I DO NOT OWN THE LITTLE MERMAID OR SQUARE ENIX CHARACTERS!!!!! This is a make over of the story of the Little Mermaid. A make over is the redo of a original story with different things, such as settings, characters, lines. I was inspired by a friend on DA that does it a lot. Enjoy.


The Little Mermaid

Chapter I

A Concert Unattened

A shining light shone bright and on, like a shining star in the sky. Yet this was no star. It was a grand kingdom deep below the seas surface. The merpeople of Atlantica were busy rushing to the castle and getting their seats for the concert they had heard about the weeks before.

The trumpets played loudly as a row of red fish lined up before a smaller golden fish appeared. He coughed twice before clearing his throat.

"His Royal Highness, King Xemnas!" The crowd roared as from out of a hole near the roof, a large shell pulled by three dolphins appeared along with the king seated nicely in it, his triton glowing in his grip. As the dolphins pulled him down and then back up to the ceiling, he used his triton to make the chandelier come to life.

"And presenting the distinguished court composer, Horatio Felonious Ignacious Crustaceous Saix!" The smaller fish announced joyfully. Then coming from the same entrance as the king, a smaller shell was being pulled by two gold fish with a blue crab waving and blowing kisses to the crowd.

The gold fish then whinnied and swam up next to the king, unsuspectedly.

"I'm really looking forward to this performance Saix." Xemnas said happily as his shell was then planted firmly on a rock ledge, giving him perfect view of the stage.

"Your majesty! This will be the finest concert I have ever conducted. Your daughters, they will be spectacular!" Saix boosted and smiled widely, only before his fish whinnied again and made his shell turn upside down.

"Yes. And especially my little Roxas." Xemnas whispered to his right hand crab, making sure that the audience didn't hear.

"Yes, yes, of course. He does have the most beautiful voice. ……..If only he'd show up for rehearsals once in a while." Saix mumbled the last part as he had his fish swim him down to the stage.

The lights went low and the spot light followed Saix all the way to the stage where he then pulled out his book of notes. He straightened his shell a little then tapped his mallet against the podium and began to wave the mallet around, causing the band to begin the tune.

Ah, we are the daughters of Xemnas. Great Father who loves us and named us well. Aquata. Andrina.

Arista. Rattina. Radella. Alana. And then there is the youngest in his musical debut. Our seventh little brother. We're presenting him to you. To sing a song Saix wrote. His voice is like a bell.

He's our brother Roxa….AAAAHHHH!!

Saix gasped and gulped as he saw the empty shell for only moments before looking up at the king.

"ROXAS!?" Xemnas roared as his triton glowed and fist slammed onto the ring of his shell.

*****************End Chapter I - A Concert Unattended *************************


Authors Note - Yay! I finally put this on here. It's rather popular on DA so I wanted to put it up here too. And Roxas you are in big trouble! HAHA!

Enjoy Everyone! I love writing this story! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD