I am so sorry to all my readers of Angelic Demons: Love. This chapter had to be the most difficult to write for me. If it wasn't the unequal fight scene not coming out like I wanted, it was the rescue scene and subsequent conversation of the Akasunas' secret.
I have never had a talent for writing long conversations in which the people weren't moving around or something. I especially didn't know how to translate Edward and Bella's conversation in the restaurant and his car to Gaara and Hinata's discussion on a bathroom floor.
All I need to do is somehow transfer this following conversation in script to my waiting chapter and you will have a full 2,500+ words to enjoy.
(Yes Gaara is a bit out of character-#1 reason why chapter is giving me a bit of difficulty.)
SNEAK PEAK of the long-awaited Chapter 7
GAARA: "You're a vampire."
HINATA: "Technically, yes."
GAARA: "I was just attacked by a vampire."
HINATA: "Yes you were. Can you feel this?" -prod ribs-
GAARA: "OW! Please get away from me."
HINATA: "I need to bandage you."
GAARA: "You are amazingly calm about this."
HINATA: "So are you."
GAARA: "I have the excuse of a possible concussion and definite shock."
HINATA: "Hmm."
GAARA: "God you smell so good."
HINATA: "What?"
GAARA: "What?"
HINATA: "Did you just—"
GAARA: "No."
HINATA: "…right."
GAARA: -groan-
HINATA: "Does that hurt?"
GAARA: "What?"
HINATA: -tighten bandages harder-
GAARA: "OW! Yes!"
SAKURA: "I'm back! Need help?"
HINATA: "We're fine."
SAKURA: "OK!" –winks at GAARA behind HINATA's back-
GAARA: -stare-
HINATA: "That's not helping!"
GAARA: "I don't mind." –strokes HINATA's partially revealed thigh-
SAKURA: "You're sexually harassing my sister."
GAARA: "God what is wrong with me?" –withdraws hand-
SAKURA: "Don't worry. All guys want to do that. They've never had the guts though."
HINATA: "Sakura, leave. You're not helping." –picks up GAARA's shirt and leans forward- "Raise your arms, Gaara."
GAARA: -does so- "Why are you even helping me? Why not bite and get it over with it?"
HINATA: "Gaara, if I bit you, you'd die. Your blood would be too sweet, and filling, burning through every vein of my body—" –suddenly straddling GAARA, pressing her lips to his neck-
SAKURA: -pulls HINATA off- "Let's cool down."
GAARA: "God, weren't you told to leave?"
SAKURA: -rolls eyes- "Yeah, I get that all the time."
