I got bored one night and when i get bored my mind well let say wanders around? but i thought of this idea and i really liked it. Most the chapters will be short like only 2 pages on word unless i don't want to end the chapter just yet ... but please do read on and review.
I don't own Naruto or anyone from that anime just my characters but you know i do dream ...
"LET ME GO! LET ME GO!" Kirin screamed at the top of her lungs. She was no one important and she had no enemies so why had she been kidnapped? Her captors tied her hand behind her back and pulled her off to god knows where. "LET ME GO!" She screamed again, but her captors ignored her again. People started clapping and cheering all a sudden, it was so close it startled her.
There was a man's voice really close "May we present a special gift to one of the kings" … yes that's exactly what the man said but jesus did he have to yell it was hurting her ears. They walked down a stone-like hallway and through a curtain.
"And here she is … the desert rose" The same voice of the loud man announced and Kirin could finally see where she was. This was Konoha that hidden village of ninjas but why did this remind her of ancient Egypt. Her captors pushed her towards the 8 guys called kings. The pony-tailed king got down from his throne and walked towards Kirin. She growled at him and bared her teeth.
"Desert rose huh?" the pony-tailed king cupped her face in his hands and pulled her into a kiss. Her eyes got wide. He forced his tongue in her mouth. She tried to pull away but the kiss just became violent. Her only escape, she bit him.
"Gah!" Now he was trying to pull away from her. She growled at him again.
"What a drag..." the pony-tailed king pushed Kirin towards another two of other the kings, one with blonde spiky hair and the other with messy brown hair and red face paint "Here you two fight over her".
"I'll take her" The messy brown haired king spoke up.
"Not a chance Kiba I want her" The blonde king said.
"Jeez Shikamaru you just had to tell them to fight" This king looked kind of funny, his hair looked like a duck's butt.
"Shut up Sasuke"
"Not a chance!"
"She's MINE Naruto!"
"Only if you can get to her first"
Just as Naruto said that both him and Kiba lunged at Kirin. Kirin was too dumbfounded to even move. Suddenly the rope, that is keeping her hands tried, was yanked backward. Kirin flew back and landed in the lap of another king.
"Gaara!" Kiba and Naruto yelled.
"Settle down she'll stay tonight with Kiba and tomorrow with Naruto" Shino, the king sitting right next to Gaara said.
"Let me go" Kirin growled and bit Gaara's hand but he seemed pretty unphased by it. She jumped out of his lap and ran, but Gaara still had control of the rope. He pulled on the rope, swiftly and real hard which made Kirin fall forward.
"LET ME GO!" She screamed as loud as she possibly could "LET ME GO! LET ME GO LET ME GO LET ME GO!!!"
Someone finally cut the rope and picked up Kirin "Are you hungry?" He asked. He was the biggest of the kings. She looked at him clearly confused.
"Choji?"
"Choji!"
"Give her!"
Choji ignored the other kings and asked Kirin again "Well are you hungry?" She shook her head slowly.
"Choji!" Naruto and Kiba tackled Choji, who fell to the ground under them and Kirin now free again ran. The massive crowd that had filled the corridor had departed long ago probably when the kings first started fighting. Kirin tried to remember the way her captors had brought her in but in truth she hadn't paid attention at all. She reached the end of a hallway and ran left, a dead end. She turned around and ran to the left.
"Here she comes"
Kirin ran though some curtains only to end up in the same she stated in with every king in the room staring at her.
"When I find her I'll make her mine!" Kiba could be heard somewhere behind her.
"Well when I find her she'll be MINE" Naruto was somewhere close too.
Kirin backed herself into a corner. A second later Kiba ran into the room followed by Naruto.
"Rose! I found her first!" Kiba yelled and went to claim his prize. Kirin kept trying to back up farther against the walk she had her teeth bared and a glare that could kill.
"Come on rose" Kiba tried to coax her out of the corner. Neji who hadn't said anything or moved at all since Kirin arrived appeared beside her, hit a pressure point and knocked her out. Everyone got quiet.
"What? I was tired of their little game I've got a life unlike you losers" Neji folded his arms.
"Oh yeah we all know your life revolves around Tenten"
"Oh shut up! I'm leaving" Neji said and took his leave.
"Well now I have someone and I'm leaving too" Kiba pick the unconscious Kirin up.
"Don't play too dirty," Choji laughed. Kiba blushed luckily he was already leaving so no one could see but if they did they'd never let him forget. She sure was pretty though with her brown hair and pink eyes defiantly unique. He'd have to do it now.
"When you wake up Rose I'll make you mine"
"Hey Shikamaru wanna get some ramen?" Naruto asked.
"Nah"
"Fine Choji?"
"Oh yeah!"
"Sasuke?"
"Sure" Sasuke sighed. Naruto and Choji got all excited and ran ahead. Good thing ichiraku's wasn't that far.
Ok so there is the first chapter
if i didn't make it obvious enough Neji and Tenten are together
and if anyone's ever seen Prince of Egypt the beginning was suppose to be kind of like that well the part where the Zipporah was given to Moses and Rameses and she was tried up with a rope ... if anyone hasn't seen it you really should
oh and i might have spelt ichiraku's wrong but you know it's that ramen shop Naruto is always going to.
