This is my first fanfiction. And sorry for bad English and (keybord not working good) Only my oc

It was nice day in Eastern pack. Sun was shining and was very warm. There was wolf sneking in the was a black male wolf whit red stripe from neck to tail. He was stalking big elk in another wolf appeared next him. It was friend of him from alpha school. It was light grey female same age whit the black wolf.

``Why are you hunting alone Raid?``She whispered.

``I just want training Jane`` Raid whispered back nervously.

``Don't lie to always suck in lies``Jane said.

``I´m not liein``Raid said again nervously.

``Yes you are.I know you pretty good``Jane laughted.

The elk rise hes head. It was scouting the area for it began to eat again.

``Shut up``Raid said little anger.

``You can tell me why you hunt alone because you don't usealy hunt alone``Jane whispered.

``Fine I am trying to impress the Leader Wolf``Raid said angry.

``I know it``Jane giggled in victory.

Next thing Jane saw Raid sprinting to the get to the neck of it trying to it heard noises and saw black wolf running towards froze in fear and did not any get it easy because it dosent jump to the neck and bite it was trying get of it was too neck snapped and didennt move anymore.

``Nice kill Raid``Male wolf said behind him.

Raid turnet around to see the Leader Wolf.

``Thanks Sir``Raid said.

Raid take elk from leg and starded to drag it to the is big pack of wolves .They lived near the woods in big was to mountains in was for dens and the other was for was peaceful place. Other packs were peace whit Eastern Pack begause they weren't any treaht to the others. Raid was sitting a rock in nearby was just thinking Jane the light grey had a crush on didn't know of was shy and he heard something and turn his head to the sound and was tackled in to the back to the surface to see it was his friend was white wolf and stealth in his got his leg and lift him too the lake and they water`` fight``.When they get of the water dry their fur then they strat to speak about hunting like always.

``So you got the Leader Wolf impressed?`` Jack asked.

``Yeah I did``Raid said .

``I just get few rabbits.``Jack told

``It is getting late so I go to my den``Raid said when walking away.

``Bye!``Jack shouted after him.

Then Jack drink little bit water and leave to his den.

When Raid get to the pack and saw Jane going to hers started to daydreaming of her and dint notice Leader Wolf.

``Arent she beautiful?``Leader Wolf asked.

Raid jumped few feets because he frighted.

``Y-yes she i-is Sir.``Raid blushed.

``I know you like her``Leader Wolf laughed .

``N-no idont she is just a friend Sir``He blushed was red as tomato.

``Forgot the sir and say Hank because I don't like this sir thing``

``O-okay H-Hank``He said shyly.

``Go to the den get sleep and beautiful dream just like her``He pointed Janes just left to his den.

``Good night Hank``Raid said same time walking away.

``Good Jane dreams``Hank said laughing.

Raid blushes and get in his den.

He is walking in the big is beautiful he gets on top of the mountain and saw wonderful view to his saw the lake where they go trinking and swimming the howling rock where was few howling to their mates the den area where pups was playing tag the hunting grounds where was elk,rabbits,moose and few birds was his favorite place in the Eastern was watching sun made beautiful lights in the make it he heard something behind turned and saw Jane walking towards him and looked him whit blue crystal clear eyes in his grass green eyes .Raid watches her every movement .Then she sat besides him and they are now watching sunset whit is long silence between them.

``So you come here too?``Jane asked

``J-just is beautiful place over here```Raid said nervously.

``Well maybe we can come together sometime``Jane said whit soft voice.

``M-maybe``Raid said nervously and blushing

She giggled at his blushing and hugged him.

``Wake up Raid!``

``What?`` Raid asked confused.

``Wake up!``

Then he woke up and saw his friend Jack next to him smiling.

``Had nice drem hah?`` Jack asked laughing

```What?``Raid asked back little bit confused how he know.

``You speak in your dream you know``Jack laughed

Raid blush laughed even harder by now.

``You heard all?``Raid asked nervously .

``Enough``He answered smiling.

``fuck`` Raid mumblet.

``Don't worry I don't tell anybody about your crush on Jane``He said to him.

``Thanks``He said shyly and smiled little bit.

So first i know it is short but i make longger chapters in future pls rewiew =)