Hey everyone! I got a review and I thought about it and decided to fix up this chapter. Disclamer: I don't own anyone from Maximum Ride but I do own the plot. Now for the newer version
"MAAAAAXXXX! Get your lazy butt down here!" My witch of a step mother yelled from down stairs. Oh sorry your probably wondering what's going on right now. I'm Maximum Ride and this is my sucky life. I live with my love blind dad Jeb Batchler and the step witch Anne Walker. When my mom died from a car crash, Anne was so 'nice' to us and my father and Anne fell in 'love' (note the sarcasm in nice and love).What my dad doesn't know, is when he isn't home Anne abuses me. I have to cover up my scars, cuts, and burses with makeup. Even school is terrible. I am bullied, picked on, and everyone hates me for who knows what reason. Well everyone but my three friends Ella, Iggy, and Nudge. Ella is 14 and beautiful, nice, funny, fashionable, and loyal to her friends. She has brown semi-curly hair and brown eyes. Also, she is 5'3 and is has is not fully Hispanic. James (Iggy) is 15 like me and is, funny, a pyromaniac, a sexist pig, idiotic, protective in a way, Ella's boyfriend, and can kick butt if he wants to. (A/N: he won't be blind in this story.) He is 5'10, has strawberry blond hair, icy blue eyes, and very pale skin. Iggy has two younger siblings: Angel and Gazzy. They both have blond hair and bright blue eyes. Gazzy is 9 and is like his brother in so many ways. He is a pyro, idiotic, and protective. But he is his own person too. He is sweet, adorable, and mischievous. Angel is well, angelic. She has long curly blond hair, is 6 years old, and looks a lot less like Iggy than Gazzy does. Her name describes her behavior most of the time. Usually, she is sweet, kind, caring, and loving but if you mess with her or anyone she loves well let's just say don't go there. Then there's Nudge. She's spunky, talkative, a fashion diva, loyal, and can kick some serious butt. She is 14 like Ella, and she is beautiful too. She has mocha skin, amazing hair, and is 5'6. Last there's me. I'm 15, 5'8, and a semi-tomboy. I have wavy long dirty blond hair with blond streaks. Well back to the present. I shouted down to Anne "Coming mother !" with sarcasm dripping from my voice. Then I through on a black, white, and purple Areo shirt, a white Arie hoodie, a pair of white converse with a black design stitched on the sides. I applied my makeup to cover my scars/cuts/bruises, grabbed my book bag and ran out the door without saying goodbye to the step monster.
I was greeted at school by Nudge and Iggy. "Hey where's Ella?" I asked. It wasn't like Ella to ditch us, and I knew she was healthy because I saw yesterday (It was Sunday and todays Monday). "Over there with the she witch and her posse." Iggy practically spit out. "On to a happier note, did you hear about the new kid? I can't wait to meet him! I heard someone's gunna get called to the office to show him around! I hope it's me! I would be a perfect candidate because I went through this like three years ago!" I started tuning her out when we started walking to my locker. Only to hear on the loud speaker "Maximum Ride come to the office please." I said by to my friends and walked to the office already knowing what I was getting into.
"Maximum, please show Nick around the school and to his classes you have the same schedule as him." Nick was HOT! He was probably 5'9 and he had black hair that fell over his eyes in a 'I'm cool' sort of way. Also he had dark eyes, a olive skin tone, and wore all black. "Sure whatever" I said. As we walked out of the office together I said " Hey I'm Max." "Call me Fang." Well he's sure a man of many words. NOT. Oh well I'll get him to talk.
Well there's the newer version of the first chapter! Hope you liked it. Please R&R!