Hi everyone! This is my first fanfic, so constructive criticism is welcome. It is set basically right where Eclipse left off, except I skipped over the whole telling Charlie part. Enjoy!
Bpov
I was having a great time at Angela's house. She had called me in the morning to see if I wanted to hang out, and I had readily agreed. The thought that I would soon be separated from her and my other friends and family made my heart ache, and I wanted to spend as much time with her as possible. We were talking about colleges and other school related stuff, but I noticed that Angela seemed a little on edge.
"Hey, Angela, are you O.K.?" I wondered. "You seem a little distracted."
"What?" she asked startled. "Oh, no, I'm fine. Do you want something to drink? I'll get you some water." With that, she stood up and left the room.
This left me worried. Angela normally was a very calm person, and she seemed very agitated. 'Maybe something is up with Ben,' I thought. I started to stand up to go after her, but, typically, I tripped and fell on my face.
"Oof!" the breath rushed out of me. I lay on the floor for a minute to get my breath back, and just as I was starting to get up, something caught my eye. Angela's room was very neat, and the brightly shimmering egg sized marble seemed very out of place. Just then, Angela wandered back into the room (without any refreshments).
"Angela." I confronted her. "What's wrong? And what is this?"
At the sight of the marble, Angela seemed shocked. She stumbled over to her bed, sat down, and took a deep breath. "Bella," she said. "I have something to tell you."
Sorry for the short first chapter! I will update soon, so bear with me!
Also, constructive criticism is welcome. Please review.