Hey everyone! Yes I know, I still have my other 3 stories to finish, but I just love poems, and I just LOVE descriptive writing and always it has to do with Inuyasha. Therefore, I'm writing a poem about Shessy and Kikyo! Enjoy, and don't kill me for writing a new story/poem. Flames and nice reviews accepted.
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Chapter 1- The BeautyThe gold ball of raging fire,
Hanging in the clear, ocean-blue sky,
Winds blowing softly over the calm land.
Each passing moment,
The lord stares with the yellow amber eyes he has,
Over fields and forests,
Hoping to see the beauty,
Longing to know the emotion love,
Shouting to be able to fear,
Wanting to understand more.
The silence gives no reply,
The lord has gone,
The miko has arrived.
Every flower has bloomed,
Into the stars on the land,
Soon to disappear,
And replaced by,
Pure white snow.
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The wind stopped,
Hazy clouds of lightning and thunder had formed,
The golden sphere was hidden in the darkness,
Even the miko has left.
The lord has returned to his luxious castle,
Where it's warm,
Where it's comforting,
Where it's throne,
Is empty.
The lord sits,
The lords stares,
The lord wanders,
The lord needs
The queen.
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The miko is back,
She saves the village,
Returns to the hut she belongs in,
Where it's warm,
Where it's comforting,
Where it's seats,
Are filled.
The miko sits,
The miko stares,
The miko wanders,
The miko needs
The one.
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Yay! My first chapter done! Is it descrpitive? Oh, I think it's horrible, I need to make it better! Can you readers help?(sorry, I just felt like doing that) Anyways, please review, I'd appreciate it a lot, I like feedback, just like 'tel'us. Lol, just made that up. Anyways tell next update bye-bye!