AC: Here's the prologue of my own story. After watching Evangelion, I decided to make one in an alternate universe, since I'm kinda bad in changing the original one. I'll try to follow up in the fight, but outside the battle against angel will be mostly different.
Angel speaking thought mind.
"Human speaking."
"-Radio, communication-"
"Book or computer information"
*Interruption from the present during the story*
Prologue: Tell us a story
The sky was blue; the plain was green with the herbs and the trees. Birds were singing and a few were flying in the sky. Near the plain, a titanic city was present with some building being immense and giant. One who looked at it might think a lot of people lived there, but it's not the case this time.
One being lied down on the plain, taking lots of space and looking in the sky with his black eyes. He evaded looking at the sun, he was blinding by his light before and he didn't want to look stupid, again.
Sound of children playing could also be heard at different frequency. Eventually, that sound ended and the being knew something was coming.
"Sachiel?"
The being moved his head and looked at the source of the voice.
What is it?
"Can you tell us a story?"
Again? I already tell you anything I know.
"No, you never told us about the angel war. You always invented story."
It's the white and black war. It is not for children. You are too young to hear it and you will learn it one day.
"We want to hear it from you. You were one of those who lived then."
Alright. I'll censor the most gruesome part. After all, I have to make it PG.
"Awesome!"
It all started around 20 years from now. The story didn't start by me, but another one with the fruit of life manifesting itself in another continent.
20 years ago
Two giant being were staring at each other's. One, covered with metal had a long and sharp knife ignited by a laser. It stared at the other one, a being that seemed to be made for of flesh. The metallic one was on top of the other one; it could be interpreted in a sexual way, but not with the knife so close to a big and red circle. They started at each other's silently. Inside the one in metal, a human with brown skin was looking through the camera at the fleshy one.
"What did you say accursed angel? You couldn't-"
I don't want to die.
"How can I- How is that possible?" the human shouted.
*Wait!*
Present
"Wait! wait! wait!"
Interrupting me already?
"You don't make sense. You start up way to far."
"Yeah. You start after a cool battle!"
I'm not the best at telling real-life story child.
Sachiel couldn't, but he would roll his eyes if possible.
Alright. Be glad that Flashback exists. I won't explain too much in this flashback. I don't want to spoil too much.
The children grunted and Sachiel chuckled at them.
Let's give you a flashback; it was 15 years before the beginning you already interrupted. I won't explain the second impact; I won't bore you out with it.
35 years ago *Flashback*
The Second Impact just hit the world. No one could really describe what happened.
Half of humanity had been destroyed by it. A young child wandered alone.
"Mommy! Daddy!" the child shouted.
He was a survivor of the impact, sadly, his family wasn't. The child continued searching for them when he saw a hole on the ground. He didn't stop in time and he felt in it. He rolled on the ground until his back his something hard.
"Urgh." The kid whined.
He wanted to cry, but he was afraid when he saw a giant orange thing in front of him. He backed away when he saw it. It was a big and oval thing, but he couldn't see inside of it. It looked like an egg, but it was a weird color for the kid. He watched it for a while. The egg didn't do anything.
He walked closer to the egg, curious about it. He couldn't see inside, but he was wondering what it was. He raised his right hand and he touched it. He suddenly felt pain in his hand. A white line appeared from the egg and entered in the heart of the kid. He backed away.
He breathed fast with his eyes widen. He turned around and he ran away. He leaved the egg alone; he never knew he made a soul contact with whatever was inside of it.
Later, an earthquake occurred and buried the egg, and it was never found until it hatched 15 years later.
15 years later (Still in the past 20 years ago)
The abandon land, where the egg was buried long ago started to shake. The sound of rock cracking could be heard until a bulky hand came out of the ground. It then put it on the ground and it pulled itself out of the underground. His body was heavy, but he didn't have any problem to pull himself out.
He was a giant and fat angel. His belly was large. He had black skin with white rib cage on his chest, except the red core at the middle of his chest. He had red bone spot on his shoulders, elbow and his knee. He had a skull face of a bull with short horns on it.
Even when he was only hatched, he already had an objective in mind, but he couldn't accomplish it, something was disturbing him, the black line he saw floating from his core. He walked at the direction of the line, finding what disturbed him.
Elsewhere, the humans were aware of the coming of the angel. They were in the control room of the American section of Nerv base.
They looked on the radar and they detected his presence.
"We detect a peak in the energy field in Ohio! We have no visuals yet, but it could be an Angel." a woman said.
"Okay. We have time to prepare a plan of attack! Ohio is deserted anyway," an older man spoke.
The older man was the general of the military in New New York. He's a man on the forty years with his gray and brown hair, his Caucasian skin and his blue eyes. He wore a brown uniform of the military with a hat.
"General!" a voice appeared in the control room.
A young man ran into the room. He was tall with brown skin short black hair and chocolate eyes. He currently wore a blue T-shirt with a brown short and sunglasses.
"What is it Antonio?" the general asked.
"You said an angel?"
"We haven't image yet. So we cannot confirm it," the general replied.
He then activated his communicator.
"Everyone! Level 2 battle station now!"
Antonio nodded and an alarm started to ring in the base.
"Wait!" the woman said.
"What is it?" the general asked.
"The energy is moving toward New New York!" she explained.
"Do we have a visual yet?" the general asked.
"No."
"Antonio! Prepare yourself. We will prepare to use the EVA-P!"
"Yes general!"
Antonio then ran at the command room.
"General! EVA-P is the prototype. It's not as performant as those in Tokyo-3!" the woman said.
"I know, but it's still the best weapon we got," the general looked at a man. "Ask the authorisation to bury the town."
"Yes general," the man said.
The angel walked at the source of the dark line. He didn't know what it was, but he felt attract by it.
What is that?
The Angel was asking that.
It cannot be father. It's not the white moon energy. The line is also dark.
He walked at the direction of New New York with this question in mind. He looked at the fruit of life.
This will be too long. I have to make ask before my siblings woke up.
He stopped walking and he started running. He made a dash at the direction of the city when a floating metallic sphere passed near him.
What is that? He asked as he looked at it.
"The drone reached his target. We received the image now," the man said.
"Send it in," the general ordered.
They imaged appeared and they saw the angel. Everyone gasped and they knew it was an emergency. They sat it running at their direction. He looked at the drone, but he didn't pay attention. He continued running at New New York.
"How long until he's here?" the general asked.
"At this rate, the estimation is around one hour." The woman said.
"Good. We will be ready," the general asked.
"General! We have received the authorisation to bury the city. The alert has been send. The city will be ready to bury in 20 minutes," the man announced.
"Good. How long until the EVA is ready?" the general asked.
"52 minutes and 32 seconds," the man said.
"That will be limit," the general replied. "Prepare the defense! Put the tanks into position and prepare the missile launcher now!"
"Yes general!"
The angel was now closed to New New York. He took 46 minutes to reach the place. When he was closed, he looked at the black line on his core. It went a little to the ground now. He knew that whatever he was searching was underground.
He heard a sound and he looked at the source of it. He didn't know what it was. If he'll know, it was tank in his ways, aiming at him.
I feel the light of the black moon in them. How? This planet is under the control of the white moon. They are trying to steal it to us!
Anger awoke in him. The presence of the black moon was an insult. The tank fired at him and it exploded on his body without damage. His skin was too solid to be damage.
Pitiful. Let's melt this up.
He opened his mouth and moved his head backward. He seemed to suddenly lose some fat from his stomach and a bubble appeared on his throat. His cheeks went bigger when he accumulated something inside of his mouth. He then opened it and he throw up an orange substance at the tank and when it hit it, it melt up. All tank melt up and they eventually exploded.
Weakling. I wonder how you could survive this long. Anyway, I have something else to do right now.
He continued walking closer to the city, He was almost there.
He heard something else and he looked around. He saw some strange platform coming it with some pointing things inside of holes. He looked at it and he saw all of it coming out of the holes. It was missile launcher.
He saw them coming at him and he knew it was about to be painful. He twisted his arms and he covered his core. The missile entered in contact with his body and exploded around him.
AAARRRGGGHHH!
The place was covered with smoke. It then dispersed and the angel body was intact. He had no damage on him.
Do they really think that this would kill me? I hurt a lot thought.
He looked at it and he saw it didn't contain missile anymore. He moved his head and he saw they were empty.
He reached the town and he saw, absolutely nothing. There were only metal on the ground and some very small house and unimportant building. He looked at the black line and it pointed below him.
"-Antonio. The Eva is ready to be deployed,-" the general said.
"I'm ready. You can send me out," Antonio replied.
"-Alright. Sending Eva-P to the top!-"
EVA-P moved backward in the launching station.
It was a giant armored being of flesh and metal. He had a red core where the pilot. The armor was red color on the chest. The legs were covered with blue metal and the head was green. The eyes of the bio-machine were red.
When he was installed on it, he was sent to the top and he reached the surface.
Antonio looked at the angel. It stood there for a second before looking at him. Antonio noticed the white line coming out of his chest and moved at the direction of the angel. He didn't understood what's going on, but he didn't mind.
"Angel. Prepare to die."
Present day
That's all for now.
"Sachiel!" The children shouted at him.
What? I just want to create a cliff-hanger.
"That's right at the moment of the fight," a child replied.
I know. I'm having fun. I also need to think about it. Seriously, I just need to think about how to describe the fight. I don't want to be boring.
"But-" a child was cut.
No. But complaining will only increase the time before the next part.
They said nothing and waited for Sachiel to prepare the next step.
AC: Here's the end of the prologue.
The battle will be descriptive and bloody, but the intense parts of the fight are cut for the child.
Later in the story, I will indicate a point of view when more than two being switched.
Chapter 1: EVA-P vs Angel.