SilentDark: This is my very first fanfiction. I'm trying my hardest to make
it really good. Don't be mad if I get the whole personalities wrong for the
YYH gang, I haven't seen many EPPs. But I think I got the IY chars nailed
down ok. Don't flame, this is new. I'm sorry if this turns out to be piled
into one big bunch, It's my fault, my computer keeps messing up. Let's see,
Action/Adventure & Romance. I think that's how it'll stay. R&R! No flames
please.
Flying Away
Ch 1. Suki The Thief
A girl with long silver hair, violet eyes, a silver fox tail that reaches to her knees, and a torn white outfit was running quickly away from a dark, looming castle. She had been running for hours and yet the lifeless guards still chased her across the barred wasteland that was the Sakurai Kingdom. She had been prisoner there in the Sakurai Ruler's palace. Naraku his name was, the dreadful beast. Calling her as his mate, the ritual would have been that night if she hadn't run. He even sent his only people after her in her hasty retreat. There lay no villages across his land, no towns or anything anywhere. You could barely find a tree for shade, though you wouldn't need shade for his dark cloud of disaster lay across all owned by him. Like a dessert she was running through.
Her adopted brothers had been trying to get her away for but their ship cannot enter through the muck and to travel on foot as she was doing would be suicide! Yet they're are waiting for her at the end of the area, their ship is so close to her, The ship of thieves. She and her brothers are thieves and collect many crew members with any job.
They reuse almost everything and are the best there is. Every job they have a code, if a guard tries to send an alarm, kill them. If a maid or someone the sort tries to set the alarm, if they try to hide, knock them out. If they are under fourteen, render them defenseless and tie them up, unless the agree to become a crew member of their own free will, then once done with gathering the goods, bring them aboard the ship as new members of the crew. Many people are one the ship. The ship that is only meters away from the running girl.
"Suki!" Her brothers Inuyasha and Sesshomaru yell to her s the let down one of the many rope ladders and start up the engine. She grabs it and jumps on as they take off, leaving the wasted Sakurai Kingdom ruled by the vile being Naraku.
"Inuyasha, Sesshomaru!" Suki yelled as her adopted siblings pulled her completely aboard the floating ship of the thieves Chika-Akako. "I thought I'd never see you two again!"
"So did we. We thought you'd never get out of there!" Inuyasha replied.
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Yea, that's my prologue. Very short, I know. No flames, just constructive criticism for those of you who could help me out. It's my first fic and may be kinda stupid to you all, but it's a YYH IY crossover. No YYH chars yet, but the'll come soon. This chppie was just like a preview and an introduction to Suki. She is the main chara though. I can't really do all that well with other people's personality it's really hard to write a fanfic. I'm much better at writing my own stories, like on fiction press.com. It's something for u to tell me if you like or not. I really hope you do like it though.
Here's my fic recommendation: Red Flowers by Anonymousey226273 (who I believe is the best by the way)
: After returning to Kaede's village from shard hunting, Kagome and Inuyasha get into a fight about her leaving. While cooling off in her world, Kagome is transferred to a new school, where she meets a weird group of friends. They turn out to be spirit detectives who, shortly after meeting her and learning about her life in the feudal era, are assigned to help her collect shikon shards. Kikyou is in here, by the way. But where? What romance will bloom in the new group? Read and find out! ^-^
Pairings are:::::: Kag/kur/yoko - Yusuke/keiko - Sango/Hiei - Kuabaka/Yukina - Kik/surprise - Miroku/Megumi - Inu/OC
Hope you read it!
Posted 1-3-2003
Edited 1-3-2003
Flying Away
Ch 1. Suki The Thief
A girl with long silver hair, violet eyes, a silver fox tail that reaches to her knees, and a torn white outfit was running quickly away from a dark, looming castle. She had been running for hours and yet the lifeless guards still chased her across the barred wasteland that was the Sakurai Kingdom. She had been prisoner there in the Sakurai Ruler's palace. Naraku his name was, the dreadful beast. Calling her as his mate, the ritual would have been that night if she hadn't run. He even sent his only people after her in her hasty retreat. There lay no villages across his land, no towns or anything anywhere. You could barely find a tree for shade, though you wouldn't need shade for his dark cloud of disaster lay across all owned by him. Like a dessert she was running through.
Her adopted brothers had been trying to get her away for but their ship cannot enter through the muck and to travel on foot as she was doing would be suicide! Yet they're are waiting for her at the end of the area, their ship is so close to her, The ship of thieves. She and her brothers are thieves and collect many crew members with any job.
They reuse almost everything and are the best there is. Every job they have a code, if a guard tries to send an alarm, kill them. If a maid or someone the sort tries to set the alarm, if they try to hide, knock them out. If they are under fourteen, render them defenseless and tie them up, unless the agree to become a crew member of their own free will, then once done with gathering the goods, bring them aboard the ship as new members of the crew. Many people are one the ship. The ship that is only meters away from the running girl.
"Suki!" Her brothers Inuyasha and Sesshomaru yell to her s the let down one of the many rope ladders and start up the engine. She grabs it and jumps on as they take off, leaving the wasted Sakurai Kingdom ruled by the vile being Naraku.
"Inuyasha, Sesshomaru!" Suki yelled as her adopted siblings pulled her completely aboard the floating ship of the thieves Chika-Akako. "I thought I'd never see you two again!"
"So did we. We thought you'd never get out of there!" Inuyasha replied.
^__________________________________________________________________^
Yea, that's my prologue. Very short, I know. No flames, just constructive criticism for those of you who could help me out. It's my first fic and may be kinda stupid to you all, but it's a YYH IY crossover. No YYH chars yet, but the'll come soon. This chppie was just like a preview and an introduction to Suki. She is the main chara though. I can't really do all that well with other people's personality it's really hard to write a fanfic. I'm much better at writing my own stories, like on fiction press.com. It's something for u to tell me if you like or not. I really hope you do like it though.
Here's my fic recommendation: Red Flowers by Anonymousey226273 (who I believe is the best by the way)
: After returning to Kaede's village from shard hunting, Kagome and Inuyasha get into a fight about her leaving. While cooling off in her world, Kagome is transferred to a new school, where she meets a weird group of friends. They turn out to be spirit detectives who, shortly after meeting her and learning about her life in the feudal era, are assigned to help her collect shikon shards. Kikyou is in here, by the way. But where? What romance will bloom in the new group? Read and find out! ^-^
Pairings are:::::: Kag/kur/yoko - Yusuke/keiko - Sango/Hiei - Kuabaka/Yukina - Kik/surprise - Miroku/Megumi - Inu/OC
Hope you read it!
Posted 1-3-2003
Edited 1-3-2003