Okay so this is just a little part of my story..Im not sure if i should carry it on or not...my first time writing a story that isn't a comic. So..should i carry it on..or scratch it and start on a new story?

Nightmare~

The rusted bars of the cage that kept me prisoner, the screams of children around me, blood over the marble flooring and the masked faces with laughing grins. These were the memories that haunted my dreams. Chasing my mind every time my eyes closed. The last thing I saw was one masked man holding a knife above me before I awoke.

My eyes shot open, I noticed I was breathing heavily.
"SEBASTIAN" I yelled, within seconds a tall man wearing black was next to my bed side. "What is it? My Lord!" Said the dark figure with a concerned look.
"Where is my morning tea? I expect it to be brought to me when I wake!" I squealed.
"I'm sorry Young Master, I will fetch it right this instant." He said as he was leaving the room.