Alleigant (alternate ending)

by Elisha011

if you are like me then you couldn't accept the fact that Tris dies. So here is an alternate ending, starting with Tris fighting to survive after deploying the reset serum. I will go through Tris and Fours life after the war. This is my first story so please bare with me while i develop my writing ablitlies.

1. Chapter 1

THIS IS MY FIRST STORY AND I KNOW THE CHAPTER IS SHORT BUT I'M JUST SETTING IT UP. FEEL FREE TO ASK ME ANY QUESTIONS ABOUT MYSELF. I WOULD LIKE TO GET TO KNOW YOU AND I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU ALL TO GET TO KNOW ME TOO.

Red. Blood is a strange color. Dark. From the corner of my eye, I see David lifelessly slumped over his chair. And my mother walking out from behind him. She is dressed in Abnegation gray like the last time I saw her. Her dull blond hair is tied back in a knot, but a few loose strands frame her face. I know she can't be alive, but I don't know if I'm seeing her because I'm hallucinating from all the blood loss or if the death serum has fogged my thoughts. She kneels next to me and caresses my face in her cool hands. "Hello Beatrice" she says, and she smiles.

"Am I done yet?' I say but I'm not sure if I actually say it out loud or not.

"No, my dear. You have only yet started your new life, and you can't let this be the end. You are still full of life and I know you can push through this. We are not meant to meet yet. It is too soon." She says, with tears in her eyes.

"I'm trying but I'm tired of fighting." I choke out.

"You can do this dear. Just think about all those who love you. You can't leave them yet." Says my mother. I think about Tobias and Christina, I can't leave them yet.

My mother kisses me on the forehead and vanishes. I try to gather all the strength my mother just gave me and try dragging my body towards the door. Everything seems so much different when you are so close to death. You would think with all the bullets that have penetrated my body I would feel pain but I don't. I just feel tired and I want to quit so badly but all I can see is my mother in my head telling me I can do this. I can. I will. I have to. When I feel like I can't handle the weight of my body, a figure appears. The figure calls to someone and picks me up. I can't recognize the persons face but I can tell it is a man from the compound but I could be wrong. Everything just looks like one big blur. My body can't take it anymore and I fall unconscious.

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THE STORY WILL DEVELOP A LOT MORE THEN THIS. IT JUST STARTS OFF A LITTLE SLOW.

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