Author: welp, here we go, the second part to the books. I have to say that this is going to be a hell of a lot better then the last story...or not. I really don't know, what I do know is that the entire story is going to take place through the entire shinobi country. Yes, you will get to see all the village ( or most of them) in my own, twisted manner...my vision of how badass they would look. Everything shall go according to plan...( Maniacal laughs.) Now on to the reviews...
Wrath of Air: that's what hear a lot xp
thanks for the review
Thedisturbedone666666: What can I say, I'm an asshole. Annoying people is something that just amuse's me XD. About the omake, hmm, well the Omake in general would be too boring for me to make. Instead, I think I'll do a small little adventure of people that have absolutely nothing to do with the story...in a video game I AM able to make...just to lazy to get the software...
Just not in this chapter...and don't expect them in every chapter.
Vid: Yep, had to torture Naruto a bit, been so long since I did. As for the prologue, well, I made it that way on purpose that everyone wouldn't know Naruto. The 'war' that's soon to start will have everyone fighting on all battlefields. This story isn't just about Naruto, but about others as well. Even if he doesn't know the characters, that doesn't mean they're not going to be appearing and helping Konoha through this story. Irvine himself barely even talks to Naruto, and he's turning out to be...
Wait, shouldn't say it, got so many things planned for him...xp, just can't give it away yet.
Windmaster324: But in the end, it still kicks ass.
Thanks for reviewing.
Razzukyo of the dragon fist: expecting a hell of a lot of fighting in the future, I can't wait to spread the chaos. Err, even with how I like your name, tis starting to get annoying since I have to look back at the reviews around three times. I think I'll start referring to you as Razzy, because it's easier for me...or I continue to type out your extremely long name...either way XD.
Hope master: that kind of reaction is what I go for, after all. Either way on the story, I still have around 24 reviews to answer to...yeah, pretty much. Though reviews are good...always.
A reader: meh, your choice to judge a story by pairing after all. I wish you look on finding a story that isn't crap, by your standards. Though you have to remember, not all harems are great.
Zexion72: It's been quite some time since I last got to speak with you, how have you been. I know I should ask you in a message, but I'm too lazy. Nice to see that your doing well.
Crazy teddy: I would love to see you try...and fail.
Thanks for reviewing.
Daisuke's wings: Grammar, I can deal with, because I know I suck. The Uchiha's being stuck up bastards, not really. The story is an alternate universe of a fanfiction, so yeah, to make them stuck up bastards is not considered a mistake.
Thanks for reviewing.
Iceprincess421: it's all good for him, you'll see that he's returned to normal...as normal as he gets anyway.
Major hinata fan: yeah, just made it in time for the end, huh? I believe in the balance system, so Naruto should be getting a few good things soon...or not.
Thanks for reviewing.
Alright, do to my lack of will and large amount of lazyness, I'm only going to answer the reviews for chapter 40 that asked something or if I have a question for them.( Vid's and thedisturbedone666666's have already been answer in they're reviews up top.)
Mainly because I'm lazy, not because I don't want to, but because of lazyness...and the fact that I'm putting up my first original story today and don't have much time.
Prismdragon: the only one that I need to ask something from, what do you mean by being marked. Tis has no clue on what that means...then again, I haven't read a fanfiction in quite a few months, go figure.
Alright, here it is, though I have to say it seems sort of rushed. Considering that I'm on a tight schedule, be happy it's out today, okay? If not, fuck it...XD
disclaimer: I do not own anything...( Sighs)
Enjoy the fic
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In the beginning...( God, I've so over used that word...)
The sun rose, slowly over the mountains and shining down on Konoha. Or, what was left of the once great city anyway. It had been a few days since the 'war' that had happened and the arrival of the metal creature. The shinobi from enemy nations had already gone home, taking they're dead with them. The village itself was in horrible conditions, one of which could easily be seen considering that most of the large wall that once guarded konoha was now gone, only a few chunks of it left. Few people could even be spared to guard it for that matter.
Most of the villages buildings had been destroyed or were in ruins, 3/4's of them at least. The streets were still cracked, scorched, soaked ( ect) from the jutsu that had been recklessly shot inside the city. Large piles of buildings and sand were scattered about the village, blocking most of the roads for civilians to use. People, most not having a home anymore, slept outside in the stars, on what pieces of the ground in the village that was spared from the intense fighting. You could tell where people gathered by the fires through out the village, most of them just gathering to one big fire and resting there.
The shinobi, on the other hand, had quite a bit to do. They were busy trying to restore as much of the city as possible, or at least make it more liveable for the people and wounded. They were scattered about the streets, guarding it from anther invasion. This would be the perfect time for another nation to strike, and if it weren't for the Lrks that were traveling through out the village, most of the shinobi would just be busy guarding instead of giving support to the people. For dog people that seriously needed to put on some pants, they weren't half bad...
Well to Sakura anyway.
" That should do it..." Sakura stated, finishing up the wound on a small child. The child smiled at her, looking down at her leg which was now good as new. " Even if it's healed, you should try to stay off of it for a day or two, alright?" Sakura asked the child, who nodded and got off the crate she was sitting on. Running towards her mother, Sakura sighed at the thought that the child might break her leg again. She was happy that the little girl was the last one that she needed to treat for right now, a nin walking over and taking her place. Sakura went over to one of the fires, sitting down and just enjoying how warm it was.
It had been eight hours since her last break, having to work through the night to get through the amount of people that were wounded and save as many as possible. They still lost thirty people, which added to the count of over three fourths of the Konoha population being wiped out. She wondered what would have happened if the metal creatures had been around for even a minute longer. If it wasn't for Garra...and Irvine, they probably would be dead by now. Of course, there was one more person that helped destroy them, but he...
" You seem tired..." Sakura heard someone state, looking over to see Temari of the sands smiling down at her. Sakura smiled lightly, watching Temari sit down next to her.
" Yeah, I've had a long night..." She stated, looking over at the fire. " I still can't believe that we've lost so many people."
" It could have been worst...the 'war' could still be going on and the metal creatures returning once more." Temari replied, crossing her legs as she bent back a bit, her arms supporting her. " If ti weren't for Garra and Irvine-kun, most of us would be dead by now. Thanks for taking care of them, by the way." Sakura sighed at the mentioning of them.
" You do know what's going to happen now right...?" Sakura asked, Temari nodding her head slightly.
" Those two are going to become political tools, more then what shinobi usually are. Irvine especially since he wasn't born in the leaf's village." Temari stated, looking into the fire. " Since they pretty much were the ones to destroy the metal creatures with they're...gifts." Sakura shook her head, looking back over at Temari.
" Only time will tell..."
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Hinata walked through the village, passing by various groups of people and homeless. Leaping over a large chunk of building, she continued on her way through the streets. It had been a few days since the 'war' between the nations ended, and with that she had so much work she needed to do. All medic-nins were busy taking care of everyone and getting as many of the shinobi back to working condition as possible. She had little time to even think about Naruto until now.
He hadn't woken once since collapsing on the spot were Anko had been. Hinata finally had a chance to go see him after finishing up the large group of people that had lined up to be taken care of. They're were so many people injured during the fight, and they were lacking the supply's needed to take care of them all. A lot of them were also in critical condition too, so this made everything twice as hard. She, thanks to Shizune who toke over for her, was able to get a small break to go see how Naruto was doing.
Hinata passed by another group of people, waving at them as she went along. They waved back, but not with as much 'enthusiasm' as her. There had been a lot of emotional/ physical stress for people in the village, so it was understandable. Going around a large pile of sand, Hinata continued on Her way towards the Hokage tower. It was one of the few buildings left intact and were the critical patients were being held at the moment.
After a few more minutes, She finally arrived at the tower, passing by the front door security and making her way through the clusters of people. The place was being used as more then just a place to hold the wounded, the new Hokage was doing her best to get as much power restored and supply's ready to sue as possible. Even with the lost of her husband, she was focusing on taking care of everyone else.
You really had to admire her for that...
Walking up the long, very long stairs towards the top, Hinata arrived on the floor she needed to be on. Turning and walking down the hall, she headed towards Naruto's room. Of course, she wasn't expecting Kakashi, Asuma, and Tsunade to be standing next to the door. Walking up t the them, she wondered what was going on.
" What's wrong?" Hinata asked, everyone looking towards her. Tsunade sighing in relief at the sight of her.
" Good, now you can go in instead of us..." Hinata was confused at what Tsuande had said, looking at her with a raised eyebrow. " I mean, would you mind seeing if anything is wrong with Naruto?"
" Why can't you go in yourselves?" Hinata asked, the three of them looking at each other before back turning back towards her.
" Well...um, you see...the thing is. Wait, Hinata.." Hinata walked past them, opening the door and heading inside, closing it behind her before Kakashi could finish his sentence. Walking into the room, she looked at the bed that had Naruto in it. Also taking notice of the women sitting next to him, along with on the other side Iruka and Tsukkoi. Iruka looked scared stiff, his entire body sweating as he kept his eyes on Naruto. Then again, he was in the presence of the person that could easily destroy the village in a single swing of her tail..so yeah, she could understand...
That he was the only one with enough balls to come into the room to see Naruto, unlike the others...
Sighing, Hinata walked towards Iruka, sitting down next to him and looking down at Naruto. Though in a more relaxed manner considering that she didn't fear the Kyuubi. That's right, she didn't fear the demon that could easily turn Konoha into a smoldering crater of ruins and destruction. Why you ask, well for the simple fact that she was more angered at the Kyuubi then anything else.
" You're the third person to come see him in three days." The Kyuubi stated, looking over at Iruka. " If you count him...and the summoning."Tsukkoi snorted, Iruka just shaking a bit more then he was earlier. Hinata looked up from Naruto and towards the Kyuubi.
" Really, shows how much he's cared for." Hinata looked back down at Naruto, seeing how bad in a shape he was in. You'd think with his ability to recover quickly that he would be back to normal by now. What would cause him to stay like this for so long? The kyuubi coughed, looking down at Naruto with a small smile.
" Your probably wondering why he's taking so long." Hinata looked up at the Kyuubi, seeing her turn her attention away from Naruto. " He's been like this ever since he was young, not allowing me to heal him rapidly. Give him some time, he'll come to eventually." The Kyuubi stated, smiling even more. Iruka and Hinata looked at her in shock, Tsukkoi just shrugging at what the Kyuubi stated.
" He's been in worse situations before." She stated, looking down at Naruto with a frown. " He honestly doesn't know when to give up.." Her face changed into a small smile, looking back up at the Kyuubi. " You know, I really have to...what the hell are you doing?!" she yelled, watching the Kyuubi reach over and softly stroke Iruka's cheek.
" You seem, interesting, mating seasons just around the corner, how about you and I —" Kyuubi's face changed from a 'smile' to that of annoyance when she felt someone grab her arm. Looking over, she saw that Tsukkoi had been the one to pull her away.
" Sorry, he's taken..." She stated, glaring at the Kyuubi with a furious intensity. The kyuubi narrowed her eyes at Tsukkoi.
" Last time I checked, or smelled, he was still a virgin." Iruka's eye's bulged out at Kyuubi's remark, falling back in his chair as he was still surprised at how. Iruka looked back over his chair, seeing the Kyuubi sit back into her chair.
" You can actually smell that?" The kyuubi nodded, grinning at Iruka and Tsukkoi( who was still pissed mind you). She thought for a moment, looking back over at Tsukkoi with a smile.
"You know...we could always.."
" Will you shut the fuck up! " Everyone turned towards Hinata, who was gritting her teeth as she tried to keep from killing everyone in the room. Hinata looked over at the Kyuubi, who seemed to be a little taken back at her outburst. " If you want to be whore, that's your own business, but take it some where else. Your not going to be doing/ talking/ thinking about that short of shit in this room, if you want to continue, take it somewhere else!" Everyone just looked at Hinata with they're jaws to the floor, well most of them. The Kyuubi was too busy laughing her ass off.
" I like you, your going to be a great mate for Naruto-kun.." Hinata just stared at the woman with a blank expression, her face bright red at the thoughts she was having at the moment. Her head filled with those thoughts faster then anyone could imagine, not even the author who is almost scared at how fast her imagination worked. Hinata would have stayed in her dream state longer, but apparently she had scared the author a little too much...
" Hinata-chan!" Hinata looked in the direction of the door, seeing Sakura burst through it a second later. " The scouting teams have reported a large group of Nins heading towards the village, the Hokage wants us at the west gates, now!" Sakura taking a moment to rest, while Hinata snapped out of her dream state, taking in everything. Nodding her head, Hinata looked over at Naruto one more time before heading out the door and towards the gate, Sakura tailing behind her.
" Must be them..." The Kyuubi looked over at Naruto, said person sitting up on the bed and stretching. " God, that was a good nap."
" Should you really be getting out of doing work by sleeping all the time?" Iruka asked, Naruto waving off his question.
" I'm sure they can take care of everything by themselves." Naruto stated, looking over at the Kyuubi. " More importantly, did Hinata-chan pass your test?"
" Yes, she did with flying colors, most of it being blue/ purple." The Kyuubi replied with a smile, while Naruto moved his legs over to the side of the bed. Standing up, he stretched once more and looked around for something. " Hey, Miss Kyuubi, have you seen my belts? I haven't been able to find them in this room no matter how hard I've tried." Iruka coughed, getting everyone's attention as he reached into one of his pockets and pulled out something.
" I have them here Naruto." He said, handing Naruto the scroll. Naruto grinned, taking the scroll and unraveling it. In a puff of smoke, Naruto's equipment appeared in a large pile. Naruto went through the pile, picking out his clothing and setting them aside. Having all of them, he began to drop the pants that the hospital provided.
" Wait, stop Naruto, what are you doing?!" Iruka asked, Naruto just looking at him in a dull manner.
" Changing, what do you think?" Seeing Iruka's expression, Naruto sighed. " They've both already seen it, and you're a guy, so you shouldn't be bothered by it."
" Wait, they're seen it?"
" Yeah, Miss Kyuubi was sealed inside me..thus, can see everything I've seen." Naruto stated, the Kyuubi letting out a light, innocent whistle at the remark. " and Tsukkoi once had to give me a bath because I had been paralyzed by another spider." Tsukkoi eye's lit up as she remembered when that happened, Naruto looking over at her with the same dull expression.
" I swear, all you ever think about is getting in some guy's pants..."
" Is that a bad thing?"
" In some countries, yes." Naruto stated, putting on his usual pair of pants and pulling off his shirt. Damn, was all Iruka could think when he saw Naruto's abb's. he had, believe it or not, ten. Iruka never thought it possible, but he had a ten abb's. Naruto took note that Tsukkoi's eyes had lit up even more, the Kyuubi just waiting for Naruto to finish with a bored expression.
" So...how are you and Iruka doing, Tsukkoi?" Naruto asked, putting his shirt on. Tsukkoi's expression changed, switching over to a warm smile.
" We're doing well, Iruka owe's twice now. I helped him gather your things into the scroll." Naruto replied with an 'oh' and put his hoodie on. Picking up his belts, he attached they around his belt. Slipping on some boots, Naruto looked behind him to see Tsukkoi grinning evilly at Iruka while licking her lips, said person starting to sweat up a swarm once more. Naruto then headed over towards the door.
" When you two are done, make sure to head towards the west gate."
" Why Naruto-kun? You already said that the nin weren't going to be a problem?" Iruka asked, Naruto looking over his shoulder at Iruka with a grin.
" I want the shinobi from the rock village to meet my family, they still have a hard time believing that I'm from Konoha." Naruto stated, laughing as he walked out into the hallway. Making his way down, he noted that the meeting was going to be very amusing for him...
Might as well have some fun before the war...
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author: welp, that's it for now. Need to go work on the new original story for another site...XD, that was a mouthful. Please read and review.