A small poem about Itachi's final thoughts as he lay dying. Review please.

I watched him train every day

I watched him as he made his clay bombs

I watched as his blue eyes

Once filled with childish innocence

Became filled with wisdom and understanding

I watched him as he grew from a boy to a man

I watched him when he thought nobody was watching

I watched until I could watch no more

Until my eyes grew too blind to see the soft face of the gentle blonde

I remember his blonde hair blowing in the wind

I remember his blue eyes filled with hatred

I remember the days when he worked

Sometimes for hours on end

At creating a device to nullify the effect of the sharingan

I remember when he would sing softly to himself

Completely unaware I was listening

I remember what others would likely forget

I lay dying now

Dying with no regrets

Except one

I shall die without ever knowing the taste of those lucious lips

Or the feel of that muscular body

I shall die

Without knowing what it feels like to love and be loved

I shall die

Without having ever told the one I love how I feel

I shall die

A lonely death

Since I had never bothered to befriend that home-sick blonde

I shall die shamefully

For I have taken life for granted

And therefore I don't deserve the heaven

The heaven where my sweet angel is

Completely unaware that he has caught the eyes of a demon