Hey! This is my first fanfic...so please read and reveiw! Hope you like it! Depressingly enough, I don't own divergent or anything to do with it...or Tobias)':
I stand at the base of the net, half-listening to what my friend, Lauren, is telling me I try to listen, I really do, but I'm too excited about the initiates! I wonder whose Going to the the first to jump. Probably Uriah, a Dauntless-born who is my best friend's, Zeke, younger brother.
"Hello? Earth to Four?!" Lauren screams in my ear.
"God can you be any LOUDER?" I say, not completely serious.
"Well-" Lauren starts, but is cut off when we see a figure falling from the tall building before us, into the net.
I calmly walk to the net to see a small girl laughing hysterically from amusement. I offer her my hand to help her up, and she takes it as I gently pull her out of the net. She siftly lets go and says, "Thank you." Her blue eyes and long blonde hair seem familiar to me, but I don't know why, and I don't really care, because she is beautiful, slightly intruguing...What am I TALKING about?! I haven't even talked to her yet! I quickly snap out of my trance with a genuine smile painted on my face.
"Can't believe it! A Stiff, the first to jump? Unheared of," Lauren exclaims. I snap my head back to her, a little angry since I came from Abnegation myself two years ago. Probably, hopefully, not for the same reason this girl left.
"There's a reason why she left them, Lauren," I say, deeper than I thought. "What's you name?" I ask, turning back to Miss Ex-Abnegation. I not only want to know her name because I'll be her instructor for initiation for the next couple months, but I want to know...need to know for myself.
"Umm..." she replies, obviously thinking about it. I smile at her hesitation. Iguess she wantes to change her name. Not THAT unuasual, but enough to spark my curiosity.
"Think about it. YOu don't get to pick again," I say to her, even though I wish I could change my last name...
"Tris." She says, catching me off guard at how confident she sounds. Maybe she is cut out for Dauntless.
"Tris," Lauren echos. "Make the anouncment, Four!"
"First jumper: Tris!" I hsout to the crowd of Dauntless members behind us. They hoot and holler, like the dauntless usually so. Then another girl's scream rings in my ears as the sound gradually gets louder. A dark skinned girl, tall and lean, plops into the net, screaming the whole way down.
"Welcome to Dauntless," I say to Tris as I rest my hand on her back to lead her to the res of the Dauntless. I usually do't do this, but I feel the need to touch her. For some reason, I'm like a magnet to her, and I don't want her to ever leave my side.
Again, please reveiw! Your thoughts really count(: