Well, hello! I got into avenger fanfiction from my friend Prontobadjuju and, after reading about 15 avenger fics(good jobs by the way) I decided to do this fic. This fic may or may not have the movie characters. now, I really hate to use characters from the movie because I constantly worry that i misrepresented them. so, i might have Prontobadjuju help me with the movie characters if I use them...anyway, this is an original idea. it's another group. like the avengers but not those characters. if you want to give me an O.C. here's the sheet.

Villain/hero(i need a few villains though send me heroes if ya want)

name:

mutant or human

Powers/skills:

personality:

background:

Bio:

weapons:

civilian clothes/outfit:

super-suit description:

gender: male/female/cheese

physique(description of body.):

hero name:

p.m. me your O.C.

phew, on to the fic

I do not own avengers in any way, shape or form.


(descriptions will be at the bottom)

Hello, my name is Ray Savage, I am a scrounger and a thief. Before you go and judge me, I only take what I need to survive. Ever since I ran away from home(Hey, my Dad was an asshole, and my Mom is dead) I've been living on the streets, moving from city to city. I even learned some martial arts from a very kind sensei that took me in for a year. Pity I can't remember the names of the moves.

Anyway, I'm now following a suspicious looking fellow with a briefcase. Now, usually I get my funds from drug dealers by stealing the cash during payment, so I followed him. He enters into a warehouse. I take a longer route to stay hidden. As I'm crouching another man with a briefcase walks in as well. As the first man opens up his case to show the cash, I bolt. As I streak past I snag the cash-case and close it in one move. The second man pulls out a gun. He's quicker to react than the other guy, who's staring in disbelief as I'm making a break for it. A shot rings out and the case jolts in my hand. I look back to see them pursuing. I circle around the crates and get back to where we started. I hear their footsteps drawing closer and I open up the second case. In the second case is a pair of red gloves, two watches and an outfit. I put on the gloves and watches and just as I'm fumbling with the second watch, the men round the corner.

In desperation I throw a premature punch and miss badly. At least my hand missed. A disc, about a foot in diameter and attached to a chain, sprung out of the watch, extruded spikes and hit the guy straight in the center of his chest. I heard multiple cracks and I knew he wasn't coming out of here alive. on a hunch I whip my other hand diagonally and another disc, this one cloaked in darkness, sprung out and sliced his chest as well. Luckily for him, I only skimmed the surface of his skin. Making a shallow, yet long, cut. I then ran before he had a chance to recover from the injury shock.


(The next day)

I sneaked into another empty warehouse to practice with my new items. After about two hours I learned that my gloves absorbed shock, (I didn't feel pain when I punched a wall) My right disk and chain could emit darkness like a Tron light-bike and I could control when it emitted, my left disk could be enveloped in flames according to my will, I also learned that the chains and disks listened to my thoughts and also could commune with me telepathically. I learned that my right disk, the one that made darkness, was named Tenebris and the one that made fire was named Scintillae. I talked to them for another hour and had them coach me while I was training. I fell asleep right after lunch. I woke up at around 8:00pm and decided to rob once more before going into mercenary work.

(A/N I have no idea how a bank robbery works other than the 'stick 'em up and hand me cash' thing. that's done with a gun though. a melee robbery is extremely hard for me to make I'm having him break and enter into a jewellery shop ) I activate Scintillae's fire and melt through the glass wall separating me from the jewels. I open my pack and fill it up with necklaces, bracelets and rings. I put one of the rings on my finger

"Oh, Sarah you shouldn't have!" I say, then giggle to myself before taking it off and tossing it into my pack. I didn't hear it land. I swipe with Tenebris and create a darkness wall. I snag my pack and run.

(A/N Ray seems to run away a lot.) I hear some metal banging and see a metal shield hit the wall beside me, ricochet off it and sail toward my face. I matrix-slide to dodge and use my disks in spike-mode to scale the side of a building quickly. I roll over the ledge and stand up. I look down from my height to see a figure run to the alley and jump from wall to wall to climb to the roof of the opposite building. He throws his shield at me again. I pop out Tenebris but don't extend the chain. I use the dark disk like a shield to block his shield. I bounces off my disc and returns back to him. He catches and throws it again. 'Idiot, doesn't he know that I can block or dodge all his throws?' I put the disk back up again to block the flying object. *Clang! tzzzzt* I fly backwards from the shock. The figure catches his shield again and jumps to the roof that I'm on. I cough and shake off the effect of the electricity.
I extend both of my discs and chains and stand like Whiplash when he had his whips out. Yeah, I was in the crowd at the race. I do an over hand strike with Scintillae and a sweep with Tenebrae. My opponent jumps over the sweep while blocking the overhand with his shield. I whistle in admiration of the evasion.

"Good job, a lot of people would be hard-pressed to dodge that combo." I say

"I'm not a lot of people" he answers, then he throws the shield again, I dodge it.

"You know that there's only one way to throw a shield, and that is in a straight line."

"Unless it ricochets" *Clang*

"Well, shit" The electric shield hits me dead in the spine. It shocks me into unconsciousness. When I wake up, my pack is gone, a note's attached to my forehead, and when I checked the store that I robbed, everything was back in place. I picked up the note and read:

'My name is Aegis, I'm a unofficial city protector. Whoever you are, do not commit any more crimes or, you will face me again.'

"Ahh, so that's his name. Aegis. I think I'll rethink my original idea for a job." I make the mental shift from mercenary to superhero.


well, this is my first time trying this style. please tell me how to make it better to read. and about the content: I drew the characters about a year before making this fic and after browsing through a lot of ideas, i decided to use my characters. now, yes, I think that i ripped off Captain America as well, then again, i made my own type of Iron Man too. Look, I wanted to draw super heroes , you try making a badass team with remembering every other superhero, and have them in your head screaming 'BASE IT OFF ME!' try guessing this superhero's name. the one in this chapter. and who I based it off of.