A third poem I wrote. Sorry about all the poems! I keep having people tell me I'm an AMAZING poet, so, yeah. Don't worry, I WILL write stories, not just poems. I just want to try something different and see how people like it. Well, yeah, about the story. I believe it is REALLY OOC, just to tell you, so beware if you don't like that. Don't like, don't read. Well, yeah, enjoy!
"Throughout the many times I have tried to confess
I just couldn't do so
I'm very obsessed
With you whom I've loved through thick and thin
But you're with my best friend
I cannot hurt him
I hope you understand these feelings I have for you
I've had them forever
Just like I could meow
Peter just couldn't understand what I'm saying
So don't tell him
I am just praying
Lois, I know it cannot be between us
It hurts me so
I feel like I'll cuss
I hope you understand my feelings in this
Please Lois
Understand my bliss!"
Each word of this poem brought tears to Lois's eyes
His feelings for her
She always seemed like she'd cry
It could not be too serious between them
She was a married woman
He could not redeem them
The feelings she had felt for this longing individual
Were almost real
They almost seemed incredible
She wrote him using these final words
"Brian, I'm flattered
But it's absurd!
I understand the feelings you have
But you can not have me
But to me, your feelings will always be known
I love you, Brian."
I know. Sappy ending, unrhymed ending, etc. Well, anyway, how'd you think of it? Think I should continue writing poems or should I stop? Honestly, I want you, the READERS, words to tell me if I should stop, or continue. Hope you like it. This is probably the most interesting poem I have written of the three. Well, please review! I want to know what you think of it!