A/N: This was not intended to be a fan fic. This was a Response to Literature assignment in my English class. But, for those of you who haven't read my story Yoda's House Party, my friends told me it was good, so I wanted to know what you people think.
So, anywho, this is written in Eragon's POV during the battle scene at the end of Eragon. If it's good, let me know! If it sucks, be nice! Just keep this in mind while you're reading: poetry isn't my strongest field of writing.
Master Evenstar
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Caught in the middle of a raging duel
Your typical good against evil
Swords colliding with mighty crashes
Attempting to breach the other's mental shields
Suddenly, the Shade stumbles, his mental shields fall
I enter his mind, but surprises I find
Instead of a Shade, I find a young boy
Instead of Durza, his name is Carsaib
Witnessing the death of his parents
Becoming a sorcerer with the help of Haeg
Bandits killing his beloved mentor
The straw that broke the camel's back
Carsaib summons the spirits for vengeanceBut alas, his plan backfired
The spirits possess him, his transformation complete
"I AM DURZA!" He screams to the night
Without warning, I return to the present
Knowing what I must do
Drawing my mighty sword, Zar'roc
I lung, striking Durza through the heart
The Shade disappears into darkness
As I stand here victorious
The Shade is gone and the Varden is safe
But I still question the battle
After seeing all that Durza has endured
Was killing him entirely right?
