The Whirlwind Alchemist
Hey people long time no see. Well I got this idea from watching the Anime Fullmetal Alchemist and I fell in love with it. ^_^ don't worry I still plan on finishing my other story it's just that I wanted to write something else. I decided to make another crossover with Naruto and I hope you guys enjoy it.
Summary: Naruto's older sister Miyuki, a wife to Gaara and a mother of 2 kids has found a new technique for Lee's kids who have no way to use chakra and while she's studying it, a war breaks out and she's is captured by the enemy to use this power. They force her to do Human Transmutation and things go wrong. Suddenly Miyuki is longer in her own world and it looks like she can never go back. What will she do? Can she find a way back?
This will follow Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood not the first one.
Disclaimer: I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood or Naruto
Thinking: Where the hell am I?
Truth: I am everyone
Homunculi: I am immortal (it's pretty much anything underlined)
Miyuki's POV (4 Months before the war)
Hello there. I'm Miyuki Uzumaki the older sister of Naruto Uzumaki I'm older than him by one year. I'm in my late twenties now and I stand at 5.6' feet and unlike my parents I have orange hair color. Naruto says it's because I wasn't as fiery as a red head (like mom was) and that I wasn't as dumb as a blonde (although father was never the dumb one) Sometimes I wonder if my brother is even related to me with the strange ideas he comes up with. Anyways like my brother I'm a ninja and pretty damn good one too! I excel at medical ninjutsu (I begged Baa-chan to teach it to me), ninjutsu (Jiraiya helped me in this area when he came back from training Naruto) and swordsmanship. My tiajutsu is above average but not exactly my strongest point and I am average at genjutsu. Even though my brother has the Kyuubi inside of him, I strangely have the Rinnegan (although it didn't activate until I was 17 after my brother's battle with Pain) which pretty much puts me in the same level as Naruto now.
I married Gaara when I was twenty and he was nineteen. (He wasn't bothered by the fact that I was older than him) and a year later we had our first daughter Mei (she has read hair like Gaara but she has my blue eyes.) Two years later we had another girl and decided to name her Winry (she has my orange hair but Garra's sea green eyes) and tomorrow she'll be turning 6.
My brother married Hinata a year after me and they both have boys around the same age as our girls. (Dear lord help us all if they turn out to be like Naruto) Shikamaru and Temari married too and they have boy twins and a little girl. Kiba and Ino married 3 years ago and they have a beautiful baby girl. But poor Akamaru and Kiba they have to leave the room when Ino has to change her diaper. The smell is too strong for them to handle. Sakura and strangely Sai are dating right now and it looks like they're getting serious. Never would I have imagined them being a couple. Neji finally asked Tenten out a year back and it looks like they're on the same road as Sai and Sakura. Lee got married to a girl; I think her name was Ami, (very pretty if I might add) around the same time we did and they have 3 kids. The two oldest ones are girls and the youngest is their son but tragedy stuck and Ami died a year later after giving birth to their son to an unknown disease. Lee was devastated but he still took care of his children. The girls now want to join the ninja academy now but they have the same case Lee had. They couldn't use chakra. Lee decided to put them through the training he went through but a month later they both collapsed during their training and he found out that that they had the beginning stages of their mother's diseases. Sakura was able to cure them but they couldn't over exercise their body otherwise they would collapse and possibly go into coma. They were crushed, not only they couldn't use chakra but they couldn't go through the training Lee went through to become a taijutsu master. I wish there was some way to—
"MOMMY, DADDY WAKE UP!" I awoke to the sound of my two daughters coming into our room jumping on the bed fully getting our attention
"What—who—where?" I sleepy said getting out the kunai under my pillow.
"Miyuki put it away—Yawn—it's just the kids." Gaara groaned
"I knew that." I said putting away the kunai as my girls started to giggle. "Alright why did you wake us up this? Usually we have to wake you guys up." I scooted over to Garra so the girls could sit on the bed.
"It's 8 so you're the one waking up late and don't tell me you forgot." Mei said shocked
"If you think we forgot Winry's birthday then you're mistaken. We knew it was her birthday we just were tired from our jobs last night's." He said. It was true he worked really late last night because he was getting the day off today just for Winry's birthday. I also worked late at the hospital last night for the same reason.
Sigh I sometimes really wished that I didn't work at the hospital. The make me work overtime I swear.
"What did you guys do last night?" Winry asked
"Just filing papers and healing people, you know the usual." I yawned. "So um are you ready for your birthday party?" I asked Winry
"Is Uncle Naruto and Auntie Hinata coming? Are they are they?" she asked
"Of course they are Winry, when has Uncle Naruto ever broken his promises" Mei answered for me
"But—"
"She's right Winry Naruto never breaks his promises. They're defiantly going to be here." I smiled
"Wait even Minato and Alphonse! Ewww!" they both shouted sticking their tongues out. (To clear things up Minato is the oldest at 8 years old and Alphonse is the youngest at 7 years old.)
"What's wrong in having them come over?" Gaara asked clearly confused
"Because they're boys!" the pouted not giving him a reasonable answer.
"Ok how about we go down stairs and I'll cook breakfast. Since Gaara has the day off why don't we go somewhere before the party starts?" I suggested
"FOOD!" they cried and rushed down to the kitchen.
"I blame your brother's genes for making them this hyper." Garra groaned getting out of bed and putting on a shirt.
"So do I Garra, so do I." I sighed fixing my gown and putting my hair into a messy pony tail. We both went down stairs and the girls were already sitting down.
"Mommy can we eat Ramen? Please! It's my birthday." Winry begged
"Eww! Ramen is disgusting I don't want to eat it for breakfast!" Mei argued
"That's because Uncle Naruto never took you to the best Ramen shop ever! If you ate one bowl you'll fall in love with it!" Winry sighed. In the corner both Garra and I were blazing mad.
SO THAT'S WHY SHE'S BEEN CRAVEN RAMEN ALL THE TIME! NARUTO TOOK HER OUT TO EAT WHEN I SPECIFICALLY TOLD HIM NOT TO! NARUTO WHEN I SEE YOU NEXT TIME YOU'LL BE A DEAD MAN!
Somewhere in a Suna Hotel
Naruto just suddenly woke up, had a feeling of dread, and shuddered.
"What's wrong Naruto-kun?" Hinata asked
"I have a feeling that when we see Winry I'm going to be beaten up by Garra and Miyuki."
"I doubt that. Unless you gave Winry Ramen when they told you not to." She giggled but Naruto paled at her comment. "Come on we have to wake the kids." Hinata gave him a kiss and left to wake up Minato and Alphonse
"I hope you're right."
Miyuki's POV
"Um not for breakfast honey. Maybe for lunch." I forced a smile on my lips.
"Oh ok….can we have bacon? We hardly ever have bacon."
"Sure. Garra you don't mind right."
"Not at all. In fact I'm looking forward to it."
"Yeah! BACON FOREVER!" Mei shouted
"Then it's settled Bacon it is." I smiled.
We ate breakfast in peace…well as peaceful as it can get. We were lucky that it didn't end up as a food fight like all other birthday breakfast we had since they could talk. This time it was only forks that were thrown by Mei and Winry! We finished in thirty minutes and we decided to go to the park to play for a while. I just hope they won't cause any trouble. On the way there we came across our old library that was going to be torn down in a couple of days and they were selling the books.
"Hey Garra, can you take the kids to the park I want to check out these books. Maybe I can find something interesting to read." I asked him
"Sure just don't take too long."
"Yeah otherwise you'll become weird like that old librarian!" Mei exclaimed. "Reading too much is bad! It makes you hear voices and makes you go to a mental hospital like the librarian!"
"Eh? Really?" Winry asked
"No Winry that doesn't happen. She's just messing with you."
"Oh ok." She sighed in relief
"Come on daddy! Let's get going to the park." Mei cried running towards the park.
"Mei wait!" Garra yelled running after her with Winry right behind him. "I'm getting too old for this." He muttered. As they disappeared from my sight I went into the library and started to look at the books.
"Ok since I won't have time to look at all of them…SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!" and twenty of me appeared.
"Ok you guys go to the medical section, you three go to the ninjutsu section, you four go to the Genjustu section, you guys the tiajutsu section, you the fiction, and I'll go to the history section. (my clones were prone to "accidentally" dispelling themselves if they went to the history section by themselves.)
"Right!"
"SHHHHH!" the people around me hissed at me
"Opps sorry." I whispered. "Ok so get moving!" They disappeared and I went to the history section. There were a lot of books still left since probably no one wanted to read them. I took out a book on the history of Suna and behind it; there was a part of a combination lock. I took out a couple more books and I reveal a whole keyboard and I looked at it confused.
"Strange I thought Suna didn't have any more safes. And why would it be in a library?" I whispered
"Sigh but I have no clue what the password is though." I mumbled in despair.
Try ALCHEMYI heard a voice in my head said
Ok maybe Mei was right, maybe the library can cause you to go insane like the librarian. Who are you?
That's for another time just put in ALCHEMYCuriosity got the best of me and I typed in ALCHEMY.
Great now I'm listening to voices in my head how great is that. Gaara's going to send me to a mental hospital when he finds out. When I finished typing it in there was a click and suddenly there was a door that's appeared behind the books and I had to remove at least 4 books just to open it.
"Here goes nothing." I mumbled and opened the door. Inside of the safe was a book that was covered in at least an inch of dust.
"So there's no denying that this hasn't been opened in a very long time." I grabbed the book and blew the dust of the cover.
"The Basic and Advance Teaching of Alchemy, by….." the title was too faded for me to read.
Alchemy…..I never heard of that before. I guess I'll have to ask Garra to see if there any reports of this Alchemy in Suna. I guess I should put it back…a little peek won't hurt would it. I opened the first page and quickly scanned the page.
"The basic of alchemy is to deconstruct and reconstruct raw materials and turn them into objects. This is based on equivalent exchange…" I skipped another couple lines, "Absolutely requires no chakra…." My eyes widen as I read that part aloud and I quickly closed the book.
This is what I need to help Lee's kids! If I find a way to use this Alchemy then they can go and join the academy! I looked back into the safe to see if there were more books about this Alchemy but it was gone.
"Ok I'm going insane I could have sworn that I saw a safe…never mind I'll just confuse myself even more if I keep thinking about it. Ok now back to the park and celebrate Winry's birthday!" I left the History section quickly to spend more time with my girls. If I had stayed a couple of seconds longer, I would have seen a black shadow with a purple eye and menacing sharp teeth come out of the bookshelf.
"It'sgoingaccordingtoplanFather. Shetookthebook." A young voice said
"Good came back home. I can't hold the Gate open any longer." A godlike voice echoed
"Right." And in a swirl of lighting the shadow disappeared.
Gaara's POV
I saw my wife running over the hill and I said to the kids.
"Hey your mom's here."
"She didn't go insane like the librarian!" Mei shouted running towards her
"Mommy!" Winry cried
"Hey I hope you guys behaved." She smiled at them
"Of course we did! We're not 5 anymore." Mei stuck her tongue out.
"True—"
"Mommy can we get ice cream? There was a guy selling them and lots of people are buying it." it was very rare for an ice cream man to be here in Suna. I mean Ice cream melts the moment the sun just hit it. That's one of the downside of living in Suna.
"Really! Where show me where!" Miyuki cried with stars in her eyes. Did I mention my wife just loves ice cream?
"Over there! Come on Daddy, Mei!" Winry cried leading the way. And that's how we spent our morning. We ate ice cream and then we went on the swings in the playground. When my wife went on it, she somehow got herself twisted in it and it took five minutes to free her.
"I guess swings don't like me." She smiled. We spent another 30 minutes at the park before we headed towards a restaurant to eat lunch. There we ran into Naruto and Hinata along with their two kids, Minato and Alphonse. I knew we weren't going to have a peaceful lunch then. We only spent 30 minutes in there before they kicked us out. (And that's because I was the Kazekage!) In the end, we got take out and we ate lunch at our home. From there we started to prepare for the party and around 6 guest started to come. Shikamaru and Temari with their kids came, Kakashi, Kankuro, Sakura and Sai, Ino and Kiba with their daughter, and Shino. The rest of the gang couldn't come because they were on missions and they wouldn't let the babysitters take the kids to Suna.
"LET'S CUT THE CAKE!" Mei shouted causing my sister's kids to shout the same thing.
"CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE, WE WANT CAKE!"
"And cake you'll get. Happy Birthday Winry!" Miyuki smiled at her. It was a two layer cake in the shape…of a ramen bowl. I looked at my wife accusingly as I saw Naruto, Alphonse, Minato and Winry's eyes sparkle.
"What it's her birthday." She shrugged. Winry quickly blew out the candles, and was bouncing on her chair waiting for me to cut the cake.
"Is it really ramen flavor?" Kakashi asked Miyuki
"No, it is vanilla flavored just don't tell them that." She whispered. Thankfully the kids (yes I refer Naruto as a kid) didn't notice the difference and we ate in peace. The party went for another hour before our guests started to leave. By then our children had fallen asleep and we carried them to their rooms.
"They look so peaceful when they're asleep" she muttered kissing each of them on their forehead.
"Unlike when they're awake, they're anything but peaceful. I swear it's like they eat sugar every morning." I chuckled. "By the way did you find anything in the library?" I asked getting into our bed.
"Yeah, a book about Alchemy. Do you what Alchemy is?" she asked
"Alchemy? That's a word I never heard. I'll check into it."
"It says that's it's a scientific method to deconstruct and reconstruct raw materials into objects. It's based on equivalent exchange. And the weird part is it requires no chakra." She said reading the explanation straight from the book.
"Let me see?" I asked and she gave me the book, but when it touched my hand all the text I saw disappeared.
"What just happened?" she asked confused
"I don't know. Maybe you can only read it?" I wondered and gave her the book back. As soon as it was out of my hands, I could see the diagrams back on the page.
"It seems you were right. I'm going to try this. If I can master it maybe I can teach it to Lee's kids."
"So that's why you got it didn't you?" she only nodded
"It's not fair that his kids have to suffer so much. I want to help them in any way I can. If it gets to dangerous, I'll stop. Please let me do this." She pleaded with me. I sighed and pinched the bridge of my nose before replying.
"Fine but you have to tell me your progress every week—"
"Thank you Gaara! Thank you!" she hugged me tightly
"You're welcome. Let go to sleep I have to go to work early and we need to make sure the kids won't tear down the house tomorrow." She chuckled and snuggled closer to me.
"Night Gaara."
"Night Miyuki." And I turned off the light. Oh how I would hate letting her study that Alchemy later on.
Miyuki's POV 4 months later
4 months…4 FRICKEN MONTHS, I struggled to study Alchemy and perform it at the best of my ability. I was so lucky that I could use Shadow Clone Jutsu otherwise; it would take me forever just to do the basics. I had to learn how to draw a transmutation circle, which I found out you needed to do Alchemy otherwise it fails. If I messed put on a part of the circle then it wouldn't work. Next was trying to deconstruct and reconstruct raw materials into objects. At first, I just used the table but it only provided a small amount so I moved to the floor. It was tiring I tell you and frustrating, and I nearly gave up but I remembered about Lee's kids and I kept on going.
I also put some rules in Alchemy like, you can't make gold. (I tried that once and let me tell you my family were so surprised that they fainted) it would ruin the economy and well, it's just not right. You also couldn't do human transmutation. I learned that human transmutation was a way to bring back the dead, but I knew that it wasn't possible. The dead are never suppose to brought back to life, and if you did the price was too high. Garra and I both agreed never to do this and wrote one the chapter about human transmutation DO NOT ATEMPT OTHERWISE YOU'LL DIE. Well we didn't know if that would happen but better to be safe than sorry.
The past week though there have been sighting of new foreigners that came across the ocean and they seem to be very hostile. They already had attacked the Land of the Waves and they were proving to be a very powerful enemy. Naruto, Gaara and all the other Kage leaders tried to compromise with them but they wouldn't listen. It seems that we were on a brink of another war. I tried to stay positive, but two days ago while I was having a girl's night out with Temari, my cup that held my green tea cracked. I wanted to say that nothing was wrong but omens like that…they usually brought bad news. The next two nights became really stressful and my husband tried to calm myself down but I couldn't help but feel something bad was going to happen.
"Mommy? Mommy are you awake?" I heard my two daughters whisper. I lifted my head off my study table and closed the Alchemy book. I gave a loud yawn and looked at the girls sleepily.
"Hey girls, what's up?" usually they never wake up this early. It looked like it was about 6 in the morning.
"An ANBU came to the house to get daddy and he told him something that made daddy go off in a hurry. He told us to wake you up and to head to the hokage tower. He has to announce something." Mei answered.
"Then we should get ready. Come on I'll make a light breakfast while you guys go change hurry." I said. They nodded and headed towards their rooms. Quickly I made a clone to make breakfast and I went into my room to change my clothes. In 5 minutes flat, all of us were eating breakfast, and strangely, the girls were quiet.
"Are we going to war?" Mei suddenly asked. I stared at her for a couple of minutes before saying
"Honestly I don't know Mei, but trust me when I say that it's not going to come here. We're one of the strongest villages besides Konoha so they won't bother with us unless they want to make a peace treaty." I tried to reassure them.
"Promise Mommy?" Winry asked
"I promise." I held out my fist towards her and she bumped it along with Mei.
"Now come on we have to get going to the Hokage tower." I said getting up from my seat and created another clone to do the dishes.
"Kay." They both said and we headed out the door. It took us 10 minutes to get there and by then all the villagers had gathered and were waiting for Gaara to speak. A minute later Gaara appeared on top of the tower and raised his has so the people could stop talking.
"People of Suna I have some grave news…" everyone started to whisper but before it could get out of hand Gaara spoke again.
"As you know the foreigners have been causing a lot of trouble these past few months. They ruthlessly attack small villages that have no ninja to protect them." Gaara growled. True like what they did to the Land of Waves. There were hardly any survivors, luckily Inari and his family survived though.
"Just 2 days ago I had received word from our ally Konoha that….." he stopped for a brief moment "they have been attacked by the foreigners." I let out a huge gasp, as did the rest of the crowd, and I prayed that no harm came to my family and friends.
They can't be dead they can't be dead. I repeated over and over again in my head.
"Mommy is Uncle Naruto Auntie Hinata and our cousins alright?" Asked Winry
"Of course they are! It's Uncle Naruto they're talking about! H-he's the strongest person in Konoha. R-right?" Mei this time asked me.
"I don't know Mei, Winry. I honestly don't know." I whispered and I looked back at Gaara. It seemed that he was trying his best not to show emotion but he was failing.
"They have somehow managed to wipe out…..3/4 of the population." And this time I couldn't hold in my thoughts.
"NO YOU'RE LYING!" I shouted causing everyone to look at me. "THEY CANT BE DEAD THEY CANT! IT'S MY BROTHER AND NEPHEWS FOR GODS SAKES! MY FAMILY CAN'T BE DEAD!"
"Mommy?"
"THEY CAN'T BE! They can't be d-dead." I whispered the last part and I broke down crying. Never since I was 4 years old had I cried this much. It was embarrassing but I couldn't hold them in. If Naruto, Hinata, my best friend Kiba and everyone else I knew were dead along with my nephews then I would be devastated.
"Calm down Miyuki, it's ok." I heard my husband said wrapping his arms around me.
"They're a-all I-I have G-gaara." I sobbed
"We're sending out a team to help them and—"
"L-let me go with them." I whispered
"But—"
"What if there are people injured and Sakura isn't there. You'll need many medics to go on this mission and I am the only one still on active duty not to mention the only one available in the Village." I argued. The real reason I wanted to go on this mission was to see if my family was ok. If Gaara knew that, he wouldn't let me go. It had to be professional reasons only.
"But—"
"It's true Gaara" Temari said. Luckily her family was still here; around this time they would head back to Konoha to meet Shikamaru's parents. "She's the only medic we have now, all the rest are on missions. We need her."
"And what if the Foreigners attacked you guys! I could bear it if she…"
"Don't go mommy I don't want you to die." I heard Winry's broken voice cry out. I looked up and saw my kids holding each other and crying.
"I'm not going to die." I told them hugging them. "It's just a rescue mission. Nothing bad is going to happen."
"Miyuki, please reconsider."
"There are people right now that are slowly bleeding to death Gaara I can't leave them there. If I can save a life then I will. Please let me go." I begged Gaara looked at me for what seemed an eternity before he sighed.
"I'm turning into a real softie." He whispered. I smiled at him
"Thank you Gaara. When are we leaving?" I asked going back into ninja mode. It's been so long since I have been on a mission.
"In thirty minutes." Then he spoke in a louder voice to the people. "If anyone wishes to join this rescue team then come to the Village gate ready in thirty minutes! Konoha needs our help!"
"YEAH!" the whole village cried and ninja's rushed off to get ready. I got out of my husband's grip and went to grab our children.
"I'm going to get ready, I'll drop Mei and Winry at Baki sensei's house—"
"Not him he's grumpy!" Mei complained
"Yeah and he smells too." Winry stuck out her tongue.
"He's the only babysitter we have available right now. He's a retired jounin so he can take care of you if something happens." I told them running to our house.
"But—"
"No buts now get your clothes and put them in the bag. I don't know how long I'll be away and how long Garra will be at the Kazekage office so you might have to sleep over." Quickly I created a clone and ordered her to pack all the materials needed for the mission while helping the girls put clothes into a duffle bag.
"You'll come back home right?" Winry quietly asked.
"Of course I promised you that I'll make sure nothing happens to you in war and how can I do that if I'm not here?" I smiled at them going to my room to change into my ninja gear. I had a dark blue tank top shirt like kimono (that had a red swirl on its back) than went to my mid thigh and I a red slash going around my waist to hold my sword sheath. Underneath the kimono, I had back shorts, and I had black boots that went up to my knee. (A.N I will have a Picture on my profile soon.) I tied up my hair into a messy pony tail and I was ready.
"Ok guys I have to leave now. The clone will take you to Baki's house." I said grabbing my bag out of the clone's hands and kissing each girl on the forehead. "Now stay out of trouble and I'll be back before you now it." I smiled at them.
"I love you mommy! Came back safe!" they cried hugging me as tightly as they could,
"I will. Bye." I said exiting from my house. If I knew that this was the last time I would see my girls I would probably never had left.
I was standing in front of my village's gate along with another 30 shinobi, including my friends Shikamaru and Temari, waiting for Garra's orders
"From the last message we got from the Hokage it seems that the survivors had already started their way to Suna and that was 2 days ago. They're only a day away maybe a little less there might be injured ones. Your mission's…..rescue the survivors, heal the injured and come home safe!"
"HAI!" we all shouted.
"Good luck to you all." He stepped aside and we launched out of the village but before I could he grabbed me and gave me a passionate kiss lasting about 30 seconds.
"You better come home Miyuki." He whispered
"I will. Make sure the kids know that too. If I'm for some crazy reason captured I'll find a way back to you. It's a promise of a lifetime that I'll come home!" I held out my fist and he bumped it. I turned around and rushed off to catch up with my team.
"Be safe Miyuki." Garra whispered and he turned around back to his village. Too bad neither of us knew that we were never going to see each other ever again.
We've been running across the desert for at least half a day already maybe more and we could see the outskirts of the forest that separated our borders with Konoha.
"We're almost there Naruto, just hang on." I whispered
"Don't worry Miyuki. I'm sure Naruto and everyone we knew are ok." Shikamaru said but even then he didn't sound so sure of himself.
"But what I'm wondering is how those foreigners manage to almost massacre the entire village. Konoha is one of the strongest Shinobi villages!" Temari wondered aloud.
"They must have some sort of weapon that makes ninja helpless otherwise the foreigners would have fallen to Konoha Ninja's" Shikamaru said and that made us think. It was true, Konoha forces would be almost impossible to defeat let alone kill. So what did these Foreigners have? Was it a type of poison, jutsu, or just some new power? We continued for another 3 hours until one of the shinobi ahead of me said.
"My Lady we feel some presence ahead about 5 miles towards the east a little. We think it's the survivors." My eyes widen and I said in a firm voice
"Well then what are we waiting for? Kick it into high Gear!" I shouted and sped up and actually passed the group.
"Wait up Miyuki!" Temari cried trying to catch up to me.
"Troublesome women." Shikamaru grumbled but he sped up too. He probably wanted to see if his friends were ok. Finally, after 15 minutes of running we found the remaining survivors of Konoha huddled in a huge group. There were about hundreds of them as far as I could see. Tents were set up and ninja's were patrolling the area, even some civilians had volunteered to help.
"Miyuki? Is that you?" Kiba, one of the patrolling ninja's, cried. That caused the rest of the group to look at us and cry in relief.
"We're saved!"
"I knew Suna would help us!"
"Thank God you came!" the last one caught my attention though
"AUNTIE MIYUKI! AUNTIE MIYUKI!" my nephews cried crashing into me.
"Minato! Alphonse! Oh thank God you're alright!" I cried hugging them. "Where is your mother and father?" they held onto me more tightly and I knew bad news was coming.
"D-daddy's g-g-g-one! T-they t-took him!" Minato cried.
"A-and Mommy's b-bleeding a-a lot. H-help h-her please!" Alphonse begged
"That's why I'm here." I told him. "EVERYONE'S THAT'S INJURED COME OVER HERE AND FORM A LINE. THE MOST SERVRE WOUNDS COMES FIRST!" I shouted setting up the exam table.
"Hai!" Everyone in the camp cried and started to get the wounded.
"Minato, Alphonse help me set up. I need all the help I can get.
"H-hai." They both said and quickly helped me get my medical stuff together. In less than 5 minutes Hinata was already on my table. She was covered in blood and most of it seemed to be coming from her stomach.
"Ok you boys leave this is not something you want to see. Can I have some help here? Sakura? Ino?" I called out shooing the boys away from this horrific scene.
"Sakura was killed." Kiba whispered behind me. I didn't look back because I was too busy healing Hinata but I did shed tears for her.
"W-what about Ino?" I asked hopping that she is still alive
"Unconscious. She was hit in the head pretty hard. She's with Shino right now and he's taking care of her, Akamaru, and our daughter." he sadly said.
"I-is there a-anyone dead t-that I know?" I asked tears coming out faster.
"Tsunade, Shizune, Choji, Iruka, m-my mom, most of our parents and sensei's, Sai, Lee and Lee's kids." He cried
"They're dead?" I gasped almost losing my concentration
"Yes." He whispered. I could also hear him sobbing a little.
"W-when I'm done tending my patients I want the whole story!" I ordered him
"H-hai—do you need help?"
"Put bandages around Hinata's stomach. I'm done healing her. She's going to recover. NEXT!" and that's how it went for the next 4 hours. I healed patients and Kiba would bandage them up. Kakashi had a broken arm, Neji and Tenten both had broken ribs, Hanabi had a fractured leg, and Konohamaru had a gash on his shoulder. Overall most of my friends were fine and when I was done healing everyone that needed to be healed Kiba and I sat down and he told me what happened.
"It was a regular afternoon," he told me. Nothing seemed out of the ordinary. There was so sightings of the foreigners anywhere near Konoha or so they thought. It was about two in the afternoon when they attacked. Kiba said it was like they appeared from thin air since they didn't even sense them. How they couldn't was a mystery to them. They knocked down the gate using some kind of Jutsu he said, it was just a flash of lighting and then the gate was gone. Once they were through the gate the leader of the group who had jet-black hair tied into a tight ponytail and a patch on his left eye just snapped his fingers and for some reason took away the use of chakra. Because we couldn't use chakra we were at a huge disadvantage, many ninjas were falling at the entrance, and the foreigners came into the village and started to kill the civilians. He was protecting some civilian kids when he was attacked. He was almost killed if it wasn't for Lee, since he was a Taijutsu expert both him and Gai defended the civilians and the remaining ninjas as they fled the village. He said he briefly saw Naruto fighting the leader and him getting kidnap but he couldn't do anything. He had to get his wife and daughter to safety.
"It's alright. I probably would have done the same thing. But at least there's a chance that he's alive." I whispered. "You said you saw a flash of lighting. Did the leader have anything weird on him? Like a circle by any chance?" I asked since what Kiba had described sounded a lot like Alchemy.
"Now that you mention it his eye patch had some strange circle on it."
"Did it look like this?" I quickly broke off a piece of a branch and I drew the transmutation circle in the dirt that I memorized 4 months ago.
"It looked exactly like it! What is it?"
"Alchemy. It's like a scientific method of deconstructing and reconstructing raw materials into objects. It looks like I'm not the only one who knows Alchemy." I mumbled
"You know it? How?" Kiba asked
"The library that was closing in Suna a couple months ago. I found it there in a safe. Ever since then I was trying to learn it to help Lee's kids." I almost cried when I mention his kids. "It says it requires no chakra so….yeah it's useless now." I grumbled. I looked at the campfire fire for at least a minute before Kiba spoke up.
"We should go to bed. We need the rest so we head back to Suna by tomorrow night."
"I'll keep watch. Just go to sleep you need it more than I do." He glared at me but nodded. I stood at the edge of the camp and stared out into the dark.
Was really coincidence that the enemy knows Alchemy or was it as Neji puts it Destined to happen? I didn't know when but I sat down on a tree log and I fell asleep.
I had a feeling of danger coming towards me when I started to regain consciousness. Immediately I woke up and barley deflected a knife that was preciously aimed at my head with my sword.
"WHO'S THERE!" at first I heard nothing but I I saw a small flash of lighting and a spear came at me. I cut the spear in half with my sword and I knew right then we were under attack. Quickly I created a clone and told her to tell the others and get out of here.
"Well, well what do we have here? A Suna ninja? I heard they are on the same level as Konoha ninjas. I wonder if you'll die as quickly as them." A man with jet black hair in a tight ponytail came out and I could see he had an eye patch on his left eye. The same man Kiba had described that destroyed my home village.
"Why do you want to kill us?" I asked hoping to buy some for the survivors before his soldiers came to kill them and my men.
"Simple we want to rule this land and it's impossible to do it with you ninja's running around." He smiled evilly at me.
"Well then I'll have to stop you." I gripped my sword much tighter knowing that I would have to go all out on him.
"I would like to see you try with your chakra." He sneered and snapped his fingers. I less than a second my body felt cold and it felt like he had drain away from of the life within me. I tried to create a clone but couldn't. He somehow made me unable to use chakra.
"Surprised are you? That's how the ninja's were when they realized that they could use their jutsu really pathetic. Now it's time to kill you!" he punched the ground and spears came out of the ground and headed towards me.
"You know that attack is pretty pathetic." Quickly I reached into my pouch and pulled out some fingerless gloves. On them were transmutation circles. "It doesn't even compare to mine." I smiled and I punched the floor creating more spears sharper than his and going at a much faster speed.
""h-how do you know Alchemy?" he stuttered
"Some secrets are worth dying for." I snarled at him and ran at him, sword at the ready. He just slammed his hands on the ground and created a wall. I managed to flip over it and tried to slice him with my sword. He got out his own sword and our swords collided sending sparks flying.
"Did you think I only relied on Alchemy?"
"Yeah. You seemed to be like a cocky bastard that relies only on Alchemy." I growled. He sneered at me.
"Silly girl. Only if you didn't use Alchemy I would kill you right now, but we need you." Suddenly he disappeared in a flash. I held the grip of my sword tighter and stood still waiting for some sign to see where he was. I heard a twig snap on my left and swung my sword in an upward motion and blood spewed out.
"Got you." I smiled seeing that I got him. But he only smiled.
"It takes more than a scratch than to kill me." I looked at his wound and I was surprised to see that he was still standing as if it didn't affect him at all. With that kind of wound, he should be on the ground screaming in pain.
"What the hell! That strike should had killed you!" I shouted.
"Well it's a good thing I'm not exactly human then!" he disappeared and I barely blocked his next strike.
"Then what the hell are you!" I slapped my hands together and when I spread them out a huge gust of winds came out. Having a doujin that allows you to control all the elements is sometimes a good thing. It even allows me to control all elements in Alchemy too.
"Tch. Your friends are coming looks like I have to wrap things up." He said ignoring my questions. He slapped his hands on the ground and vines came from the ground wrapping around me and causing me to lose my sword. Slowly it started to cover my head and the last thing I saw was that bastard smiling at me.
"Miyuki—Miyuki! Wake up!" I woke up to the sound of a familiar voice. Slowly I opened my eyes and I was greeted by a blur of yellow.
"Come on Miyuki, wake up!" my vision started to clear up and I could clearly see my brother over me and I could see he had worry all over his face.
"N-n-aruto?" I croaked out
"Oh thank god you're all right!" and he gave me a bear hug with the strength of Baa-chan.
"N-naruto c-cant b-breath!" I gasped out.
"Oh sorry." And he let go of me. I coughed back some air into my lungs and then finally I asked
"Where are we?" Naruto's face turned serious
"We're in their layer in other words where the true leader lies. Or that's what I've been hearing."
"True leader? What do you mean—"
"Oh How nice to see that our prisoners are awake. Take them to the master's chamber. It's time." The eye patch guys said to the 4 soldiers behind him.
"Right!" and they headed towards us.
"Don't you dare touch my sister! Hey, get off of me! Run Miyuki Run!" Naruto struggled against 2 soldiers
"NARUTO! Get off of ME!" I yelled punching kicking and even biting the soldiers that came near me.
"Sigh now we have to do this the hard way." The eye patch guys said (hey I still don't know his name yet) quickly he came behind Naruto pulled his arms behind him and drew his sword so that it was position at his neck and any movement could kill him. "If you don't come peacefully let's just say we'll have a headless body here." He threatened. I immediately stopped and glared at him.
"Miyuki it's not worth it! Run get our of—" eye patch decided to pull his arms even further back and drew a little blood from his neck.
"Shut up brat!"
"Ok I'll do it just leave him alone!" I cried. He only smiled and motioned me to come with him. He pushed Naruto in front of him and I followed behind, His soldiers behind me just in case I did something stupid. He led us down a spiral stair case that seems to go on forever. The only light we had were the torches that lined up on the walls. After about 20 minutes of walking down the stairs, we stopped at a door.
"Open it." eye patch ordered one of his soldiers to do. He nodded and when he opened the door we were greeted by an old man with long white hair and he almost looked like Old Man. (the third Hokage)
"Is this the one who can bring back our leader, Scar?" he asked.
"Yes my lord this is the women who knows alchemy more than I do."
"Alchemy? What the hell is Alchemy! Hey—hey watch where you're putting the sword!" I turned around and saw that my brother was brought to his knees and more swords were presented at his neck."
"HEY LEAVE MY—"
"Brother alone? I believe I can't do that. If we let him go then we can't make you do human transmutation." I froze when he said that.
"H-human Transmutation? Are you out of your mind! It's impossible to do!" I yelled
"What's human transmutation?" my brother asked
"It's another way to bring back a human from death." He said smiling insanely at me
"And you know it's impossible to do! Why can't you use the eye patch guy! He can use Alchemy!"
"But you have more experience than him and not to mention you have read how to do human transmutation." He sneered at me. "and if you don't cooperate then we'll just kill your brother." He nodded to the guards holding Naruto and one of them and a deeper cut than Scar to show that they weren't kidding."
"ALRIGHT! I'll do it, just don't kill him. Please." I begged
"Very well. Come we have the preparations ready." He led me towards the back of the room where there were curtains. He motioned his guards to open it and when they did, I saw that they had the transmutation circle already drawn, and all the ingredients needed for it.
35 liters of Water
20 Kg of Carbon
4 Liters of Ammonia
1.5 Kg of Lime
800g of Phosphorus
250g of Salt
100g of Niter
80g of Sulfur
7.5g of Fluorine
5g of Iron and
3g of Silicon (A.N I'm not so sure if it's right or not but I think it's pretty close)
"You knew I would do it wouldn't you?" I accused him. He only chuckled
"Yes we heard rumors that you were very close with your brother and would do anything to save each other so we devised a plan to raid his village and take him by force. We knew you would come to his rescue." I growled at him knowing that he had his facts right. "So shall we begin?"
"Who am I trying to bring back?" I sighed knowing that they did have the advantage.
"Our dear leader whose power was greater than all of your villages put together and with him back alive we can rule the world!" he threw me photo of a man that reminded me too much of Orochimaru but he had blonde hair instead and his eyes were blue.
"You're crazy you know that! Don't do it Miyuki!" Naruto yelled across the room.
"Make him quiet!" the old man yelled. With a flick of Scar's hand my brother was unconscious. "So please begin or he'll pay the price." He threatened and walked a couple of feet away.
"This is probably the most stupidest thing you've ever done Miyuki." I mumbled to myself. Now normally I wouldn't have done this at all. I would be fighting to get out right now but no they had to capture my brother and use him as a hostage. Damn it all! I walked to the center of the circle I bit my thumb to put some blood into the sodium and went back to the edge of the circle.
"Get on with it!" the old man yelled
"Ok, ok." I mumbled and I slapped my hands on the ground and the transmutation began. Lighting surrounded the circle and a strange feeling came over me, telling me to run away, as if my something worse than death was coming. Suddenly in the middle of the circle, an eye just like my Rinnegan, came out and along with it black hands. They came towards me grabbing me and pulling me towards the center. I don't remember much after that but I could vaguely remember my brother yelling my name out, the foreigners cheering in joy and I could feel the pain the hands brought. It felt like they were ripping my soul from my body and I screamed in terror and pain when I saw my hand starting to disappear along with the rest of my body. What the hell did I just do?
Naruto's POV
"MIYUKI!" I shouted as I saw black hands grab her and pulled her in. She was screaming in pain and I couldn't take it any more I was breaking out and taking her back home. Quickly while the men were cheering I slammed my head against the nearest soldier I saw. While he fell I quickly broke free of my captures and ran towards the weird circle thingy hopping to save my sister. It seemed luck wasn't on my side today because in less than a second another bright light came from the circle blinding me and I didn't hear my sister any more. I dreaded the worst and I ran even faster towards the circle. When the light did die down all I saw was her wedding ring but no Miyuki.
"MIYUKI! MIYUKI! MIYUKI WHERE ARE YOU!" I shouted. A figure much closer to the middle caught my eye and I ran to it hopping that it was my sister.
"Miyuki are you ok?" I asked turning the body over hopping that she wasn't greatly injured but I was greeted by a skeleton that barely looked human and was bleeding profoundly instead. He or she I couldn't tell lifted its head up towards me and in a raspy voice it asked
"H-home?" before the neck snapped and it died right in my arms. I froze there wondering if that was my sister or not and if it was, had she just died right there and then.
"It seemed it didn't work my men, maybe another person can do this right." The old man said in a sad voice.
"It didn't work because YOU CAN'T BRING BACK THE DEAD DAMN IT!" I yelled at him. He was the reason that, that creature lying in the puddle of its own blood that could be my sister or that she died trying to bring it back to life. I needed some blood and it was coming from him.
"Please, we can bring the dead back, she just wasn't strong—"not even letting him finished his sentence I quickly ran towards him in a yellow flash and grabbed him by his throat.
"You killed my sister!" I growled at him squeezing my hands around his throat cutting his airway.
"P-p-lease S-sp—are me." he gasped
"No." I said and I crushed his throat killing him instantly.
"MY LORD!" all the servants cried
"KILL HIM!" Scar shouted! But before they could make a move the ceiling above us shook. I could faintly hear the battle cries of my friends and I realize that they were coming to save us.
"It looks like you guys are losing up there against my friends. You guys better surrender or I'll kill you right now." I growled
"Ha like you ever could. If I recall I beat you the—"he stopped in mid sentence because there was something sticking out of his chest.
"W-what?" he choked out.
"Troublesome man. You couldn't just listen to Naruto couldn't you." I heard my friend Shikamaru sigh. He released his shadow technique, leaving Scar to bleed out from his chest. He coughed up blood and he took a step towards me. Quickly I prepared a Rasengan but before I could hit him with it, he fell to the floor bleeding to death.
"Y-y-ou w-will never s-see her again." He whispered. "S-she's g-gone f-f-ore-ever."
"SHUT UP!" I screamed at him "SHE'S NOT DEAD OK SHE'S NOT DEAD!" he only chuckled.
"F-fool." He whispered his final words.
"He killed Scar and our Leader! Kill him!" the soldiers behind me shouted and raised their weapons at Shikamaru and I.
"Crap this is bad. We can't take them all." Shikamaru said calculating the situation. Before they could even advance towards us, we were saved by a very good friend of ours.
"GREAT SICKLE WEASLE TECHNIQUE!" I heard Temari shout and a huge gust of wind blew away the rest of the men (and killing some too) and before they could stand up they were surrounded by Sand and Leaf ninja's.
"Hey Naruto good to see you alive!" I heard my buddy Kiba yell out
"Kiba! I'm glad that you survived the massacre. Did Hinata and—"
"Yeah they made it out ok. They are in Suna right now waiting for us to return. If it wasn't for Miyuki then Hinata would have been dead. Speaking of which, where's Miyuki?" I clenched my fist and I closed my eyes not wanting to cry in front of him.
"T-they made her do a human transmutation or whatever I don't know much about the details. When the technique ended all was left was her ring," I showed it to him, "and that thing." I pointed to where the dead human (at least I think it was human) laid. Kiba looked too shocked to speak.
"So Miyuki's d-dead?" Temari asked hearing my explanation of what happened. I could only nod.
"N-no not Miyuki!" Kiba cried out as did Temari and Shikamaru held her but he was also shedding tears for her too. Finally I let my tears fall as well and I shouted out
"WHY DID YOU HAVE TO TAKE HER!" This was the last time I ever saw my sister, Miyuki Uzumaki, in our world.
Miyuki's POV
At first, there was nothing but darkness when I opened my eyes and for a couple of minutes it stayed like that until I suddenly landed in a white room with a door behind me. The room itself was pure white and it felt a little bit peaceful but it also had a lifeless feeling to it along with loneliness and so many other feelings that I couldn't describe. As I looked up, I saw that the door in front of me had all the villages' symbols on it along with the three eyes known to us. The one on top was the Rinnegan, at the bottom right was the Byakugan, and at the bottom left was the Sharingan and right in the middle was the Alchemy Circle.
Hey. I turned around and I saw a white human figure sitting on the ground. He had no eyes, hair, clothing and the only thing I could see was his mouth and for some strange reason he had only one flesh arm and leg. He was grinning wickedly at me.
"Who are you?" I asked
Oh I'm so glad you asked. He seemed to be overjoyed that I noticed him.
"You didn't answer my question, who are you?" He gave me an even larger smile
You can say I am God, you can say I am the World or the Truth, or Anyone, or Everyone, even You.
"So Truth" that name sounded simple enough to remember "why am I here?" he only smiled at me.
Foolish human this is your punishment for trying to be like god. Then the doors behind me opened and the same black arms came to grab me.
"AH HELL NO!" I screamed as they dragged me back to the gate. I felt the same pain as I did when I preformed the human transmutation. It felt like my soul was being ripped apart from my body but this time I saw the truth about life. The truth behind Jutsu and how to perform them without hands signs, the truth about Alchemy, the truth about bijuus, the truth about the Sharingan, Byakugan and the Rinnegan, the truth about life and so much more and it was too much for my brain.
"Make it stop! Damn it it's too much information!" I screamed. Suddenly I saw a strange white figure at the end of the tunnel. (At least I thought it was the end) as I came closer to it, it took the form of a female that I soon recognized as my mother
"M-mom?" I gasped I reached out towards her, "MOM!" just as I was about to grab her I was back in the white room. My hand was still out stretched and I was gasping for air.
Like what you see? Truth asked me.
"What was that?" I shakily said "what was that at the end of the tunnel? WHY WAS MY MOTHER THERE?" I screamed
What you saw was the Truth. What you saw was what you could only afford.
A-afford? I didn't pay anything." I said he smiled so big that it was not normal.
Oh you did. When you do human transmutation you must pay a price. But what should your payment be? He wondered out loud and for some reason I was scared.
You seem to be very close to your family I wonder….
"If you touch my family I swear I will kill—"
Or should I kill you here right now? He smiled at that idea and by now I was trembling with fear.
Get it together Miyuki. You can't let him see that you are scared.
Ah I have the perfect idea. He clapped his hands together and laughed. He snapped his fingers and the gate behind me disappeared and another gate took its place.
"What's going on?" I asked "Why is the gate different?"
I've decided to make you unable to go back to your family…ever. My eyes widen and I shouted at him
"NO! PLEASE ANYTHING BUT THAT! DON'T TAKE ME AWAY FROM MY FAMILY!"
Have a nice new life in Amestris. He laughed at me while the new Gate opened and the same black hands grabbed me.
"NO LET ME GO, LET ME GO! NARUTO, GARRA, MEI, WINRY THEY NEED ME! I CANT ABANDON THEM!" Truth just laughed harder and the Gate closed on me before I could do anything.
Naruto, Garra, Mei, Winry…..I'm so sorry. I don't think I can keep my promise this time.
So how did you like it? Was it good or bad? Should I continue or not. Please review and tell me your opinions they really matter to me.
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Midnightmich