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The pain –
Telling Rory-
Amy sat close to Rory on their small sofa facing TV. She couldn't pay attention to it . She was still confused about what she had just discovered only hours ago when he was working at the hospital. The stunning discovery the pregnancy test had told her and the shock she felt fill herself. She could believe it never, not after last time. The way that over in her head she kept telling herself... You're pregnant.
It was late around nine; she lay in bed unable to sleep. Amy knew Rory was still awake too but didn't feel like a chat. She tried to plan how to tell him, she doubted he would believe her not after the situations before. In the end her decision was to right a letter. At first in sounded cheesy and more like she was asking her year 5 crush to the school dance. But as she came to the terms with it she lay there and planned what she would right.
Amy's Pov-
Rory was at the hospital... again. He said he will start to cut his hours down more so we can spend more time together. It's been a while since I've seen the Doctor he plans to visit soon with my daughter, River. I feel I should start writing this letter he'll be home soon and I don't know how I could bring to say the words "I'm pregnant" in front of him. I can be a right shit when it comes to love. I never was very good in school, and it took me a fucking while to realise Rory had a crush on me for years. I started to right my dopey letter I hardly knew what to put. Usually when writing a letter words just come out, but this felt like a brick wall.
It took me forever; I left it on the kitchen counter where he always places his keys when coming through the front door. I went to find a good book to read, and settled down with a cup of tea.
Rory's Pov-
As I drove back from the hospital I started to think about Amy. I loved her so much she was the joy of my life. We would never be able to experience our own children growing up. But we had a River, and she was amazing. Maybe we would adopt in the future. Amy would always get upset that she could never provide me with children but i never minded.
No ones pov -
A Rory whizzed up the road he was too concentrated on his thoughts of he wife. That he never stopped at the light and as a speeding car came down the road smashing into the side. Spinning him around till the top of the car was dented deep down. Many people got out of their cars running to the casualties. Calling the police and ambulance to come.
But Amy knew none of this until she got the phone call.
Just a small first paragraph. I'll make the next one much longer.
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