The new master Redux.
Now i know i got some negative comments on the original but after a while and some encouragement i've decided to continue on with it.
Now keep in mind this is my FIRST Fanfiction so it may be mostly dialogue until i am comfortable enough to do more fight scenes.
So without me procrastinating anymore let the story begin
"Normal talking"
"Thoughts"
"Giant being Talking"
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Panic and Chaos was the only thing that could describe Saffron city at the moment. There were ruined buildings and injured people all throughout the city.
There where all kinds of people and pokemon alike running for their lives as the two beings fighting razed the place to the ground.
After the clashing beings separated you could finally make out what they were.
The first being was a young man of around 17 years old. He was cloaked in golden energy. He had sun kissed spiky blond hair. He had on a haori with magatamas going around the collar. He also had on him 2 pouches on his thighs and he wore black shinobi sandals. Behind his back where 9 black orbs
He was Naruto Uzumaki shinobi of the leaf and jinchuuriki of the Nine-Tails.
The other being was a man that should have been almost in his mid 100's. He wore a hakama with six magatama around the collar. He had long spiky white hair and rippled eyes with horns sticking out from his forehead. He also wore black sandals and in his hands he held a staff. And he also had 9 black balls floating behind his back. This was Madara Uchiha Overall madman and somewhat of a badass.
"Give up Uzumaki you can't defeat me." he sneered at naruto and continued. "While i have years of experience and many jutsu and you only have really only 3 years of experience and from what i have been observing only shadow clones and your fathers rasengan. So do as i said earlier and GIV-" before he could finish his sentence though He was interrupted by naruto.
"Madara what's the number one rule when facing an opponent equal or superior to you?" He finished with a smirk
Though madara answered with a condescending smirk of his own.
" That's a stupid question boy the answer is Never Stop… Moving." as the smirk dropped from his face he tried to dodge but it was to late as a naruto clone who was previously unnoticed by him had appeared behind him while the original appeared in front of him.
"its over madara" and he proceded to use his Tailed beast rasenshuriken When he was hit by both attacks from the front and back the two rasenshuriken grinded against each other before flying up higher in the air with madara and then proceeded to blow up in a combined dome of millions of tiny wind Blades.
Back with naruto we now find him laying on the ground out of his six paths sage mode and surrounded.
As he looked around he couldn't help but comment on his situation " Heh i bet Pervy sage would love this place" the reason he said this was because he was surrounded by approximately 20 women and there what he thought was dogs?( Growlithes and Arcanines)
The first lady who he assumed was the leader then spoke to him. "We have you surrounded get up and put your hands behind your back."
He found it surprising they could speak the same language but he still complied.
The leader then motioned for a woman to her side who coincidentally looked exactly like her to handcuff him. Though she seemed afraid of him.
Once he was cuffed they led him to what he assumed to be there headquarters. Once in they led him to what looked like an interrogation room where a red headed man was waiting for him. The man was wearing a navy blue tunic with red-orange trim, a brown belt around his waist, and large black boots with orange two rings around the top of each boot. The cuffs of his long sleeves are black with orange zigzagging trim separating the cuff from the navy blue part of the sleeve. He sports a long, flowing cape around his neck which is black on the outside and crimson red on the inside.
Once he was sat down across from the man the interrogation began. "Now i'm sure you know why you're here" The Man began. "But what i want to know is just WHAT are you."
As naruto opened his mouth to answer he paused and shut it. He then consulted with his tenant as to what he should say. "Just tell the human everything i have a feeling it would save us a mountain of trouble down the road if we can't find a way back."
Naruto thought it over and agreed. And so naruto proceeded to tell the man who he learned his name was lance everything that had happened. From what had happened when he was born to Obito sending him and madara to this dimension with his dying breath.
As he finished telling his tale he looked over to find lance looking at him with a smile. And what he said next would change his life forever.
"Well mister Uzumaki how would you like to-
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"NARUTOOOOO"
As he shook his head to clear away his trip down memory lane he look out at the battle field to see that his Charizard Amaterasu was waiting for his command. "Thanks for the wakeup Kurama" Kurama just mumbled about dumbass Blond Humans and went back to sleep. Naruto just rolled his eyes and focoused back on the fight. Looking at his charizard he made his move "Amaterasu its time to end this use Dragon pulse."
His opponent Lance and his Dragonite panicked at the move heading twords them.
"DRAGONITE DODGE IT." Sadly it was to late as the move scored a direct hit and knocked Dragonite out. The referee upon seeing the swirls in Dragonites eyes He made his announcement
"DRAGONITE IS UNABLE TO BATTLE. THE NEW KANTO REGION CHAMPION IS NARUTO UZUMAKI."
And The Crowd went wiled.
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Read and review and if you coulp please give me some sugesstions on as to what you would like to see
P.S this was written on a phone so sorry