The beginning
(king: Hello it me silver fox king and this is my first post/story pleas review and tell me if there is something I can do to improve it ok now I want at lest 5 people to read and review this ok im going to my thinking room to make the next chapter! know fox wolf be good and do the story and NO fighting)(Smiles then walks over to an open door (bye and remember nofighting!)(Walked in and closes door)
(Fox: come on let's do this wolf! so king dose not get mad at us! you know how he gets)(Shivers)
(Wolf: I don't want to and im not afraid of him)(Hears a loud bang from the door)(I DID NOT SAY ANY THING)(Start crying on the floor)
(Fox: ill tell him what you said!)
(Wolf: don't you DARE fox!)
(Fox: ok ok I wont…Ill text it to him Mahahahahahahahaha!)(Run away texting with a big evil smile)
(Wolf: NO don't do that ill be good I will! I don't want to go in the place again) (running away chasing fox yelling for him to stop)
(Comes from behind a chair)(Fox: he's so stupid he didn't notice it was a shadow clone)(Cell phone beeping in pocket he takes it out and looks at the text)(Let's see "he is still chasing me where should I go?")(Suddenly voice comes from behind him)(Voice: how about china, México, North Pole, right here?)(Fox: no china's to far away so is México and the North Pole...wait)(Start to slowly look behind him and see king with and creepy unholy smile with he eyes shadowed)
(King: WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT FIGHTING! get him back here NOW)(Fox: started sweating very lose to craping/pissing his pants)(I SAID NOW!)(Now there is a mess in fox's pants)
(fox :( start texting) get back here now king is MAD (done texting) they are coming back now don't hurt me!)(Crying)
(King: if you start the story now you get a half punishment)
(Happy to get half off)(fox: silver fox king dose NOT OWN NARUTO but he wishes to but he doesn't but he dose own shadow panthers…well unless someone came up with the idea first if so he is sorry but if you would like to make a story like this you have his permission to but pm him the link to he can put it on his profile now I am gotta go clean my pants)(Walking away in small steps)(Ewww it's all wet and squishy)(Now taking bigger step's
"People talking"
"Summoning or demons/gods"
"Shadow panthers or shadow panther partner bond"
"Justu and abilities"
(Thoughts)
(Seen change/change in prov)
the forth hokage stood on top of Gamabunta with a small bundle in his arms looking slightly behind him to see something that most people would call strange seeming to come out of his shadow. One of the most hunted and a mysterious creature that is also his most highly keep secret named Tempest.
Tempest was not a human but a strange creature called a shadow panther the strangest thing about him was that has had six legs other than that there is not much else different...well other than the longer than normal and spiked tail and strange green markings on its fur and the wings that you half to look closely to even see. You see Shadow panthers are extremely rare and are hunted to be ether harvested for parts or forced to be bonded
Shadow panthers transport place to place through shadows they can control darkness in all forms but they also have an ability almost no one knows about. they can control souls and spirits and are also the best haunters and fighters but when willingly bonded to a human both the panthers and the humans charka pools will increase and merge slightly to give the human a small control over shadows along with their life force merging completely and the panther getting small green markings on their fur as a sign of partnership while the human gets a green paw print over their heart and be able to understand the panther when it talks. But when forced to bond the panthers and the human life force will be merged completely but will shorten by one year every time they use the ability's they get from the panther but both will slowly go in insane from using the power of the shadows until the kill each other out of the pain of insanity and will not get the bond and the panthers marking instead of green will be red as a sign of slavery and a warning of insanity coming the humans will be a red paw print.
Looking at the kyuubi rampaging miles out side of Konoha. Tempest said "Minato what are you going to do?"
"I am going to seal it...but I am going to need your help I need to bind it in to place"whispered minato so the toad boss would not here him
"Ill do my best minato!"said tempest then took a step forward in to minatos shadow and disappeared.
"What are you going to do minato? You have to hurry the kyuubi is getting closer to the village!"said Gamabunta not knowing what was going on atop of his head." ill need you to get as close to the kyuubi as you can so my justu will be in range"yelled minato as he started doing hand seals the toad boss nodded pulled out his sword from his side and hop/ran to the kyuubi which mysteriously stopped advancing toward konoha and stopped a few miles away from the kyuubi as minato yelled "STOP that is close enough it's in range good bye old friend."Said minatoas he finished the seals he yelled "soul eater seal!"every thing around him cooled none but he could see the Shinigami [death god] appearing behind him that said "why do you summon me mortal?" in a powerful voice that could shake mountains
"I have summoned you to seal the kyuubi in to naruto in estrange for my soul!" said minato
"very well mortal it shale be done!"yelled the Shinigami as he reached out his hands toward the kyuubi he closed his hand around the kyuubi then pulled his hand back as it came from around the kyuubi its body started dissolving for their was no soul to keep the body together. As the Shinigami barong his hand back it felt something strange but dismissed it and pushed his hand into naruto and the seal appeared as minato looked at it with his last few seconds of life he noticed that instead of a black in the ink he written in it was green but he could there was before he could get a good look at it faded and he could have sworn he saw a flash of something over naruto's heart but before he could do or say anything he felt his soul leavening his body he knew he did not have much time. He looked down at the bundle in his hands and said "I wish for you to be seen as the hero of konoha…I…hope…the…best…for…you…my…son."Then the yellow flash, Tempest the shadow panther's partner, fourth hokage, Minato Namikaze died from the Shinigami pulling out his soul and eating it.
(With tempest and the kyuubi)
Tempest was standing eyes closed on the head of the kyuubi some how with out getting berned to death or noticed.
(Tempest prov)
"I have to give minato the time he needs I hope he dose this quickly I wont be able to hold the kyuubi much longer I am just lucky it has such a big shadow!"saidt empest focusing as hard as he could but could fell his control slipping with every thrash and pull but also felt an demon or spirit calling for help causing him to lose focus. "oh no!" tempest said as his control broke shut his eyes tighter thinking that it would be his death but when nothing happened opened them and saw a giant hand closing around the kyuubi and tried to escape but he did not have the energy to transport but he have enough to jump off the kyuubi and run but he could not get out of the fist so he sat down and waited for death he felt a pull on his soul and he let it take him but before the world faded to darkness he said "Iam gladI...could...help...min...A...to."
(Kyuubi'sprov)
(I AM Rose white THE Kyuubi no kitsune [ninetailedfox] I will break that basterd's control over my body!)thought the newly dubbed rose struggling to get control over her body not wanting to destroy konoha when her body suddenly stop she thought that she was getting back control over her body but felt it still moving looked down and saw her legs were bound by shadows and thought while her body was struggling against the bonds (shadow's are stopping me wait those look like the shadow's shadow panthers use! wait dad said that when a good demon or spirit calls for help one of them will come .well I hope they can hear thoughts!) before she started yelling for help in her mind over and over but it wasn't to be for the bonds broke but to her confusion she did not move but she felt the control had fled she looked up and saw an hand closing around her body the darkness.
(END)
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