AN: So I published a story on fanfiction yesterday and so far I've gotten 2 reviews. Thank you guys so much for reviewing! . In the mean time I want to try my hand with a multi-chapter story. Hopefully it will go well. So enjoy and please review!
Disclaimer: I don't own Ben 10. Man of Action does.
Gwen's POV:
"Wow, I can't believe we took down all of those DNaliens. " Said Ben. We had just gotten back from a mission involving the hybreed trying to take over the world again. We expected it to be just another routine thing, but the hybreed had been expecting us. They had hundreds of DNaliens waiting for us to arrive. It was tough, but we managed to defeat them all and none of us got hurt too badly.
"Yeah, I know. I didn't think we were gonna make it outta there in one piece." Kevin said. "Why don't we go to Mr. Smoothie's? Its still pretty early and I am in a serious need of a smoothie." Ben suggests. Kevin rolled his eyes and mumbled something about having an addiction, but took off in the direction of Mr. Smoothie's anyway. When they arrived, they took a seat at one of the outside tables and Gwen went inside to order everyone's drink. After waiting about 10 minutes, Gwen came outside carrying everyone's drink. Unfortunately, while she was carrying the tray with the drinks, she didn't see the spilled soda on the ground in front of her. Kevin, though, saw the spilled soda on the ground and made it over to her before she could hit the ground and caught her. The drinks went everywhere but she was ok. "Thank you." said Gwen. Just as she was about to get up though Kevin leaned in to kiss her. Gwen saw what he was trying to do and started to lean in as well. Just as their lips were about to meet, Ben came out of the bathroom where he had been before Gwen had come out with their drinks. He saw what had happened and went completely crazy.
"My smoothie!" he cried. "How could you do this to my smoothie!" he shouted. Then he started to rant about how important that smoothie was to him and how much he needed it. While he was ranting, Gwen and Kevin got up to buy him another smoothie. Hopefully, they'd get to have that kiss later, when Ben wasn't there to ruin it.
AN: So this one is a bit longer and hopefully a bit better than my last one. And to Skylark Evanson, I just want to tell you that I am a huge fan of your stories and thanks for the advise. I tried to add a bit more detail and emotion to this one. So hopefully everyone likes the story so far. And please review to tell me what you think!