I read what I had posted on "Pegasus of the Moon" and found many
mistakes in it. I like the plot, but the fic wasn't that good and I hadn't
updated in forever so I decided to revise it I hope this will go better
than it did before.
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Disclaimer: I do NOT own Yu-Gi-Oh or Sailor Moon. YGO belongs to Kazuki Takahashi and SM belongs to Naoko Takeuchi.
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Neo-Queen Serenity looked at what were the remains of Crystal Tokyo. Everything had been destroyed in the battle except for Diana, Sailor Pluto, her daughter, and herself. No one had expected this to happen, not even Pluto.
She looked down at her daughter, who she held in her arms. Her daughter, Princess Usagi, was only a few months old. Serenity managed to prevent her daughter from being killed, though she was losing strength by the minute. Too bad Serenity couldn't say the same for anyone else, including herself. She had very little energy left. She knew that she must use the last of her strength to send Diana, her daughter, and the crystal back in time. Her daughter would be re-born in the past and Diana will too. After a while Diana would know what had happened and find Usagi, or Chibiusa for short, everything. If Chibiusa helped the senshi, perhaps they could prevent this from ever happening. Using the last of her strength, she went through with her plan.
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Cynthia Crawford held her three-month old daughter in her arms. She and her husband, Pegasus J. Crawford, had named their daughter Serena, Rini for short. Rini had pink hair and russet eyes. What confused Pegasus and Cynthia was that Rini had been born with a crescent moon mark on her forehead. The mark later disappeared, but it was still confusing. Cynthia gently placed Rini in her crib, and then went to bed herself.
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There's the prologue. Next chapter Rini will be a teenager. Reviews, suggestions, and constructive criticism are all welcome, but flames are not. 3 reviews=next chapter.
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Disclaimer: I do NOT own Yu-Gi-Oh or Sailor Moon. YGO belongs to Kazuki Takahashi and SM belongs to Naoko Takeuchi.
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Neo-Queen Serenity looked at what were the remains of Crystal Tokyo. Everything had been destroyed in the battle except for Diana, Sailor Pluto, her daughter, and herself. No one had expected this to happen, not even Pluto.
She looked down at her daughter, who she held in her arms. Her daughter, Princess Usagi, was only a few months old. Serenity managed to prevent her daughter from being killed, though she was losing strength by the minute. Too bad Serenity couldn't say the same for anyone else, including herself. She had very little energy left. She knew that she must use the last of her strength to send Diana, her daughter, and the crystal back in time. Her daughter would be re-born in the past and Diana will too. After a while Diana would know what had happened and find Usagi, or Chibiusa for short, everything. If Chibiusa helped the senshi, perhaps they could prevent this from ever happening. Using the last of her strength, she went through with her plan.
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Cynthia Crawford held her three-month old daughter in her arms. She and her husband, Pegasus J. Crawford, had named their daughter Serena, Rini for short. Rini had pink hair and russet eyes. What confused Pegasus and Cynthia was that Rini had been born with a crescent moon mark on her forehead. The mark later disappeared, but it was still confusing. Cynthia gently placed Rini in her crib, and then went to bed herself.
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There's the prologue. Next chapter Rini will be a teenager. Reviews, suggestions, and constructive criticism are all welcome, but flames are not. 3 reviews=next chapter.