READ THIS B4 YA GO FLAMIN THAT I REDID AGAIN!
Hey, everybody! I am back! To do what you all feared I might do. I'm deleting the story to redo again (I know you guys probably hate me now SO much, but I had to). Why did I have to? 'Cause I am completely lost now that I've been gone so long; a read over the last like three chapters, then read over earlier ones to refresh my memory, but I just can't go on with it the way it is. I'm too lost; I don't know was killed/imprisoned anymore, so you could have a long captured/dead character appearing again.
Reason two, there's alot of grammatical mistakes and inconsistencies/repeated things. For an example, in the scene where Perry's chained in that dungeon area, Platyborg cuts the chains, but when they go to start trying to kill him, he's (magically) chained again. I think I meant to keep him chained but just kinda got stuck between the same two ideas.
Reason three, a lot of what happened just wouldn't work and I hardly know who's who anymore. One, too many characters were already dead or pulled to the dark side, and with Platyborg and Doof's sudden strength, there's no way the remaining characters would be able to fight them off alone and survive. I also don't know who's who 'cause it's constantly mixing up with the 1D and 2D characters; then there's apparently a third dimension I added to that I just can't really understand.
Well, there, that's my full explanation. I also have a lot of better ideas; maybe make it a little less gory, maybe make it seem a little less OOC-ish. Anyways, now, if I can remember the movie well enough, I'll be redoing. And I swear, if I have to redo again, I'll just throw the idea entirely. And this time, I decided to write the first few chapters prior to restarting again. Okay?
Anyways, try and enjoy this thousandth remake of the same story! XD
It was nearly ten o' clock at night in 2nd dimension Danville. The full moon shown brightly over the city, showing nothing more than a normal city for the first time in years. People randomly walked up and down sidewalks, some biking, and cars drove quietly up the streets either heading home or heading out. Why they were doing this was because this was the first time in years they'd been able to be up past 3pm without fear of being annihilated. Less than two weeks ago, an evil man of the name Heinz Doofenshmirtz was the evil dictator of this small city, along with his partner in crime, former beloved house pet and trusted secret agent, Perry the platypus, who became Perry the Platyborg when Heinz got ahold of him.
Perry use to be the beloved pet of the Flynn-Fletcher family and he worked for the OWCA ever since he was a little pup, He started out as an inexperienced apprentice, but became the OWCA's most powerful and trusted agent. And that's just the reason Heinz targeted him. The two of them fought on a daily basis, due to losing his toy train as a child, Doof became evil. Unfortunately, Heinz usually managed to build machines to hurt Perry before going on with his plan and the family was shocked when he frequently returned limping and badly bruised.
Eventually, the leader of the OWCA, Major Monogram, had had enough of Perry being injured almost everyday and being out for days at a time, so he sent out all the agents, including Perry, to fight him. That was the day everything changed forever. The animals worked together perfectly; sneaking into the building stealthily and making attempts to attack the evil scientist, led by Perry and his best friend and the second best agent at the OWCA, Pinky the Chihuahua. Doof was nearly defeated until he released his newest creation on them, the Normbots. The animals fought them, but more and more started coming. Realizing they would get seriously injured if they kept fighting, the agents fled…all except Perry. He'd been captured. His friends Pinky and Peter the Panda tried to save him, but couldn't alone. They both narrowly escaped and nothing had ever been the same since.
The OWCA tried to fight him days afterward, but couldn't. The agents even snuck off without the command to ambush him, nearly getting killed in the process. But not by Doof or his robot henchmen, but Perry. The agents were horrified to see what their best friend was turned into; nothing more than a half robotic monster, programmed to only do what Doofenshmirtz told him to.
Pinky tried to coax him back to the good side, but Perry's past memory had been wiped entirely and he nearly killed who use to be his friends, and his allies. Eventually, the OWCA gave up and watched hopelessly and the Normbots started invading.
But there were some kids who wouldn't watch it happen. Candace Flynn, the oldest of the three siblings, realized what was happening and tried to stop it. She soon realized there was no hope in defeating them single-handedly. Her younger brothers, Phineas and Ferb, offered to help, but she wouldn't be able to live with herself if she selflessly let them fight and get seriously injured, if not killed. So she made sure they were isolated in their house 90% of the time. Eventually, Candace managed to create an alliance called the Resistance when her brothers' friends decided they'd help her. She at first didn't want them too due to their age, but she eventually realized they were perfectly capable of fighting.
For years afterwards, the Resistance, eventually allied with the OWCA agents, fought and fought, but could never free the city due to the only ones brave enough to fight were four kids and about twenty specially trained animals wearing fedoras. But one day, when some were finally ready to quit, a couple kids, a scientist, and a platypus, identical to Candace's brothers, Danville's evil dictator, and former Agent P showed up and successfully ended up fighting the dark side and getting it all over with for good.
In the end, Doofenshmirtz was sent to prison for life for his crimes against humanity, Perry, still a cyborg, was welcomed back to the OWCA as an agent again, and the Resistance was finally able to live separate, mostly normal lives. Or so they thought…
Wow! This wasn't exactly short, but pretty much all it did was sum up the basics of the movie, along with my theory of what happened prior to the movie, and then left you with a (sh*tty) cliffhanger. And in case you're wondering, the very first paragraph is how 2D Danville is currently, then it's all about what happened before it became peaceful city it is now.
So, stay tuned for chapter 1 (this is the prologue)! R&R!
