I'm new at writing but I got really interested after reading a lot of fictions writing by fans. This is my first story and I hope a lot of readers read it and leave review, good or bad; I need to know so I can keep improving.
Disclaimer: I DON'T OWN DBZ balabalabala…I'm just borrowing the characters for a story so don't sue me cuz I own nothing of value to anyone!
Need to know: first, Goku is still alive not dead; Gohan didn't stop training over the years and he's not a dorky, more confident around girls, Videl is still a little tomboyish but not as much she has a boyfriend, there is no saiyanman just a the Gold Fighter (I think saiyanman makes Gohan look stupid and dorky) …… Italicized means thoughts
Summary: Gohan is just about to start high school at Orange Star High School and he's going to have to face more powerful than Cell: falling in love with a taken girl…and what's going to happen when his secrets start to get revealed. Oh Boy how is Gohan going to survive this big mess, well find out in SECRETS REVEALED!!!
Chapter 1: High School Terror
As the sun rose into the morning sky, a young man (17 years old) was soundly sleeping or at least he was a minute ago.
"GOHAN WAKE UP!!!" yelled his younger (7 years old) brother, Goten as he bounced on his older brother's stomach. Still Gohan didn't wake up.
Little Goten had to think (surprising!) of a way to wake up Gohan. He finally had an idea just then he yelled, "Gohan, mommy said that if you aren't awake and in the kitchen in the 15 minutes you won't get any breakfast!"
Gohan's eyes open intently as Goten was flung out of the bad when Gohan got off the bed, dress and literally flew out of the bedroom. Goten let out a little grin and though, "yeah! Now I know how to wake him up when I want to play." Goten the hurried downstairs to get his breakfast before it gets cold or someone else eats it.
"Good morning, mom and dad." said Gohan as he looked for his plate in front of chair. He sat and devoured his food.
"Good morning, son." Both of his parents said in sync.
HIs mother was Chichi Son, one of the strongest women in the world while his father was Goku Son, the strongest man alive in the universe. His brother, Goten Son, and himself, Gohan Son, were lucky to get their fighting skills and spirits.
Goten ran downstairs and started to devoured his food like his father and brother as his mother watched already used to this.
Chichi stood up announce that she had an announcement but the three saiyans didn't do anything except keeping eating. Chichi looked very annoyed and angry so she took out the saiyan's weakness and no it's that their tail but the one and only Frying Pan of Doom!!
At that précised second, all saiyans had a bump on the top of their heads and trying to rub it while screaming their lungs off.
"Chichi, why did you do that?" cried Goku in pain.
"Yeah mom why did you do that we didn't do anything this time?" questioned both the Sons brothers.
"Didn't do anything? I was talking to you and you didn't listen so I had to get your attention and now I have an announcement to say that affects you, Gohan mostly." Replied Chichi
"Really mom, what is it? Is it more food just for me?" reported a hungry Gohan.
"NO, it's isn't food it's about becoming a scholar I have decided to send you to the best high school near us: Orange Star High School in Satan City." A happy Chichi announced.
"WHAT! HIGH SCHOOL!" three very surprised saiyans yelled. "Wow I never thought Chichi was going to send you to high school, Gohan congratulations." added Goku.
"What's high school?" a naïve Goten asked. Gohan said.
"But mom, why do I need to go to high school if I probably know more than the teachers themselves?"
"No Excuses, Gohan you will go to high school because you need to get your degree, need to make friends your own age and I…I want grandchildren I'm not getting any younger you know. So we will go to the high school today to get you enrolled, get your schedule, and for you to get to know the teachers, principal, and school grounds and you start school tomorrow." answered Chichi to Gohan's question.
"By "we" you mean Gohan and you, right?" a curious Goku asked.
"Yes and you as well Goku." replied a calmed Chichi.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!! This can't be happening to me, thought Goku, I got to find a way out of this oh come on Goku think harder then he saw his salvation sitting and eating right next to him yes I go it.
"Gosh Chichi I forget to mention that I promised Goten that I would play with him all day so I guess I can't go to the school with you, sorry but if I don't keep my promise than Goten will never trust me again." called out Goku as he dragged a clueless Goten out the door, but suddenly came back into the house for his breakfast and ran back out. When they were far away from the house, Goku scratched his head and thinking wow that was a close one.
Gohan and Chichi blinked a few times then Chichi broke the silence by saying, "Well that's your father alright. Anyway let's go Gohan we're going to be late I'll be calling the flying nimbus so come on son."
Gohan still shocked of how his father was able to get out of this situation while he couldn't surprised him because as many knows Goku isn't the brightest crayon in the box but he had to obey his mother or else.
About an hour later Chichi and Gohan were walking towards a huge building (they started to walk since they got in the city because they didn't want unnecessary attention) know as: Orange Star High School. When they entered the school, they saw it had a lot of space and many classrooms and then they saw a door with a sign that read FRONT OFFICE. As they entered nice secretaries greeted them so Chichi told her why they were there and were directed straight to the principal's office. In the principal's office, Mr. McKnight, greeted them just as nice as the secretary and congratulated Gohan for his perfect score on the entry exams (Chichi made Gohan take some exams and Gohan didn't even know why well now he knows).
"Well Gohan Son, you will be a great addition to the Orange High student body. Look son, your mom just needs to fill and sign some entry papers so you can walk around the school so get to know the building so you won't get lost tomorrow." suggested Mr. McKnight.
"Ah...Err...Well sure why not, right. May I go, mom?" answered Gohan.
"Well of course, Gohan go head but meet me back here in about half an hour to an hour, ok?" Chichi replied.
"Sure mom whatever you said." yelled a happy Gohan to his mother as he ran out the door.
Gohan was walking through the classrooms, hallways, gym, and library and finally and probably his favorite places in the whole school the cafeteria.
Gohan was about to head back to the front office when it happen he bumped into someone, well a girl cause she screamed like one, but he caught her before she fell and caught her books with another hand.
He was about to said 'I'm sorry or excuse me' but he stopped as he looked into her beautiful blue eyes....what was more surprising was the surprised girl was staring into his black eyes.
Well that the first chapter of my first fan fiction story.
What did you guys think about it? Is it good or not? Can this story be continued to become a great hit? Do I have what it takes to become a good author? Suggestions are accepted as well!!!!!!
Please review, good or bad, I won't take it offensively, but I need to know.
'Wow that's a beautiful girl and those blue eyes are hypnotic to me' thought Gohan.
'Man, he was so cute... I can't think like that I just met the guy and I have a boyfriend' thought Videl.
Next Up in SECRETS REVEALED
Chapter 2: FORBIDDEN ATTRACTIONS
