Hey, it's Liz. I use to have another profile LizzyAwkwardTurtle so please read my other stories as well as this one :). Any who, here's my cousin Abby with the disclaimer:
Abby: Does she look like a guy to you? No? There's your disclaimer. Now follow the arrow to the story.
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Max's P.O.V
My back was hurting.
That was my first thought when I woke up. I looked over at the alarm clock on the table next to me.
2:56 A.M.
I groaned; I missed it by 11 minutes. I was supposed to stay up until 2:45 with my best friend/half-sister Ella, but I guess we passed out. I looked to my left to see Ella drooling on to her pillow. I laughed softly at how childish she looked. Now that I was 18, an official adult, I felt mature.
I looked around the room at my friends; Ella, my previously mentioned half-sister/best friend who was now snoring, Dylan, my boyfriend who was in the bed next to mine, Lissa, who was practically sleeping on top of Sam on the bed across from me, and Brigid, who opted for the couch saying that it was too couple-y in here.
I got up quietly and winced as I straightened out my back. Walking to the front of the cabin I realized how much of a mess we made. I hoped Jeb wouldn't be too mad. After all, it is my birthday. I carefully stepped over a broken beer bottle and looked outside. It was still dark and really quiet; almost too quiet.
"Hey," I said softly hoping to wake someone up, no one stirred.
"Hey," I said again, this time louder, "Does anyone want to go outside with me?"
Again everyone acted as if I hadn't said anything, they were all sleeping soundly. I glanced outside again, desperately wishing to go for a run.
"I'm going outside," I all but screamed, "Would anyone care to come with me?"
No one moved. Fine, I thought, I'll just go alone then.
I walked outside expecting to feel the wind, but there was nothing; my feet weren't even cold. I looked down at my feet and saw that I still had my new converse on. Suddenly, I felt was the feeling of blood rushing to my head which made me dizzy.
I'll just run it off, I thought. I started to run into the woods that surrounded my large cabin. I ran until I came to a clearing. I looked around getting this sense of déjà vu.
I sat down underneath the tree in the middle of the clearing and tried to remember what happened last night. I remembered the cake, posing for pictures, the cake, mumbling to Ella that we had to stay up for the exact time I was born, the cake…
I caught a glimpse of something dark moving out of the corner of my eye.
"Is someone there?"
There wasn't an answer, but I had a feeling of dread wash over me, which made my heart start to race. I got up and looked around the clearing for any sign of life. I started to walk around the tree when a snapping sound made me stop. Then something wet fell onto my head. My heart just about stopped right then and there. Slowly I looked up and saw eyes; my eyes to be exact. They looked cold and lifeless. I screamed as loud as I could, knowing no one could hear me.
Knowing that it had nothing to do with being in the middle of the forest.
First chapter is now complete! Sorry it's so short but this is all I could think of. Anyway, I need some OC's (original characters) for the next few chapters so please review with the name, age, looks, and how you died. Oh and maybe a bit on how you act. I will use most of the OC's; just not all of you will be dead.
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I hope you like the story
-Liz