A/N Hello Everybody! It's me Sharon! The crazy fan girl! This story is a little bit bad I think. Please gimme some advice cos I'm new!Thanks!Cookies for EVERYBODY!( : : )Now to the story!

I groaned as I carried my heavy boxes to my room. My family and I had just moved AGAIN! Still the town had this big pond in the middle and since winter had just started, it was beginning to freeze over. So, all was good. When I had finished unpacking all my stuff, I heard a knock at the door.I skipped downstairs and opened the door to see a smiling lady holding the hand of a little boy."Hello young lady! I'm Mrs Bennet and this is Jamie!We're your new neighbours!"." to meet you I'm parents are in the come in."I got Mrs Bennet to meet my Jamie said "Mom?It's 11 a.m. My friends are waiting.""Ok dear go !Why dont you bring Sharon with you?"."Ok mom!C' mon Sharon!Let's go!" I followed Jamie to a snow fort where a group of kids about Jamie's age were waiting."Hey guys."Jamie said."This is Sharon!". Jamie's group of friends introduced themselves to me."Then Jamie cried"Hey!It's Jack!"And he and his group ran off I ran after them not wanting to be left crowded around a tall dude wearing a blue hoodie and white hair?But when he,my inner girl went CRAZY!This dude was hot on a scale of 1 to10 he was like a 100!His eyes were startling blue like ice placed on a blue surface,and he looked at so I amlike so totallynot like this!I pulled it together and walked up to him."Hi." was allI said andhe looked shocked. The kids began topart around him and I realised he was not wearing any shoes and the hoodie was probably the warmest thing he was wearing."You can see me?"he asked in a very surprised voice.' ..Should I not?"I asked."Who are you?"

A/N OK PEOPLE!HOW DID I DO SHOULD I CONTINUE?OR,IS THIS S0 NOT FOR .Anyway pm me ok?Toodles