Hey guys its Shadow again! here's the first chapter of Darkness's Revenge. I still have to do the dayclan stuff so please don't be mad if I dont post the DayClan P.O.V, I should be done with all my work in a few days! Is this good or bad? My worst subjects is grammar and english. What should Darkkit's warrior name be? Poll on my page, who should she have a crush on? Sorry just worrying this is my first story.
I shivered in the night me thick pelt not helping, I enviously watched the other kits. I curled up tighter in my nest trying to get warm but failing miserably. My brother Jaykit and my sister Gracefulkit sleeping peacefully next to my mother Shimmerfur. Even on this dark night I could see her fur sparkling.
I sighed and let my eyes wander around the nursery. There was Applefur a very young queen, she was made a warrior when she was ten moons old. She fought off a badger from attacking the queens and here she was sleeping soundly with her own four kits, Mistkit, Rainkit, Bravekit, and Silverkit.
Mistkit was a silver shecat with blue eyes, Rainkit a silvery blue shecat with green eyes, and Silverkit a silver shecat with amber eyes. That is only her shecats, Applefur has another kit Bravekit a tom, he has long golden fur and blue eyes. Quite a handful, I actually kinda envy Applefur she was a very popular cat in NightClan. She had loving parents and careing friends. She even had kits! She easily had the best life in NightClan she was just that nice of a cat, maybe close to Floralleap.
Your wondering who Floralleap is right? Thats a story for another time. My gaze shifted to the next queens and her kits. Spottedecho, a torsell shecat with her two kits Lunakit and Firekit. Lunakit is a white shecat with a strange black crescent moon on her head. Firekit she's a bright ginger shecat.
I shifted my gaze again landing on Dawntail and her kits Tigerkit and Fadeingkit. Dawntail was a pretty golden shecat. Tigerkit well he will probley have shecats fighting over him when he's older. He's a black tom with bright ginger stripes and these devious gray eyes. Not to mention for a kit he was muscular. And Fadeingkit she's a calico with cheerful aqua eyes, she already had toms falling at her feet.
And lastly Gyspsystar, she wouldn't mind me sharing her nest with her but I wouldn't accept its a matter of pride. Anyways it'll help me in leafbare. Gyspsystar was an abysian cat with long persian tail and amber eyes. She was also Shardstar's mate. Wondering why there's two leaders? You'll find out later in the story.
I sighed and stood up. I groomed myself. The reason why I was not in a nest with my mother Shimmerfur? My EYES! There a unusual color, violet. My fur isn't exactly normal either. My fur was long and silky like a kitty pets, but that's not the thing thats wrong with it, on my legs I have blue flame designs. I'm not even sure hows that's possible. I hastily finished grooming myself and laid down once again, closing my eyes and curling up tightly to warm myself and went to sleep.
The sounds of morning woke me up. The soft songs from the birds, the quiet chatter of the half awake cats. I shook my fur out and groomed it down again. I looked around trying to see if anyone was awake seeing no one was I got up and went outside the nursery. Nightclan camp was on the old borders of ShadowClan and WindClan. The cats paid no attention to me. I went next to the leaders' den and waited. The den or the point where they call meetings had soft plushey moss on it that glowed in the night, an apprentice found it when they looked for a new camp for NightClan. The sun shone on the moss invitingly, I smiled as I remembered how warm it was on there. I waited for Shardstar and Redstorm to finish giving out the portals, one portal for one side of the territory and one for the others. Aka former ShadowClan land and former WindClan land.
Sootpaw an old friend from the nursery recently moved into the apprentice den. Sootpaw is a black and white tom with these pale blue eyes he's really fun to play with. Sootpaw was waiting for his mentor I think. He was at the entrance of camp for Shadowclan dawn patrol maybe. He saw me looking and smiled and waved in greeting. Using his tail of corse.
I waved back and smiled. Sootpaw turned around and walk out of the right tunnel (shadowclan)
"Darkkit? What are you doing?" A deep voice asked questioningly.
Hearing that I jumped surprized, turning around I saw it was Shardstar. Shardstar was a dark, long gray fur tom with green eyes.
"Oh hi Shardstar. . . . ." my voice trailed off uneasily I looked at the ground as if I was caught doing something wrong.
I dipped my head in greeting. Shardstar chuckled.
"What are you doing again?" he asked amusement slightly showing in his eyes.
I felt my cheeks growing hot. "Oh, I was just waiting for you and Redstorm to finish doing the portals. I wanted to ask you if I can sunbathe on mossy rock. . . . . . Can I?"I sttured a bit, I looked up at Shardstar hopefully.
He smiled "Of corse you can, just remember to get off before the other kits wake up though wouldn't want a fight between you all" he said playfully.
"Yay!" I yelled happily. Shardstar gave me a stern look. Ohhh it was dawn.
"Opps, sorry" I said softly.
Shardstar chuckled "Well are you going to go up there are what? Theres not much time left" he pointed out.
I smiled gratefully and walked to the front of the den. Leaders and deputies were only allowed up there. I tensed up my muscles and jumped onto the rock making it safely. I let out a sigh of relief, I'm still not used to jumping up on here. "Thanks" I said, hoping Shardstar would hear me. I laid down on the soft plushy moss, I pulled out a feather from the moss with my teeth. The leaders liked to take naps up here too. I turned until I was on my back and let go of the feather, the feather was on my mouth and I blew the feather up in the air. I batted it with my paws to keep it up, watching the sun dance of the feather making it shine. I played with it for a long time, I could hear amused laughter for below.
I felt my cheeks grow hot again but I keep playing. I felt someone jump next to me. I swiftly grabbed the feather from the air and flipped so I was on my belly and jumped up. Without looking next to me I murmured "Is it time to go off now?" I quickly used a paw and took the feather from my mouth. I put it back in the moss making sure it was securely.
"Yes, I just checked on Gypsy and she said the kits were stirring, better go down before the wake up" he whispered.
"Thanks" I jumped down and walked over to the fresh kill I took a medium-sized mouse and waited for everyone to come out. I smiled that Shardstar allowed me to go on mossy rock and no one else. I think he might like me as a daughter not that he would show it. I heard movement from the nursery.
"Hey Darkkit, what cha doing?" I heard my best friend Firekit say sleepily, I giggled.
I stood up and walked over to her with my mouse. I placed the mouse down. "Wake up sleepy head, it's already sunhigh" I softly hitted her in the back of the head with my paw.
"Hey!" She shouted and hit me on the side, hard.
I flinched when she hitted me and showed no other sign of hurt. But it hurted really bad. "Come on lets eat" I felt blood steadily trickle out of my side. Lunakit passed by and gave me a pitying look and shook her head she grabed a mouse from the fresh kill pile and went to the "Kit's area" a secret area for kits in a invasion or something kits go there and elders in the leader's den. Only kits in the "Kit's area" because in the back of the camp is a stone tunnel, its hidden by a bush. The bush has a few spare herbs in it to make it seem like another medican den so they don't come in. I picked up my mouse and hurriedly went to the kit's area. On the way there Lunakit put a paw in front of me and whispered in my ear "Come to the dirt place after we're done eating"
Lunakit eyes darted around wildly before landing on Firekit, "Remember!" she said panicked. She rushed inside of the bush and into the tunnel. I tilted my head questionably and shook it before Firekit came next to me. "Are you just gonna stand there and act like a mousebrain?" Firekit playfully scolded, but the tone in her voice was slightly harsh. Being the naïve cat I am I missed it. We walked into the bush and through the tunnel into a mini forest. AKA the Kits area
The "Kit area" was a very unique place. The was a shallow pool in the back, 4 small trees, a medium cliff on the right, and a sandy circle in the middle. A safe place for kits, yet fun. If a cat got hurt we're in camp so we can just get herbs. Firekit lead me to the sandy circle with the rest of the kits. We sat down and started to talk to Mistkit they we're snickering about something. I looked at them weirdly and ate my food listening to the gossip. I quickly finished it and looked at Lunakit, she was flicking her tail at the tunnel. "Imma throw away the bones and use the dirt place" I announced and got up.
Lunakit got up and followed me, we buried our prey bones at the side of camp and went to the dirt place. "Well what is it?" I whispered.
"Its about Firekit . . . . .