This is my first fic. Any comments and criticism are more than welcome. Here are my character bios.
Name: Randi Magick
Age: 15
Birth date: December 28th
Sign: Capricorn
Eye color: Crimson
Hair color: Red-brown with blue streaks
Bit: Stradazer (A.K.A Rad)
Personality: Randi used to be a sweet girl until the 'accident' occurred. Now she carries on like normal, only she almost never shows her true feelings, for they are the key to her deadly power. She has dreams of a certain boy, who is supposed to heal her broken heart.
Name: Rae Magick
Age: 15
Birth date: January 4th
Sign: Capricorn
Eye color: Lavender
Hair color: Light-brown with blue streaks
Bit: Stratreya (A.K.A Trey)
Personality: Rae is Randi's older sister and best friend. She too used to be sweet and innocent, until that fateful day. Now she pretends to be happy-go-lucky, but is still in pain.
Name: Rasha Magick (Raesha)
Age: 16
Birth date: August 11th
Sign: Leo
Eye color: Green
Hair color: Blonde with blue streaks
Bit: Stramerie (A.K.A Merie)
Personality: Rasha is Randi's and Rae's older sister and best friend. These three are the only three who get along. Rasha is the girliest of the 5 sisters.
Name: Rachael Magick
Age: 17
Birth date: September 20th
Sign: Virgo
Eye color: Pink
Hair color: Dirty-blonde with blue streaks
Bit: Strarayna (A.K.A Rayna)
Personality: Rachael it the most sarcastic of the 5. She is also the most dependent on others. She remembers what happened, but does everything in her power to pretend it didn't.
Name: Reku Magick
Age: 18
Birth date: February 7th
Sign: Aquarius
Eye color: Yellow
Hair color: Red with blue streaks
Bit: Strataka (A.K.A Taka)
Personality: Reku is the oldest and the one with major issues. She usually goes out at night to parties to get drunk, in hopes that if she gets drunk enough, the memory will fade.
Name: Ryu Dark
Age: 17
Birth date: November 19th
Sign: Scorpio
Eye color: Gold
Hair color: Red on top and black on bottom
Bit: doesn't have one anymore (Gave Stradazer to Randi)
Personality: Randi and he were very close, other than this not much is known about him. He hit by a car and slipped into coma. Then after the 'accident' he was never seen again. But, Randi never gave up hope that he would come back.
Prologue-
"Come on Randi. You can do it!" An 11-year-old Reku whispered urgently.
Around her were her four sisters. Rachael was 10, Rasha was 9 and Rae and Randi were 8.
"B-but. Wh-what if I mess up?" Randi asked her voice shaking.
Lying in a hospital bed was a 9-year-old Ryu. He was hit by a car two days ago, and has only opened his eyes once. He had only spoken once during those three days, and all he said was 'Randi…'.
The five sisters had snuck into his hospital room to use a spell.
Not just any spell, but a restoration spell. To be performed by none other than little Randi. The sister were all spell-casters, or as some people say, witches. Randi was the only one who was taught how to use the spell.
"Come on! Before the nurse finds us!" Reku whispered angrily.
Randi was supposed to use her spell to return their friend to health.
Randi slowly nodded and held her hands out in front of her. The marking on her cheek began to glow.
"Thunder Struck and Lightning Rolled
Twisters Crashed upon the Shore and
Waves Kicked up Dust
Heaven Hated, While Hell Loved
Closeness Separated and Distance United
The Powers of Opposites are Finally
Ignited!"
Please don't kill him! Just bring him back to me! Randi thought as the spell was cast and a foggy blue light filled the room.
Though Randi wanted to save her friend's life, her power's only heard on word; 'Kill'.
Once the light cleared, the girls gasped in horror.
Ryu was gone. As if he disappeared……into thin air……