DaniFenton12- Okay, I am doing a commentary on My Immortal. I already wrote a parody, why not a commentary? Here we go :(
Disclaimer- DaniFenton12 does not own My Immortal or Harry Potter. Just her commentary.

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) Not really. 2 my gf (ew not in that way) I wasn't even thinking of that way. raven, bloodytearz666 You didn't capitilize her name.. 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. She so did not help 'wif da spelling' U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life I feel bad for you, Justin. u rok 2! MCR ROX!

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way MARY SUE and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) Ebony and Black are the same thing with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back were you born with that coloring? and icy blue eyes like limpid tears ..wait. WHAT? and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!).Okay, bye! JK. I know who she is. I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. Honey, you wish you dated him. It would be gross if you thought your relative was hot..okay, maybe not but why is your last name the same? I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. ...Again, WHAT? I have pale white skin. Obviously.. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England Oh, God no.. where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). Seventeen is implyed in Seventh year. I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) Not yet anyways. and I wear mostly black. No really? You've said black about what four times? I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. Is Hot Topic even in England? For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it Oh, shit. Why don't you tear my eyes out and feed them to my dog? and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets Wait..Fishnets? and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, Aren't you already pale if you're a vampire? Oh here we go.I have pale white skin black eyeliner and red eye shadow. Um..Eww I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. Yep. The world is ending. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them. ...how rude..

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was... Draco Malfoy! Oh hell no.

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly...Shyly?

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away. Forever?

AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz! No. It sucks.

DaniFenton12- On to chapter two. *sarcasm* Yay