Okay so I reread Condemned Shadows and realized how horrible it was, so I'm going to rewrite and put it up on this account my new one, obviously. So I'm really hoping this one is better because I redid the story pretty much and made it a lot better. Please tell me in a review if it's better or not from my old one!

Disclaimer: I own nothing except the plot and OC's

******Karasu's POV******

The room, I could not see it, I swear no matter how many times I opened and closed my eyes nothing changed. Darkness. What happened? Had I gone blind! During the capture! No, impossible, the capture? How did I get here? Blinded?

*****Flashback no POV******

Karasu and Yuki Kuro had finished all their classes and were sitting in a small clearing in the woods talking. The younger twin, Yuki, was crying, her dark red, almost black eyes watery, and the wind blowing her white, waist length hair across her face. The older twin, Karasu, was comforting her sister, her black, knee length hair tied back in a tight braid, her own dark red eyes showing the pain. But not a single tear, no she couldn't cry in front of Yuki, she was supposed to show that she could pull through and that meant Yuki could try and do that to.

"Ane, you are fine. They won't ever come back, don't be afraid. I promise, those two they wont come back." Karasu whispered, gently pulling her sister closer to her.

"O-okay, Imoto." Yuki sniffed, hugging her sister, but froze hearing a sound across the clearing. "Did you hear that?"

"Yeah, stay here. I will look around."

Karasu stood, walking to the other side of the clearing, searching for what or who was here with them. But the search ended as somebody came from hiding behind Yuki, causing her to jump away with a terrified scream, alerting Karasu. Immediately Karasu turned, seeing a boy near Yuki, he looked about 18, black hair, his bangs around his face and the rest tied back in a loose ponytail, and charcoal black eyes.

There were soft footsteps behind Karasu, who only had enough time to get a glance at the person behind her before she couldn't move her body. The person behind her looked about 17, a boy, blood red spiked hair, and amber eyes.

Karasu watched Yuki step back with every step the boy took towards her, crying, hoping Karasu would hear her pleas for help. But then she fell, tripping on the hem of her white kimono, and stared up at the boy as he approached her, to scared to move. But when the boy knelt in front of her, she edged back, shaking, and whimpering in fear.

"Yuki, listen to me. We don't want to hurt you. Just a simple request. Okay?" The boy said softly, so not as to scare Yuki more.

"W-what do y-you want?" Yuki whispered edging away more.

"You and your sister have sparked an interest in our leader and he has sent us to come and have you come and join us. An organization called the Akatsuki."

"Yuki! Don't listen to him! Get out of here!" Karasu had heard everything and not trusting the boy had yelled at Yuki to run.

Yuki glanced at her sister before quickly getting up and darted, but the boy was faster, much faster and had grabbed her pale wrist, stopping her. He quickly had Yuki pulled next to him so she wouldn't run again, but that didn't stop her from screaming, and struggling terrified of the closeness of them.

"Yuki, calm down. I won't hurt you." The boy whispered, trying to calm down the petrified girl.

Yuki paid no attention to what the boy said, still struggling to get away from him.

"Yuki, stop it now, before I have to hurt you." The boy's voice was slightly harsher than before making Yuki flinch and tremble.

Karasu stared at her sister. Wondering what was going on and why it was them this had to happen to. Hadn't enough already happened? No, apparently not. Seeing Yuki like this again made Karasu feel weak and stupid. She struggled against what had immobilized her, screaming at the boy to let her go. Nothing happened, except her body moved on it's own accord and moved back towards the boy behind her.

"Let me go! You bastard!"

"I would prefer you call me Sasori." Came the soft voice behind here, telling her his name.

"Let me go!" Karasu struggled twice as hard, feeling him wrap an arm around her midsection, and then directed her voice to the boy holding Yuki captive. "Let my ane go, she doesn't need this to happen again. I'll go with you, just don't take my Ane."

Once that said Karasu stopped struggling, falling limp in Sasori's grasp, showing she would give up if they left Yuki alone. The boy loosened his grip slightly on Yuki, who took the chance to slip from his grasp and run. The boy looked over at Sasori and Karasu felt him move slightly. From the slight movement the boy had Yuki again, who knew now she couldn't get away and gave up fighting.

"We cannot accept your deal. Our leader wants you both, for you two are stronger when fighting together, if we had not come when you were weak we surely would have lost. But Yuki had another moment with some kid and you did it again." Sasori said, and to prove what 'it' was, pulled up her sleeve showing recent cuts on her arm.

"I wouldn't have if I'd known 'this' would happen! Now let my Ane go! She doesn't need this! You bastard! Both of you, bastards!"

Karasu struggled again, knowing if she got free, she could get at least Yuki away, maybe not herself but if Yuki was okay then it didn't matter to her if she escaped or not. But then something unexpected happened. The boy holding Yuki captive, his eyes turned red, a black design in them, and then he had Yuki look up at him, and almost immediately, she let out a terrified scream, and had fallen unconscious.

"Yuki! Yuki, wake up!" Karasu's voice was filled with fear as she screamed out for her sister, terrified that Yuki wouldn't wake up. "Sasori, let me go! My ane is hurt! Let me go, please!"

"Karasu, Yuki is fine. It was a simple jutsu. It won't hurt her any." Sasori said, trying to calm Karasu down, feeling her heartbeat nearly triple in pace, and her breathing also so fast she barely got enough oxygen to keep her conscious. "Karasu calm down, you aren't doing you or Yuki any good like this."

"Calm down! How can I! You have my ane captive and you will be taking me to! How can anybody stay calm in this situation!" Karasu screamed, struggling harder.

Then Sasori said something she couldn't hear and her body started to no longer respond to what she wanted. A needle pierced her skin, causing a small yelp from Karasu, then she felt her body go numb, and then she felt the darkness consume her. The only thought that went through her head before she had fallen unconscious was hopes that Yuki would be safe from danger and then she fell unconscious.

******End flashback*******

There it is. Hope I did better then last time. Tell me in a review. I like reviews!