Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO! ALL CHARACTERS OWNED BY Masashi Kishimoto. ALL PLOT CHANGES ARE MINE THOUGH!
Hiashi thought Hinata was weak, that she did not deserve to be the Heiress to the Hyuuga Clan but little did he know that Hinata had been keeping a secret from the Clan, a secret that would change all there ways of thinking. Here we have a normal day, sunny with no clouds and at age 7, Hinata was sad. Her father had told her yet again that she was worthless and weak, something that she was not. Of course, no one knew that. Today something bad was going to happen, she had tried to tell everyone that but no one would listen to her, they told her to go to her room and remain out of sight as her opinions and her bad feelings were unwanted and unfounded. So she went, quickly and quietly, like was expected of her. She was in her room less than 20 minutes when she heard a commotion outside and decided to check it out. When she got outside she saw that most of the clan was on the ground unconscious and her father and sister, Hanabi, were surrounded by foreign
ninjas that she could not tell where they were. She was worried what would happen if she startled them, so she would wait and see what they wanted before saving her family. Even if it means revealing that she is not the weakling that they all thought she was, that she was just covering the strength that she had trained in secret to obtain. She moved to another spot and saw that these ninjas were from Kumogakure and were cloud ninjas which explained why they had not killed any of the Hyuuga but only knocked them unconscious. Which also explained why her father and sister were surrounded and still alive. Hinata had finally got close enough to hear what they were saying one was gloating about finally taking the Hyuuga down and how they weren't so mighty now. Hinata looked at the ninja surrounding her family and saw 20 maybe 30 ninja. She looked around with her Byakugan and saw no other cloud ninjas in the Hyuuga compound. Hinata knew that if she wanted to
beat these ninjas she would have to really show her strength to her family. She started to plan what to do when one of the ninjas said that they were going to take Hanabi back with them and saw that her father was hurt and bleeding from the shoulder and leg, which would mean that he would be unable to use the jyuken to protect Hanabi.
SWITCHING POINT OF VIEWS TO HIASHI
A cloud ninja was going to take Hanabi and there was nothing that I could do about it. I was to injured and loosing blood slowly but surely. Hanabi my pride and joy was about to be taken and there was nothing absolutely nothing I can do about it. I saw all my clansmen on the ground surrounding me and thought everyone is out here there is nothing we can do, but then I took a look around and saw one and only one person was missing. I then remembered scolding Hinata about her bad feeling and sending her to her room. I then thought when I saw a ninja heading into the house; she is so weak and useless that she would probably be taken out with no trouble at all. Suddenly some of the ninjas just collapsed and I saw her, Hinata was standing behind where the ninja just were and the others were about to attack her. I was so sure that she would lose that I didn't even look. I heard fighting sounds and then they suddenly stopped and Hanabi gasped. I looked up all
the cloud ninjas were down on the ground except for what I presumed was the leader and Hinata. I was in shock that little Hinata could do all that destruction. Then the cloud ninja said, "Well I told the Raikage that we would need more ninja to take down the Heiress to the Hyuga but did he believe me, No of course not." I couldn't believe that this foreign ninja thought more of my daughters skills than I myself did, it was practically unheard of that a stranger know more about the strength of my daughter than I did. The Kumo-nin then said, "Right, SILVER STRIKE?" I was in shock, HOW IN THE WORLD COULD HINATA BE THE SILVER STRIKE, OH MY GOD! It was unbelievable that she could hold that title. Hanabi then asked who the SILVER STRIKE was, I couldn't even begin to tell her but the cloud ninja over heard her talking and said, "Well, well, what's this does your family not know? Hahahahahaha, I can't believe it. Well little girl let me tell you, your sister is famous in kumogakure, tsuichigakure, kurogakure, sunagakure and many more but here it seems." Hanabi asked. "Why is she famous?" "Well she is famous because she took down all her enemies in a silver streak the witness's she left could not identify her because all they could see was silver, nothing else." I had heard just about enough and the clan was waking up, "there is no way that my daughter could be the SILVER STRIKE you must be mistaken." But it seemed that Hinata had, had enough and said, "Father, I know you don't care and don't see so I hid it, but I am the SILVER STRIKE." And without further adieu attacked the cloud ninja. It was like watching a beautiful dance, and then the cloud ninja was dead and all the while Hinata didn't have a scratch. The clan was all finally awake and readjusting to their surroundings, but saw that the person they had put down for so long was standing without any injuries with the leader of the attacking cloud ninjas at her feet. Hinata walked to me and asked, "Father, would you like me to heal your wounds?" I was too stunned to answer so she must have taken my silence as a yes. I watched her get closer and her hand glow green, the brightest green I have ever seen even on the most experienced medic ninjas. She just barely brushed the wound and it was healed, same as with my leg. I was shocked, I can't believe that my weak little Hinata could be the Silver Strike!
Authors Note: I know that this is really short but I really need help this is my first story ever and I hit a road block with ideas. Please Help!