You people have no idea how many times I've re-written the ending idea. Anyway, enjoy! I found an old notebook with all these ideas in 'em, so I gots some new fanfictions to crank out.
Mistaken Identity
"So, you're Kaoru," Haruhi said matter-of-factly. "And you're Hikaru."
They blanched, and remained quiet. She grinned triumphantly.
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"Kao-chan?" Hunny asked quietly, smiling and preparing to tackle/glomp/jump the younger red head joyously for no reason other than he was proud of the Hitachiin for gaining much some needed independence.
The other boy turned, looking confused for a second. "Uh....I'm Hikaru, Hunny-senpai."
"Oh..." the small blond visibly deflated. They must have returned their hair colors to the same shade gain. "Sorry, Hika-chan."
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"Hikaru?" his voice was incredibly deep.
The first year turned, looking up at his upperclassman and smiling expectantly. Mori paused.
'Or...are you Kaoru?"
The smile grew into a very large grin. "Very good, senpai."
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"Hikaru," Kyouya demanded coldly as the twins paused in the doorway of the Third Music Room. They had almost escaped his wrath for their careless pranks and lack of brotherly love during the Host Club meeting, and they now exchanged careful glances. "Come here."
They both moved toward him together and stopped as their upperclassman shook his head. "I just need Hikaru - you may leave, Kaoru."
They snuck a covert look that spoke volumes of things Kyouya couldn't understand, and then one made for the door all too suavely. Kyouya paused for a moment himself and then narrowed his eyes.
"Ah," the brunette hissed. "I said Kaoru could go. Come back here, Hikaru."
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"The one about to rip up the letter is Hikaru!!"
"We said no random guesses, Suoh!"
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Both startled awake in unision .
"Hikaru?"
"Am I Hikaru?"
"You could be Kaoru."
"Alright." They s;e[t with intertwined hands and legs, and mingling breaths.
For those wondering, this story moves backwards - as in they're about five at the end, and it's pretty close to modern manga in the beginning (aka, they've dyed their hair and that's what Hunny's talking about) Anyway, enjoy! It's quite a pain to type up stuff when I have one of 'em hyper babies on my lap who won't move, but if ya'll review, I'll endure it! ^^ xDDD