Raaz! - story of an adorable friendship
Characters :
Dayanand Sheety as Daya Srivastava
Aditya Srivasatva as Abhijeet Srivastava
Jissu Sen Gupta as Sonu Kapoor
Shivaji Satam as Father
Ansha Sayed as Doctor Purvi
Janvi Cheda as Sherya Kumar
& others some characters also included…
This story is basically pure Duo horror story.. & an important thing what I tell you guys that in this story I used English & Hindi both language for made the story more realistic..
So guys let's start;
Scene 1
Mumbai
1990
A 12-13 years old little boy sitting into a car with happy mood & look at a magazine which present in his hand… suddenly the boy look at outside & become confuse to see something.. boy quickly come out from the car & go towards a boy who silently standing near the car..
First boy(confuse)- Daya…bhai kya hua tu roo kyun raha hai?
Daya(teary tone)- Abhi mujhe chorke mat jao.. main akela ho jaunga..
Abhijeet(smile)- tujhe chorke kaha jaa raha hu bhai.. bas kuch saal ka baat hai..parai khatam karke hi wapas aa jaunga..
Daya(teary tone)- nehi..Abhi tum yaha reheke bhi to parai kar sakte ho na? Usa jane ka kya jarurat hai? aur tumhare parai khatam hone mein to 10 saal lag jayega…main itna saal kaise rahunga?
Abhijeet(smile)- yaar tu ab class 5 mein parta hai..kitne sare naya friends hai tere.. baad mein aur bhi zada hoga…dekna tujhe koi pareshani nehi hoga…
Just then a man come with another man who carry some luagges..
Man(smile)- Abhi come son.. chalo nehi to fight ke liye der ho jayega..
Abhijeet(smile)- yes dad.. okk Daya good bye.. roo mat tera bhaiya tujhe call karega… & he smiley kiss on Daya's forcehead & quickly sit into the car with his dad …
Soon the car become disapperd & a tears drop from Daya's eyes….
Scene 2
Usa
21 th July , 2018
A man lying on a bed & slepping peacefully …
Another man come near his bed & said(request tone)- sir plz now get up..its now 10 o clock.. today a special day.. in your social handles many messages come.. all fans want to meet with you..atleast say thank u all in social media…
Man who lying on bed open his eyes & irritate- shut up! Today is a special day John.. atleast wish me once..
John(smile)- I already wish you 10 times but you all time busy to slepping..once again Happy Birthday Sir…
Man smile broadly & sit on the bed & said(smile)- John where is my phone?... & where is Deveyana?
Just then a lady come near them & said with sweet tone – hello sir.. many many happy returns of the day..
Man(smile)- babes..i am already searching you.. so what is todays plan?
Deveyana(smile)- sir today you meet with press at 12p.m. afterthat you meet with your fans & launch your new movie trailer… & then..
Man(quickly)- wait..wait.. today is my birthday.. so plz not any more plans.. today I need some fresh moments.. got it?
Deveyana(smile)- of course sir.. then fine sir I will waiting for you in your office room.. & once again Happy Birthday sir..
Man(smile)- yaa sure babe.. & John where is my phone damn it?
….
Scene 3
" hello.. dude where are you?"
A man who driving his car said(smile)- sorry dude i am little late..you must go into the party.. I am also come there just 10 minutes..
First man(irritate)- what is this Sonu? I am waiting for you since 30 minutes..shit man…come quickly..
Sonu(smile)- sorry bro… but bro think a minute Superstar Abhijeet Srivastava waiting for me since 30 minutes..wow..great..
Abhijeet(irritate)- just shut up! Come quick.. & cut the call… after that he become confuse to see one private number calling him.. he receive the call & become extremely shock to hear the voice..
" boss…"
Abhijeet(low tone)- Daya… this is you Daya am I right? But no response come from otherside..
Abhijeet(bit consfuse)- Daya.. bhai what happen? Why you still silent? Ohh I understand sorry soory.. Daya mera bhai kya hua bhai…ab dek yaar main tujse hindi mein baat kar raha hu.. Daya kya hua chup kyun hai?
After 30 seconds the phone become switch off..
Abhijeet confusely check his phone again & again..
Just then Deveyana come & said(confuse)- what happen sir? Any problem?
Abhijeet(confuse)- yaa you right.. my phone suddenly become switch off… now its not work..
Deveyana(smile)- I think sir phone become charge out.. no problem sir you can use my phone…
Abhijeet(smile lightly)- no no its okk.. plz babe charging it quickly..
Deveynana smilely nod & went from there with the phone…
" hey bro.." Sonu come near Abhijeet & hug him..
Abhijeet smile lightly …
Sonu(confuse)- what happen bro? any problem? Waiter give us 2 biar..
Waiter nod ..
Abhijeet(tension tone)- aisa kabhi pehele nehi kiya?
Sonu(confuse)- what! You tell hindi.. (happy)yaar Abhi bohot din baad tune hindi bola..i am very happy…
Abhijeet(low tone)- Sonu I think something wrong with Daya…
Sonu(confuse)- Daya? Ohh haa tera bhai.. kyun kya hua?
Abhijeet(tense tone)- pata nehi usne abhi kuch der pehele call kiya aur phir bilkul full silent ho geya…maine kitna pucha whats happen Daya? Kya hua yaar? but he not answer me … Daya kabhi bhi aisa nehi karta… aur phir pata nehi kya hua phone switch off ho geya.. I think Deveyana right charge was finished..
Sonu(low tone)- bro tune last time kab baat kiya tha Daya se?
Abhijeet(casually)- ye koi 3-4 months ago.. (then he realized) shit..kahi wo gussa to nehi hai mujse?
Sonu(smile)- I think so…tujhe ekbar milna chahiye Daya se..
Abhijeet – but bro now I am too busy.. just some hours ago my new movie trailer release.. now I am getting more busy..
Sonu(soft tone)- bro..aaj tak kitna baar tune Daya se milne geya? Ek bar bhi nehi am I right?
Abhijeet nod his head silently….
Sonu(soft tone)- dek yaar Daya tera bhai hai aur tujhe bohot pyaar karta hai… per naa kabhi tu usse Usa aane diya naa khud geya… bas ek bar hi to Daya aaya tha yaha jab uncle gujar geye…. Naa kabhi uncle ne Daya ke sath qaut bitaya na tu…
Abhijeet(angry tone)- enough is enough… Sonu just stop it.. you cross your limit…
Just then Deveyana come there with Abhijeet's phone…
Deveyana(smile)- sir your phone is been perfect… I just check it.. your phone have enough charge…I don't know why your phone become switch off…
Abhijeet confusely take the phone & check the call list & become shock to see that number not being add in his phone call list…
Sonu(confuse)- tere call list mein to last number mera hi hai.. tu to bol raha tha Daya ne call kiya tha?
Abhijeet(low tone)- yaa..he must call me.. how it possible? I know his voice.. Sonu I think something wrong with him…
Sonu(tense tone)- so ab kya karega?
Abhijeet(serious tone)- babe just call the director & said him I am not able to promotion next movie & cancel all shootings…
Deveyana(surprise)- but why sir? 2 new movies shooting start from tomorrow .. why you said this?
Abhijeet(look at Sonu)- ek bohot bara galti kiya hai maine… ab sayed qaut aa geya wo galti sudharne ka… babe quickly book 2 tickets of Mumbai..
Deveyana(shock)-aapne hindi bola? Wow sir I am very tried telling all time English.. so may i..
Abhijeet smiley nod..
Deveyana(smile)- thank u sir..bdw Mumbai? Aap Mumbai jane wale hai? wow..main bhi chalu sir?
Sonu(confuse)- tumhe hindi aati hai? shit! Agar pehele pata hota to shaddi itna jaldi karta hi nehi…
Abhijeet(smile)- babe Mumbai mein reheti thi I think… isiliye of course usse hindi aati hai..kyun?
Deveyana smiley nod..
Sonu(smile)- okk best of luck.. agar koi bhi… but Abhijeet quickly said – one minute..best of luck kyun bol raha hai? tu chal raha hai mere sath…
Sonu(surprise)- what! No no its not possible..
Abhijeet(smile)- babe..i am sorry..not this time..but next time pakka you go with me… & now you book 2 tickts of Sonu & me.. okkk?
Deveyana(smile)- yaa sure..
…..
Scene 4
Mumbai
22nd july, 2018
Hotel Blue Diamond
" yaar hum aa to geye magar tujhe pata hai kya Daya kaha reheta hai?" confusly asked Sonu..
Abhijeet who standing in balcony smile & said- social media kab kaam aayega? Dude here it is..our destination..
Sonu check Abhi's phone & said – Juhu beach ke samne to kitna sare ghar hai..konsa hoga?
Abhijeet(irritate)- what is this bro? itna negative mat soch.. dhund lenge…
…
After 5 hours;
Abhijeet & Sonu come near a house which is present some far away of the beach..
Abhijeet press the bell & a man open the door..
Man(confuse)-yes… soon he become shock to see keenly the man..
Abhijeet smiley said – kaisa hai Daya?
Daya become stunned & tears come in his eyes.. he quickly hug him tightly.. Abhijeet also hug him …
Daya(crying)- Abhi… itna din kyun nehi aaye? Tumhe pata hai kitna miss kiya maine tumhe?
Abhijeet(soft tone)- I am so sorry .. Daya you know na in Usa I am a superstar… so its really difficult to meet with someone..
Daya(teary tone)- someone? Main someone hu?
Abhijeet(soft tone)- nehi re.. tu to mera jaan hai…I am sorry yaar bohot bara galti hua mujse..tu agar kal mujhe call nehi karta to sayed aaj main yaha aata bhi nehi..
Daya(confuse)- wait a minute.. maine tumhe call kiya? Kab? main to abhi 2 ghanta pehele Pune se aaya.. meeting tha waha mera.. mera phone kal raat pura time switch off tha..
Sonu & Abhijeet become confuse to hear it..
Just then Daya(smile)- are Abhi wo dekho kon aaya hai..mera would be.. Sherya.. & Sherya ye hai mera bhai Abhi.. tumhe maine photo dikhaya tha na bhaiya ka..
Sonu silently observe Daya & look at Abhijeet..
Abhijeet confusly looking at Daya & look at the main door..
Daya(smile)- Abhi hi bolo yaar Sherya ko..
Abhijeet try to say something.. but he feel something & scarly said hi ..
Sonu (low tone)- idiot hi kisko bol raha hai?
Abhijeet said nothing but his full body become wet by his sweat..
Daya(smile)- tum baitho..hum log aate hai abhi.. & he went from there..
Abhijeet(scar tone)- Sonu.. so..sonu.. chal mere sath chal…
Sonu(confuse)- kaha ? aur tera aawaz ko kya hua?
Abhijeet(little loud)- maine kaha na chal yaha se jaldi.. & start running..
…..
Scene 5
Coffee shop
" are you okk?" asked by Sonu..
Abhijeet who silently drink coffiee nod once..
Sonu(confuse)- yaar hua kya? why you start running?
Abhijeet(scar tone)- pata nehi kya hua tha? Jaise hi Daya ne kaha mujhe hi bolne ke liye ..i just feel someone touch my hand & start shaking my hand.. but I am sure no one present in there without us..
Sonu(confuse)- what! Yaa I am also doubt.. Daya tera bhai ne kaha uska would be aayi hai.. magar waha to koi nehi tha.. mujhe laga wo mazak kar raha hai…. but if you are right then what actually happen in that house?
Abhijeet (thought)- what actually happen with my brother?
…..
End the chapter… tell me how it is?
On 21st july we all celebrate Aditya sir's birthday… but I am not able to start this story because of my exam.. only fot this I am not update my two ongoing stories.. but now I am back …
Hope you all like this story.. its my first Horror story.. I will try my best to make good this story.. hope you all like it..plz comment in review section & tell me how it is? Say anything..good or bad..anything you can say frankly..i never mind..but plz do review…
Thank u
Bye
Take care
Abhi