conan: don' . . !

Kaito: *hugging conan from behind** lifting conan*

Conan: I give up..

Kaito & conan : aruma-chan doesn't own us! Aoyama-sensei does!

Once upon a time.. in anoth- [wrong story dude..]

My fault.. at 07:00 night.. there is a boy watching a TV on living room..

"tadaima.." a magician said from the hall.

"okaeri.. kaito" the boy-with-glassess said

"co..nan.." kaito said hugging conan from behind

"well.. it's new.. usually you call me co-chan or shin-chan.."conan said struggling out from kaito's-strong-hold

"I'm so tired.."kaito said still hugging conan whle sit down on the couch [is it the right word?]

"so?" conan said giving up ..

"help me…"kaito said.. smirking behind conan.

Conan still silent..[ and shivering if you want to know] didn't know what to do

"help you with what?" conan said with i-don't-care tone

"with that pretty lips.." kaito.. however showing a slight rapist face before it's turning to Pokerface."d-din't you say that you're tired..?" blushing slightly.. conan was nervous when kaito's hand roaming [ wrong word?] his body.

"yeah.. I'm tired.." kaito said as he sniffing conan's hair..

'mm.. coffee..' kaito thought .. still sniffing conan and still adventuring conan's body..

"see? Wait.. you ARE tired because of what? You just come from agasa-hakase place.. you didn't do anything else from what I know.. nor a heist.."conan said looking up to see kaito's face.

And what a surprise.. conan seeing kaito's smirking face..

"I'm tired of waiting.." kaito said still smirking. "waiting of?" conan said confused..

"waiting for a right time to punish you.." kaito said with err.. rapist face?

"what did I do wrong?" conan said .

"the science lady said.. you were lying to her many times.." kaito said.

"I did? O-oh.. I did.." conan said.

"and.."kaito said showing a-jar-of-antidote

"what the!? You steal this from haibara!?" conan said.

'if he say yes I'll in haibara hands.. and if he say no.. haibara give it to him.. to punish me!' conan thought shivering.

" I didn't.. she give it to me.."kaito said.

Conan about to ran when a pair of hand holding him to stay..

Kaito put the pill into his mouth but didn't swallow it.. and kissing conan . so , conan is the one who swallow it.

After conan growing to shinichi..

Kaito letting the pokerface go to the hell for tonight.. and showing the creepiest face on kuroba kaito face ever..

A creepy-pervert-rapist-face

And.. voila! How is it? Bad? Good?

I told you already.. I'm from Indonesia.. but I'll start learning English!

RnR please!

Me : *waking up* mm.. where am i?

Conan: haahh.. about time..

Me : what happened? The story is done? Did I missed something?

Kaito: yup! And.. you missed the moment when I and shin-chan is.. you know..

Me:what!? I missed that really important moment?! *shock*

Conan : … whatever.. see you on next fanfic!

Me & kaito : yeah! See you! And don't forget the review and fav!