Okay…this is just a little Prologue because I wanted to put something up. So first story on this profile, be nice.
Just a warning in advance I can take constructive criticism but if your going to tell me stuff like 'The best way to improve this story is if you stop writing' or 'Even if you had a triple amount of talent then you already do your story still wouldn't be enjoyable to school kids…it is torture!' and I go onto your profile and see what style your writing is and find that you don't even write, well I got to say, that pisses my off!
But like I said, constructive criticism is quite welcome and I will try to take it onboard.
Disclaimer: As I usually forget about this I will post it once and it will apply to all the chapters. I only own the idea and some characters. SM owns Twilight blah, blah, blah; she owns Edward but Edward owns me!
Prologue
My name is Alison, but everyone used to call me Ali. I say 'used to' because they're not here to call me that anymore, they didn't leave me.
I left them.
When I was only sixteen I was diagnosed with Spanish influenza and like predicted there wasn't anything anyone could do except make me feel comfortable. Up until this day I can still feel the heat burning me up, the fire inside me that never seized. The feeling of someone clenching my throat, squeezing so tight that breathing in itself stole any energy I had. It was really only a mater of time.
I'm not scared of death. Wasn't. I don't really know what I am. Dead or alive?
But either way, I'm here now and there is not much else. If I were the way I used to be before I was sick I would call myself a ghost.
I know its only short but then again it is only a prologue.
I will try to update as much as I can but seeing that I'm jetting off to Oregon and travelling down the West coast for a month on Monday, it won't happen for a while. Though, if I get time and most likely on the plane, I will write it down and then just type it up when I get back.
All the best and take care!
Oh and review – but then again, I would say that wouldn't I?