My body keeps shaking at the mear thought of seeing your limp body laying in streems of blood running down the street...

The demon sat there ontop of the main building on 7 and Princent st. It was raining as if all the men who died in this god forsaken war was morning the still body that laid to the still body was a yunge man,he nelt near the stilled body,tears filled his eyes as they slowly slid down his man with the tears had long red hair that was puled into a ponyt-tail,and he had little cresit moon shape tattoes near the sides of his man lying down had long black hair,and he had red rubby eyes that,though his cheast nolonger had a heart beat within it,his eyes were still gazing up at the crying man making him sob even worse."why why why WHY" he shauted into the night,but of coures nobody herd exept for the horrible demon that did this to my best friend,my companian,my friend. SO YA. this is my first story well theres going to be another chapter so dont worri it will be way longer. tell me how you fell about it give me some ideas R&R! :)