This is just a thank you and a plead for tips

by dark dragon of sorrows

I've read your replies about the bodyguard and wish for you to give me some help to make it better for you to like

I wish to thank you for those who gave me your opinions and I wish to clarify that in this story those that live in civilized areas act like and those who live in the wild act more like animals by not using our weapons.

Again thank you for the replies and in the future I plan to please you all.

Your servant,

Dark Dragon of Sorrow

P.S. Give me tips to make things better.