Wazzup my favourite people? GiLaw is in da house!
I published this story before but there were a LOT of spelling and grammar errors. I mean a LOT! So I'm gonna re-upload it!
SoLow: *sarcastic* Great idea
KFee: Just . . . KEEP AWAY FROM SUGAR!
NConn: And don't change too much! I liked the original!
Me: Okay then. LET'S GET THIS SPARKY DONE- AGAIN!
Chapter 1
It was another plain boring day in Shuggazoom City with no sign of Skeleton King, Mandarin or the Formless. In fact it was pretty peaceful.
Inside the Super Robot, Chiro and Otto were playing video games. Antauri was meditating in mid-air. Gibson was in his lab working on some crazy experiment. Jinmay was out patrolling the city. There was no sign of Sparx or Nova- they were out on their fifteenth date that week. The red and yellow monkeys had been dating a lot since Nova had confessed her feelings for Sparx.
"Still dating, are they?" Chiro grinned when Jinmay returned about an hour later.
"Yep," Jinmay smiled, pecking him on the forehead. "I think they've gone to get a Hover Burger or something. They just can't seem to separate from each other."
Chiro laughed. "They really care for each other, even when they bicker all the time. Have you seen the times when they get really jealous whenever one of them falls for another guy? They also get really depressed whenever they get separated." Chiro's face suddenly looked serious. "Remember the Fire of Hate incident?"
Jinmay nodded. "Oh yeah, that was a tough time for Nova."
"Tell her about the wormhole!" Otto perked up.
Silence. Everybody stared at the green simian. Even Gibson peeped his head out of the lab.
"What? What is it?" Jinmay looked confused.
"My apologies Jinmay, but the wormhole is something we prefer not to talk about," said the Antauri, floating back down onto the ground.
"Why, what happened?" asked Jinmay.
"Let's just say that Sparx was in hysterics during that time," said Gibson sternly. "Great Scott, even Nova shudders about it when mentioned."
At that point Sparx and Nova both came shooting down in their tubes, looking as happy as anything.
"So, did we miss much?" Sparx grinned.
"Nothing at all," Chiro lied.
Nova smiled. "Cool. I need to lie down. Dates are much more tiring than they look!" she added, giving the red monkey and special look. Sparx grinned again and winked at his yellow girlfriend.
In her room, Nova lay on her little tube-bed and thought back to the happy times she'd had with Sparx- the times when he'd been funny, stupid and the times when he'd been a good friend . . .
"I never miss."
"Seriously, I'm sorry about that snowball in the face."
"You'd do anything to get close to me, wouldn't you, Nova?"
"Well sweetheart, it looks like your dream finally came true."
"Two saves in one day? It must be love."
"A- and Nova . . . Nova . . . I just have to say . . . I-"
Nova smiled at the thought of what he would've said if Sparx hadn't been interrupted.
"You're not getting a little nervous, are you Nova? Want me to hold your hand?"
Nova froze. 'No, I don't want to remember that,' she thought to herself.
"Listen, seriously. There's something I wanna say."
The yellow monkey sat up and began to shake her head hard. "No! Snap out of it, Nova! That was a bad memory!"
"Just save it. Like Chiro said, we don't have time was this."
Nova smacked her head and tried to remember what Sparx had said to her when he had become blind and needed her to deactivate a rogue Antauri. But that memory was taking over. "SNAP OUT OF IT!" she yelled to herself.
She was interrupted by an alarm. 'Thank goodness,' she thought to herself and ran to the base room where the rest of the Hyperforce were gathered around the computer.
"It says here that citizens have been disappearing into strange doomholes," explained Gibson. "I am unsure of why they are appearing around and am clueless to what happens inside. Trackers here explain that the most recent incident was in . . ." He shuddered before finishing. "The Pit of Doom/"
"So it looks like that's where we'll be heading," said Sparx.
"Wait? What's that?" Jinmay pointed a bald man wearing some sort of spacesuit.
Nova took a close look. That spaceman looked horribly familiar. Why was he even wearing a spacesuit? He had oxygen . . . didn't he?
"I say we beat 'em up. That looks like a trap to me," she said a little too quickly.
Everyone stared at her.
"Nova . . . do you feel alright?" Antauri asked.
"Never felt better," the yellow monkey lied.
Sparx gave her a look and took her by the hand which was clammy with sweat. "You sure? You don't seem like yourself."
Nova managed a nod. "I'm fine! Well what are we waiting for? Let's go already!"
"Okay," Chiro agreed. "MONKEYS MOBILIZE!"
SoLow: Can we go now?
Me: Can you shut up now?
NConn: I thought that Chapter 1 was- just as amazing as the original.
KFee: It was okay, I guess.
So that's Chapter 1 re-done! Please Read and Review, it'll make me happy. Hopefully Chapter 2 won't take too long. Until next time- cheerio!