The Jaguar's

Prologue
The Feared One's

In the time of 1925 there was a man named Rafael Fiorenza. Rafael was a fierce wizard who used his powers to capture people. When they were captured they became his slaves for life. Some of them were trained to be his guard or just to be his fighters. (He liked to make people fight to the death for his own fun.) Some were just simple house keepers. The others were for his personal fun, if you know what I mean. You don't? Well let me give you a hint. They were all women. Anyway, the people who've heard of us call us the 'Feared Ones'. But you can call us the Jaguar's. But hey, no reason to be scared. We're just bloodthirsty killers who come in the night to make you our slaves for all eternity. Wierd huh. By the way, my name is May Maple and I am a Jaguar.

okay like don't kill me if you don't like it. this is my first time writing a story kay. tell me what you think i need to work on or what i did well. thanx so much for reading. c ya