A/N: I thought that I would post up a crack-story my sister and I thought up when we where in Germany and had nothing to do. I plan on later rewrite it into a story format then have it like this. Feel free to sudjest what you think I should change, I'll be listening! But don't be too mean with your coments or Catty will hurt me. (TT TT)
Allergics
~At school~
Roxas: Here Axel, a muffin. It's dubble chocolate, and I made it all by myself! *Proud*
Axel: Thanks, but no. I have to decline on on this one... *sweat drop*
Roxas: Oh... *Pout*
Sora: *Randomly appears* You made Roxas pout, for that you must pay! *Brother-protective mood*
Axel: But I'm allergic to chocolate! *Desperat*
Roxas: Really? *Suprised*
Sora: Roxas, don't listen to him. It's only excuses. *stuffes muffin into Axel's mouth to prove his point*
Axel: Mfth... *Passes out*
Roxas: *.....O O* AXEL!
~After a while~
Axel: *carried into the ambulance*
Sora: Oh, what do you know. You really can be allergic to chocolate...
Riku: *o O; = frightened*
Roxas: Axel... *sobbing*
~At the hospital, next day~
Roxas: I'm really sorry fro the muffin, so this time I made an orange shortcake. *still feeling sad and guilty from yesterday*
Axel: That's nice and all, but... Uhm... No.
Roxas: But why? I promise it's no chocolate in it! *teary eyes*
Axel: *sweat drop* Well it's just that I'm also-
Sora: You made Roxas sad! *murderous aura*
Axel: Oh-uh... *O O;*
Sora: *stuffes cake into Axel's mouth* *pregnat pause*
Roxas: AXEL!! *panics*
Heart monitor: Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep~
~The End~
A/N: Axel didn't die because he was saved by the good doctors at the hospital. And by the way, if you doubt that you can be allergic with chocolate I just want to say that in the movie Charlie and the Chocolate facory(Tim Burton version) they say that you can! And I believe in movies.. Mostly.
Is there something that's called orange shortcake? I'm trying to become a baker but I have no idea if there's something that's called that.. Things that keeps me up at night.
Oh, and I would request if someone would try to make a comic of it.. Doesn't matter if you're good at drawing or not, just give it a try. Please? Anyway, review if you like, but if not; I'm happy to have wasted your time!^^